Discussion on fanfic: Neo-Magister Saga
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Posted 6/18/08
Well guys, for those who enjoys my story, I kinda went ahead and made a new forum topic so everyone can give me some peer critics. I don't want people to post in the actual fanfic post since it might mess up the other readers. So please. Hit me with every critiques, opinions, and, if you want, ratings and reviews.
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Posted 6/20/08
OK, just reading it so far I fail to see much resemblance to Negima or anything like it. It's like you went and created your own story and it's rocks! Is there gonna be a chapter or something explaining how the whole light entity vs dark entity situation started and how their powers are transferred throughout the generations? Just wondering because that sounds like it'd be a pretty good read.
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Posted 6/22/08

Mon937 wrote:

OK, just reading it so far I fail to see much resemblance to Negima or anything like it. It's like you went and created your own story and it's rocks! Is there gonna be a chapter or something explaining how the whole light entity vs dark entity situation started and how their powers are transferred throughout the generations? Just wondering because that sounds like it'd be a pretty good read.


Yea there's gonna be the entire cosmos versus chaos style plot line but I'm working on developing the plot lines so everything will be clearer. Don't wanna leave anyone in the dark when they read my story ^^

Ohh and the entire based on Negima thing, I just use their idea of having a humongous harem behind the main character lol. Well, I'm gonna be releasing chapter 3 soon and this time, there might be a cliff hanger. We all know stories need cliff hangers to be interesting. Chapter 4 will follow so people wouldn't start PMing me
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Posted 6/22/08

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Mon937 wrote:

OK, just reading it so far I fail to see much resemblance to Negima or anything like it. It's like you went and created your own story and it's rocks! Is there gonna be a chapter or something explaining how the whole light entity vs dark entity situation started and how their powers are transferred throughout the generations? Just wondering because that sounds like it'd be a pretty good read.


Yea there's gonna be the entire cosmos versus chaos style plot line but I'm working on developing the plot lines so everything will be clearer. Don't wanna leave anyone in the dark when they read my story ^^

Ohh and the entire based on Negima thing, I just use their idea of having a humongous harem behind the main character lol. Well, I'm gonna be releasing chapter 3 soon and this time, there might be a cliff hanger. We all know stories need cliff hangers to be interesting. Chapter 4 will follow so people wouldn't start PMing me


WHY!? Why do ppl love creating cliffhangers!? They're cruel! It's like dangling a piece of bacon in my face and saying I can't eat it.
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Posted 6/28/08
I've just uploaded my newest chapter of Neo-Magister Saga. The third main female cast is making her appearance and she's my favorite one ^^ (Based off of my favorite character in a fighting game). It's another cliffhanger chapter but I will not be uploading anymore new chapters until AX passes.
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Posted 6/28/08

seiryuu18 wrote:

I've just uploaded my newest chapter of Neo-Magister Saga. The third main female cast is making her appearance and she's my favorite one ^^ (Based off of my favorite character in a fighting game). It's another cliffhanger chapter but I will not be uploading anymore new chapters until AX passes.


AX? What's AX?
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Posted 6/28/08

Mon937 wrote:


seiryuu18 wrote:

I've just uploaded my newest chapter of Neo-Magister Saga. The third main female cast is making her appearance and she's my favorite one ^^ (Based off of my favorite character in a fighting game). It's another cliffhanger chapter but I will not be uploading anymore new chapters until AX passes.


AX? What's AX?


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Posted 6/28/08

seiryuu18 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:


seiryuu18 wrote:

I've just uploaded my newest chapter of Neo-Magister Saga. The third main female cast is making her appearance and she's my favorite one ^^ (Based off of my favorite character in a fighting game). It's another cliffhanger chapter but I will not be uploading anymore new chapters until AX passes.


AX? What's AX?


Anime Expo in So-Cal


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Posted 6/29/08
Since no one post here other than Mon, I unlocked my fanfic forum for everyone to post on. please read and review my fanfic. I poured in time for this ><
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