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Posted 6/28/08

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Mon937 wrote:


teresa6821 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:

Look, I see that ppl are reading it, but are not reviewing and I'd like to ask you to plz review it and hit me up with any problems you see or any suggestions you have. You don't have to, but I will continue to post new chapters for those of you kind enough to read. Again, thank you

theres nothing wrong with it though it so perfect.^^



I'm talkin' about future chapters. I'm not perfect, so I'm bound to slip up at some point.

well i aint much of a profesional crictic so i really dont know whats pefect and what not. To me i think the story is pretty good so far and better yet to come.^^


None of us really are, but we can offer up our opinions to each other and improve based on that. And thanx 4 the comment.

yup yup.^^ it kinda confusing though but thats cause i'm stupid and slow if i reread a few times i like would finally get it.^^

Posted 6/28/08

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zanpankuto.. now i see its a sword. I like his zanpankuto she seems awsome ha love the " son of a whore!!!"^^ ha LOL.^^


Yeah, I picked that up from my stepdad. He LOVES sayin' that instead of the usual son of a bitch. I don't know why.

I allways say to my brother son of a cracker since he allways seems lighter than all of us and in chapter two with the "what the fuck" didint now there would be swearing even better my dad says though what the pig eating fuck.^^

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Chapter 10: Human Again



Chapter 11: A shocker



Chapter 12: Raid

Posted 6/28/08

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OMG just read chapter two. waht are pluses again and i rember seeing the chains connected to the chest before. i really need to watch and read bleach. its sorta confusing but i do know what hollows are. But i can certainly imagine it. i so want tot draw this just the action movement would be difficult but i love challanges.^^


pluses are dead ppl who have some attachment to the living world still so they don't move to the other side. In those cases a shinigami (soul reaper) will help them along. Tell me what was confusing and I'll try to clear it up. I hear ya about the challenges and I'd love for ya to take this one.


I'll start today and gonna get right to it.^^ i'm already gonna do other characters for other people yes never had so much drawing to do!!! YAAAAAAAYY!!!!!^^
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Posted 6/28/08

teresa6821 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:


teresa6821 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:


teresa6821 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:

Look, I see that ppl are reading it, but are not reviewing and I'd like to ask you to plz review it and hit me up with any problems you see or any suggestions you have. You don't have to, but I will continue to post new chapters for those of you kind enough to read. Again, thank you

theres nothing wrong with it though it so perfect.^^



I'm talkin' about future chapters. I'm not perfect, so I'm bound to slip up at some point.

well i aint much of a profesional crictic so i really dont know whats pefect and what not. To me i think the story is pretty good so far and better yet to come.^^


None of us really are, but we can offer up our opinions to each other and improve based on that. And thanx 4 the comment.

yup yup.^^ it kinda confusing though but thats cause i'm stupid and slow if i reread a few times i like would finally get it.^^



I highly doubt you're slow or stupid, but I'm honored that you think it's interesting enough to even want to read a second time
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Posted 6/28/08

teresa6821 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:


teresa6821 wrote:

zanpankuto.. now i see its a sword. I like his zanpankuto she seems awsome ha love the " son of a whore!!!"^^ ha LOL.^^


Yeah, I picked that up from my stepdad. He LOVES sayin' that instead of the usual son of a bitch. I don't know why.

I allways say to my brother son of a cracker since he allways seems lighter than all of us and in chapter two with the "what the fuck" didint now there would be swearing even better my dad says though what the pig eating fuck.^^



Yeeah, I'm kinda loose with swearing anywhere I can be, and I don't have my parents reading over my shoulder every time I type, so I'm as loose as can be when I write stories
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OMG WHAT HAPPENED?? oh and whats a shunpo???
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OMG WHAT HAPPENED?? oh and whats a shunpo???


shunpo is a type of shinigami move that allows them to move at extremely high speeds. And I'm getting the next chap up right now, so bear with me for a sec.
Posted 6/28/08

Mon937 wrote:


teresa6821 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:


teresa6821 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:


teresa6821 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:

Look, I see that ppl are reading it, but are not reviewing and I'd like to ask you to plz review it and hit me up with any problems you see or any suggestions you have. You don't have to, but I will continue to post new chapters for those of you kind enough to read. Again, thank you

theres nothing wrong with it though it so perfect.^^



I'm talkin' about future chapters. I'm not perfect, so I'm bound to slip up at some point.

well i aint much of a profesional crictic so i really dont know whats pefect and what not. To me i think the story is pretty good so far and better yet to come.^^


None of us really are, but we can offer up our opinions to each other and improve based on that. And thanx 4 the comment.

yup yup.^^ it kinda confusing though but thats cause i'm stupid and slow if i reread a few times i like would finally get it.^^



I highly doubt you're slow or stupid, but I'm honored that you think it's interesting enough to even want to read a second time

Hells yeah i gonna re ead it though if i want to get the characters and movement drawn just the way it was written. i dont want to exagerate much and i have to examin everything which i love doing.^^ it my job as an illistrator if i want to gets it.^^ but even if some parts are confusing to me its still really good.

Posted 6/28/08
I wonder how u print this out i wants to owns it in my own hands!!! dont misundertsand i aint gonna steal it or anything i just want to reread as many times i can so i actually get exactly everything so i can draw the characters just like u written them as.
Posted 6/28/08

Mon937 wrote:


teresa6821 wrote:

OMG WHAT HAPPENED?? oh and whats a shunpo???


shunpo is a type of shinigami move that allows them to move at extremely high speeds. And I'm getting the next chap up right now, so bear with me for a sec.

OHHHHH i see then.^^ i have to look over the art of bleach though and try to get it somewhat similiar since it is a fanfic. i have to see what the hollows look like i know (in my opinion) they look somewhat like clowns since i did read the first four volumes and only the first ep (sad right?) of bleach.

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Chapter 13: Family



Chapter 14: First Encounter



Chapter 15: Meet Diz

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Posted 6/28/08

teresa6821 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:


teresa6821 wrote:

OMG WHAT HAPPENED?? oh and whats a shunpo???


shunpo is a type of shinigami move that allows them to move at extremely high speeds. And I'm getting the next chap up right now, so bear with me for a sec.

OHHHHH i see then.^^ i have to look over the art of bleach though and try to get it somewhat similiar since it is a fanfic. i have to see what the hollows look like i know (in my opinion) they look somewhat like clowns since i did read the first four volumes and only the first ep (sad right?) of bleach.



Eh, it's good enough for the most basic of understanding. Hm, never thought of Hollows like clowns. That would be some freaky circus
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Chapter 16: Bring Kim Back!



Chapter 17: Dive Into the Past
Purely character development. If you're not into that sorta thing, then skip



Chapter 18: Dive into the Past (pt.2)
Purely character development. If you're not into that sorta thing, then skip

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Posted 6/28/08

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I wonder how u print this out i wants to owns it in my own hands!!! dont misundertsand i aint gonna steal it or anything i just want to reread as many times i can so i actually get exactly everything so i can draw the characters just like u written them as.


I'm pretty sure you could copy and paste it in a word document. And I didn't think you were tryin' ta. Never even crossed my mind
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