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WOAH!!
poor Ryosuke!!
OMGosh!!
your story reminds me of a girl in my school who has leukemia..
she went to school though she's sick..
now she's dead..

More please?? ^-^
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wee!! ive finished my part 8!!
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I've read it already!!
it's really nice!!

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i wrote some for the next chap..but i need to study for test so i'll sneak on to post more parts ..muhahaha~
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YAY!!
can't wait!! ^-^
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do well on your test btw!!
I wish you good luck!! ^-^
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Ch. 4
Ryosuke was lying on his bed thinking. He was probably thinking about if he would be able to blend in with the crowd at skool. He walked over to his skool bag to get ready for skool tomorrow. He packed his orange and white striped pencil case, textbooks, notebooks, and his good luck charm he bought at the Shinto Shrine. And of course he couldn’t forget his medicine that had to be taken after every meal. He checked his bag if he forgot anything and turned out the lights. He was lying on his bed staring at the ceiling feeling comfortable at home, when an animal jumped onto his bed. Startled, Ryosuke shrieked and his mom came rushing into the room.

Mom: What happened?! Are you okay? Do I need to call Doctor Natsumi??!
Ryosuke: *laughed* I was just surprised when Kuu jumped onto my bed. *pets his dog Kuu*
Mom: *relieved* Oh, okay, good, well goodnight honey. Sweet dreams *kisses his forehead*
Ryosuke: Goodnight mom. *yawn*

As Ryosuke’s mom was leaving his room, she could hear his sleeping breathing (is that how u say it? lol) and smiled.

The next day, Ryosuke woke up extra early to get ready for skool. He got dressed and went downstairs.
Ryosuke: Good morning mom, what’s for breakfast?
Mom: Good morning honey, we are having rice, miso soup, and natto (fermented beans).
Ryosuke: Oh~ awesome.

His mom hands him the food.
Ryosuke: Itadakimasu~ Un~ oichi~ :D
Mom: *laughs* really? That’s good.
Ryosuke: Well compared to the food at the hospital, this is a feast! *gives his mom the rice bowl* More please. *smiles sweetly* (*melts* his smile.. kyaa~ xD)
Mom: Okay, Okay *puts more rice in the bowl and hands it to Ryosuke* Don’t over do it hun, we don’t want you to get sick.
Ryosuke: I know, but, it’s just soo delicious!
Mom: Sou ka?
Ryosuke: *nods*
Mom: *laughs a little* Well you better wash your face and brush your teeth, or you’ll be late for skool!
Ryosuke: *eyes wide* It’s already that time?
Mom: Yes
Ryosuke: *eats his rice in a hurry and goes to the bathroom to wash his face and brush his teeth*

Ryosuke looked at the mirror, staring at his head. He forgot how long it was since he looked into a mirror. He sighed and started washing his face. After he was done washing his face, he reached for his toothbrush, but it wasn’t there. He yelled for his mom, and she came rushing in holding a new toothbrush.

Mom: Sorry, I had to throw out the old one cuz I was afraid that fungus would grow on it.
Ryosuke: *sticks out his tongue* eww fungus… Well thanks *starts to brush his teeth*

His mom exited out of the bathroom to wake his sisters up and to wash the dishes. Ryosuke went to his room, after he was done getting ready, he put his mask on over his face and put his bandana on his head. He was ready to go to skool. His dad drove him to skool, since he wasn’t allowed to walk to skool. On the way to skool, his father started talking to him.

Dad: Uhm, Ryosuke.
Ryosuke: Yea dad?
Dad: Are you sure your alright to go to skool?
Ryosuke: Yea… why?
Dad: hmm, I’m just so worried that your sickness might get worse, that’s all
Ryosuke: pfft, don’t be a worrywart, Doctor Natsumi even gave me permission to go, so I must be fine.
Dad: hmm…

The conversation ended there, and they drove to skool in silence. When they reached the skool, his dad told him to be careful, and to tell the teacher right away if he was feeling ill.

Ryosuke: Alright dad, I promise.
Dad: That’s my boy.

Ryosuke waved to his dad while he drove away. He gulped when he entered the gates of his skool.

Ryosuke: *thinking* Woah~ was my skool this big? Hmm…*walks into the building*

Ryosuke walks to his shoe box to put on his inside shoes. As he was putting them on, Daiki, Chinen, and Yuto spotted him.

Daiki: WHA?!
Chinen: Is that?!
Yuto: RYOSUKE?!

Ryosuke heard his name called out and looked towards Daiki, Chinen, and Yuto.

Ryosuke: Oh, hey guys! *grins*
Chinen: What are you doing here?!
Yuto: Yea~ aren't you supposed to be in the hospital?
Daiki: I must be dreaming!
Ryosuke: *laughs* My doctor approved of me going to skool! isn't that great?
Daiki: OF COURSE! gawsh~ I missed you!
Chinen: Me too!
Yuto: Me three!
Ryosuke: Haha~

Fumiya spotted Yuto, Chinen, and Daiki talking to Ryosuke and walked over to them.

Fumiya: Woah~ who's this baldy?
Yuto: He's not bald! he's just really sick, and had to have chemotherapy, which made him lose his hair.
Fumiya: Oh, if he's that sick, why isn't he in the hospital where he belongs? *covers his mouth* I don't wanna get his sickness.
Ryosuke: Don't worry, my illness isn't contagious.
Fumiya: Then why are you wearing a mask?
Ryosuke: This mask is so that I won't breathe in bacteria, and get more sick.
Fumiya: pfft.. *starts kicking soccer ball* well... smell you later

Fumiya walks away.

Chinen: What a jerk.. sorry bout that Ryosuke, he isn't always like this, really.
Ryosuke: It's okay *smiles*
Yuto: Why I outta.. lemme at him! lemme at him! *running towards Fumiya but his shirt is grabbed by Daiki*
Daiki: Chillax dude.

They all started to laugh. They hadn't realised, that people (the students) were crowding around staring at Ryosuke and whispering to each other.

Student 1: Look at him, he's got no hair.
Student 2: I heard he has cancer.
Student 1: How awful, but why isn't he at the hospital?
Student 3: I heard, he begged his doctor to go, so he could spread the disease to everyone.
Student 2: How low.

Ryosuke and the others realised about the people standing around them and stopped laughing.

Ryosuke: *gulp* Why are they all whispering? and staring at me like that?
Chinen: I don't know, but let's go.
Ryosuke: Okay...

Daiki, Chinen, Ryosuke, and Yuto all walk up the stairs to go to there homeroom.

~End~
Will the staring and whispering end? Or will it continue? Find out in the next chapter ^_^
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I think this is the longest chapter i have ever written xD
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i watched the movie "Yuuki" and now.. i have idea's flowing through my head .. haha..
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w0w!!! sugoi!!

i didnt know that Ryosuke kun is Bald!!!!
wahuhuh poor ryosuke!!!

well its really a touching fanfic!! it makes me cry!

kono namida nageki mirai e no steppu
[hahah real face]
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Posted 6/21/08
NoooOOOOOOOOOOOooo!!
I'm gonna kill those students and Fumiya!! grrrrrrrrrrr!!
Poor Ryosuke!!
I seriously think the this would make a good drama!! ^-^

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Posted 6/22/08
Wow.. This is the very first fanfic that i read.. Seriously its nice ne!
I think i have to read other's fanfics as well.. :)

Everyone's fanfic is so great!! Am so jealous.
My fanfic is a crap.
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Yeah!!
all fanfics here are AWESOME!! ^-^
and this one is really touching~!!
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I agree!!! Do you also wrote fanfics here hsj-chan?
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I write fanfics..but I don't post it here!! ^-^
it's boring anyway!!
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