Chapter 4 "The Princess of FLames/Oceans Join" Part 2
Posted 6/20/08 , edited 6/20/08
Part 2

“What up Miyu Sya how u guys been doin” Eri says happily then smiles. Miyu and Sya are backed away from Eri speechless.

“H-how did you get here?” Miyu asks nervously.

“You know? I don’t have no clue at all I just landed here I think because of a tree?” Eri said confused.

“RUU!” Miyu and Sya says loudly.

“Ruu?” Eri asks

“Yeah its like this special tree or something that got us here” Sya says looking unsure about her answer.

“Wait? If Eri is here does that mean the others are to?” Miyu asks putting her finger to her mouth and looking up thinking.

“I hate to this but probably” Sya says depressed and sighs.

*AH! What are we going to do then we have to find them” Miyu says panicked.

“Calm down Miyu its going to be alright we will find them sooner or later” Sya says trying to calm Miyu.

*Shea and Tear are thinking* (they forgot we were here…….)

“Anyway Miyu right now we should focus on Kuroda and find the problem why were here?” Sya says seriously.

“Ill have to agree” Miyu looks downa dn sighs.

“Just sit down and relax…jeez you guys worry so much for little kids….shouldn’t it be the other way around” Shea says annoyed rolling her eyes.

“Yes!” Miyu and Sya says leaning back in there seats kinda pouting.

While Eri, who’s till doesn’t know what’s going on, sits there clueless.

At Ku-chan….X O

“AH!” Ku is in the water very deep down where u cant see and is drowning and running out of air in the darkness ball. Suddenly she passes out. Right before the evil spirit can enter her a mermaid comes and slaps or hits if you prefer it, the dark ball and the dark ball breaks in half with Ku floating to the bottom. The mermaid then grabs her and heads up to the Cave Of Barticul. “P-please be alright Kuroda” Maristelle says while getting to the cave as fast as she can with a worried face.

Maristelle finally makes it and gives Ku CPR!. Ku coughs badly and loudly coughing out water. Maristelle sighs a sigh of relief and says happily “KURODA IM SO GLAD YOUR OK!” Maristelle hugs Kuroda on the ground.

Ku is surprised “H-how are you here” Kuroda says surprised.

“Well I was just wondering the oceans and I was suddenly transported here?” Maristelle says says cutely.

“EHH!!!!” Kuroda gets up in shoke “SNAP! THIS MEANS THE OTHERS ARE HERE TO!” Kuroda goes around panicking.

Maristlle just sits there in the round circle of the water and stares at Kuroda.

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pringles07/Eri
Soulnirvana/Shea
xX-InocentDeath-Xx/''Tear''
michellewjy/Miyu
GaaraILWsya/Sya
maristellyrub/maristelle
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Uh, were those question marks intentional? I though they were just making a common sentence and then there's a question mark so I'm completely thrown off. Other than that though, good job. Keep improving and, in turn, improve your story. Just one question though, are we ever gonna find out what the ball of dark was?
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iz maristlle a gurl or boy cuz then cpr iz like givng someone a kiss so um..... im not into gurl and gurl but thats sorta wierded me out der
Posted 6/20/08

vaneli wrote:

iz maristlle a gurl or boy cuz then cpr iz like givng someone a kiss so um..... im not into gurl and gurl but thats sorta wierded me out der


CPR is used to save someones life not to have a kiss idiot..........(Maristelle is a GIRL!! and she had to or i would have died jeezzz)'
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dun call me an idiot!!!!!! my cuzin iz a lifeguard at teh beach so i kno wut cpr iz n it iz givin someone like a kiss bcuz teh persons lips r youchin teh othr persons lips.
Posted 7/24/08

Mon937 wrote:

Uh, were those question marks intentional? I though they were just making a common sentence and then there's a question mark so I'm completely thrown off. Other than that though, good job. Keep improving and, in turn, improve your story. Just one question though, are we ever gonna find out what the ball of dark was?


Ball of Darkness: Is a evil force embeded into a ball traping someone inside..

It can kill someone or be used to posses someone X D
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Posted 7/24/08

kodieloiler wrote:


Mon937 wrote:

Uh, were those question marks intentional? I though they were just making a common sentence and then there's a question mark so I'm completely thrown off. Other than that though, good job. Keep improving and, in turn, improve your story. Just one question though, are we ever gonna find out what the ball of dark was?


Ball of Darkness: Is a evil force embeded into a ball traping someone inside..

It can kill someone or be used to posses someone X D


Oh! That's understandable
Posted 7/24/08

kodieloiler wrote:

Ball of Darkness: Is a evil force embeded into a ball traping someone inside..

It can kill someone or be used to posses someone X D


Fascinating technique!
Posted 7/24/08

hongyinyu wrote:


kodieloiler wrote:

Ball of Darkness: Is a evil force embeded into a ball traping someone inside..

It can kill someone or be used to posses someone X D


Fascinating technique!


Oh be quiet.........i couldnt come up with a better explaination..im not feeling very imagenative X P *goes and poutz* you make it up tehn..it'll sound better if u do it anyway
Posted 7/25/08

kodieloiler wrote:

Oh be quiet.........i couldnt come up with a better explaination..im not feeling very imagenative X P *goes and poutz* you make it up tehn..it'll sound better if u do it anyway


I meant, if I could use it on... *eyes Mon then looks away*
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Posted 7/25/08

hongyinyu wrote:


kodieloiler wrote:

Oh be quiet.........i couldnt come up with a better explaination..im not feeling very imagenative X P *goes and poutz* you make it up tehn..it'll sound better if u do it anyway


I meant, if I could use it on... *eyes Mon then looks away*


what was that look for?
Posted 7/26/08

Mon937 wrote:

what was that look for?


Oh nothing that you would need to worry upon.
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Posted 7/26/08

hongyinyu wrote:


Mon937 wrote:

what was that look for?


Oh nothing that you would need to worry upon.


But you know I'm gonna end up worryin' anyway
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