Post Reply HEARTBREAK..... IF YOU ALLOW IT (NEED FEEDBACK ON THIS!!!)
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Posted 6/20/08
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Heartbreak, if you allow it
By: Emily M

Love sinks deep into the heart,
when you allow it.
Love can make your face glow,
when you allow it.
Love can set your mind free,
if you allow it.
Love says the unspoken,
if you allow it.
Love can replenish the soul,
if you allow it.
Love exhibits a warm breeze,
if you allow it.
Love flows with joy,
if you allow it.
Love can sink into the heart,
if you allow it.
And love can break your heart to pieces,
but only if you allow it.
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Posted 6/20/08
thats true. =] nice work on this. really a good piece
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Posted 6/21/08
that was great u did good
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Posted 6/21/08
true. very true. love the poem.
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Posted 6/22/08
hey..well to me it was okay but u kan do realy better than that but it has a nice meaning out of it..
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