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Posted 6/21/08 , edited 6/21/08
can you write a short story of any kind? I don't mind if you aren't good or you have word problems...I want to read it no matter how you do it.

You can do it not so long like a summarize story.
Unexpected things can be a great help you know.
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Posted 6/21/08 , edited 6/21/08

A short story, eh?
I could try I guess...
But, even my 'short stories' end up being 50+ pages long.

Gimme some time, maybe I'll be able to write something short this time...
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Good luck! ^_^
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Here's an update.
The story itself is going well, it seems like a long story, but if I picture it as a short manga/anime, than I think I can do it. Also, if I focus on the idea that "I'm writing it for someone" than my motivation increases.
Of course, every time I get to writing it, I'm tempted to make it longer. And it's so hard to fight the urge...
Another thing, while I'm writing...I'm really tempted to draw it out. But the way I draw isn't up to par with my writing skills just yet. So I'm left with either waiting for an artist to work with, or trying it myself.

If you want, I can show you a little spoiler for what's in store. If you want that is.
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Kouta_XIII wrote:

Here's an update.
The story itself is going well, it seems like a long story, but if I picture it as a short manga/anime, than I think I can do it. Also, if I focus on the idea that "I'm writing it for someone" than my motivation increases.
Of course, every time I get to writing it, I'm tempted to make it longer. And it's so hard to fight the urge...
Another thing, while I'm writing...I'm really tempted to draw it out. But the way I draw isn't up to par with my writing skills just yet. So I'm left with either waiting for an artist to work with, or trying it myself.

If you want, I can show you a little spoiler for what's in store. If you want that is.


I don't think that you must try. I think you would do it. I'm not criticizing you, I'm cheering for you.^_^
If you have time I want to see it.
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Posted 6/28/08 , edited 7/7/08
(Okay, here's something...I tried to make it as short as I possibly could.

Warning: Blood and gore is present. )

Devil Killer

-Phase 1-

"I can't count the number of times I've been in this situation before? It's just another average day for me."

The wind blew strongly, the rain fell heavy, thunder boomed overhead.
A girl was running through the fields of grass, her long dark hair flowing behind her.
Long, black, Spiral Horns at the top of her head.
There was some kind of bone/scale war-helm on her head that seemed to be attached to the horns.
She was wearing a simple Shrine Maiden outfit. The only weird thing was, that parts of the girl's body was covered in what seemed like blood red scaled-armor.
Her left arm was covered completely, having the forearm seem more armored and the hand itself was fully armored have black clawed fingers, they seemed as sharp as blades.
Her right arm however seemed to have a lighter armor rating.
Her legs up to her knees was covered with the same armor as well.
Oh, and part of her neck and cheeks were covered in the same substance.

"When I was young, I believed in God before...but, than I wondered, 'If there's are any sorts of Gods, why would they allow so much suffering?' that's what I wondered...but than I realized the truth..."

There may have been more armor underneath the clothing, but it's not there gonna be a fan-service shot here or something...to all of our disappointment.

Her midnight blue eyes, was staring at something ahead of her, maybe she was chasing something?
And she was...

Two human-like figures were running at speeds that were beyond human...because they weren't human.
"Hurry, it's closing in." Said the one on the left, through gasps of breathe.

"Wait, Aniki, look." The creature stopped suddenly, when noticing it.

"Hm?" The other one skidded to a halt and looked to, "Where'd she go?" He wasn't entirely off guard like the other one.

"I guess she got scared of us, Aniki." He said this despite the fact that they were the ones running. "Right Ani-" He stopped mid-sentence.
It happened so fast, that neither of them would've seen it. It probably didn't even know it had been cut before it was too late...

"God had abandoned us all, and instead we were left with Devils."

The girl had landed behind the one that was talking. Blood on her right hand, a beating object in her heart. She crushed it an instant.

The creature than split in two from the torso, blood sprayed the ground. She held an apathetic expression, turning her attention to the remaining one.

"It's a curse upon my family, my sister said that a long time ago, my ancestor had fallen in love with the most powerful of all Devils, but he left her for dead after bearing his twin boy and girl. She would return six-hundred and sixty-six days later, to exact her revenge. She cut out his heart during a great battle between Devils and Humans...all that was left, was the Devil's and her children, instead of killing them...she realized...she couldn't kill them...instead, she raised them as warriors."

"Y-You..." It backed away slowly, and than broke into a run.

She was standing in it's path there, waiting for the kill.

It let out a grunting sound, turned on it's heel, and went in that direction instead.

But she was standing there as well.

It repeated this process about 4 times, before realizing there was no escape...
It eventually fell on it's own two feet. Staring into the girl's eyes...
"Y-You...you're not a devil like us, but you fight like us...WHAT ARE YOU?!" It shouted out in desperation for an answer.

"My family is so small now. All that's left...is me, and my older brother and sister. Because of my birth, my mother's power was severely weakened and my father was a mere human, there was no way they'd survive, I don't really remember how I survived? What I do remember...it was like living a nightmare, I don't know if I ever woke up."

"....." She didn't respond, she merely moved her right hand towards it's head The hand started pouring out a black Devil's aura, it wasn't just gonna kill this Devil, no...something far worse... "So weak, no challenge at all..." The hand started mutating and shaking. Thunder clapped overhead. "You don't even deserve an honorable death." A black pentagram appeared in her eyes.
"You liked to eat humans don't you?"
Seeing the horror in the Devil's face, she smiled darkly as her right hand touched it's face, at this time it seemed like the face started to get strained, muffled screams were all that was heard.
"A weakling like you is fit to be eaten!"

If this were an Anime, because it's too graphic for younger viewers, the camera angle changes to the shadows. Where you see the the shadow of the girl's arm mutate to an extreme level and than the Devil's shadow be devoured into the hand. Blood would than spray over the shadow, as it would show the girl's reflection, and than thunder would clapped overhead.
The girl stared up at the rain, the rain droplets falling from her cheeks...

"How long do I have to stay in this never ending nightmare?"
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(Tis merely the opening. )
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Posted 6/28/08 , edited 6/28/08
Than again this is turning out to be longer than I originally planned.
Maybe I'll try focusing on the backup called Blood Witches. That one is definitely a one-shot.
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I liked it. ^_^
You're really good at writing stories.
Wow you should become an author.
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Posted 6/29/08
Or I'll end up putting both.

Thanks.
I should become an author, but I'll most likely end up a gensaku-sha. Which is pretty much the same thing, but someone will illustrate the stories I write into mangas.
Either that or I'll end up doing it myself.
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
THE
FUTURE
DEPENDS
on
YOU!

hahahhahahahahhahahaha!

It's your choice to decide I'm only here to read it.
Most likely, what is the story of BLOOD WITCHES?
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Posted 6/29/08 , edited 6/29/08
Since Blood Witches is one of the shortest stories I wanted to create. Think of it as a one-shot that doesn't entirely go anywhere...
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Blood Witches stars the female protagonist Louise Rika Sattelizer, I didn't want to make her a god, devil or an alien...so she's probably a genetically modified human...or an android. It doesn't say.

In the current setting, the male protagonist, Yuuto receives a black letter in his bag.
A rumor going around says that whoever receives the black letter will be taken away to the run-down mansion and be killed by the ghost of the billionaire tyrant who lived there.
So, on a regular day, Yuuto bumps into someone who hands him a red flier of an organization calling themselves Blood Witches that deals with the paranormal and odd jobs.
So, Yuuto follows the instructions on the flier.
And that's where Louise comes in.

Louise is a rather happy and imaginative character, in contrast to Yuuto's apathetic and analytical character.
That is the basics of this story...
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Posted 6/30/08
Interesting......
PLEASE DO CONTINUE IT.
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Posted 7/4/08 , edited 7/4/08
It turned out I made Louise into a seal contractor.
Like those characters who seal some sort of dangerous power in their body.
Hee-hee-hee...

As for Devil Killer.
I'm making it a little longer.
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I can wait for it!
^_^
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sazoe wrote:

I can wait for it!
^_^


Here's better news for you than, I should be done with Blood Witches by today.
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