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Posted 6/23/08 , edited 6/27/08
a novel i have been working on. i havent the time at this exact moment but i will post my Great Walls O' Text later(once i convert them from paper to word doc.) hope you look foreward to it. and sorry for making you wait.
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Posted 6/23/08
I'll be looking forward to it.
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Posted 6/23/08
ok. i hate posting incomplete chapters but my job has prevented me from finishing the word doc.tonight. i will have to do it in the morning. bear with me here.
Posted 6/25/08
can't wait for the new story, we don'thave a real romance drama story here.

so, can we get a short prewiev?
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Posted 6/27/08 , edited 10/4/08
this is the post where the story will be updated. do to my method of writing chaptersin chunks and saving them as individual files. each "episode" is mainly one or more individual chapters. so far as posting them this way goes it makes it more convenient with my schedule

thus i present Remember twilight. a romance novel by yours truly.

Prologue:


Episode 1: A Beautiful Day


Episode 2: My Mistake



Episode 3: A Cruel Joke


Episode 4: Contemplation


Episode 5: A Strange Place




Episode 6: A Strange Girl

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Posted 6/27/08
Yea, I was the first to read it!
I must say I'm impressed by your descriptions and the efford u put into discribing every little detail and emotion. I like the story so far and the plot is really good. We do need a little romance around here.
Mine has some of it, but the story ebolves around a conflict of action rather than solemly around a romance, so I'm sure ppl will love this one. Keep up the good work and cant wait for more!
Posted 6/27/08
yea it sounds interesting so far! lol i like it ;P...and yea like yaidoll said its good to have at least one romance type story here...i utterly failed at my attempt at making a romance/comedy manga...made 16 pages and then didnt know where to go next...haha nice job tho ;P
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Posted 6/28/08
nice one.. definitely worth taking a look at
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Posted 6/28/08
I'm going to be selfish and put manga reading before the actual episode, although I did read the prologue. It's good, plus I think a miko holding a naginata lovingly is a funny image.
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Posted 6/28/08
How old is the priest?
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Posted 6/28/08 , edited 6/28/08

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How old is the priest?



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thanks for noticing that. i would have completely forgotten otherwise.

working on the next episode now. they take a while because i tend to revise them until im satisfied. some point in time im going to edit the prologue and chapter 1. at the request of my brother who is a grammar nazi.
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mafiaman wrote:


The_8th_Sin wrote:

How old is the priest?



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thanks for noticing that. i would have completely forgotten otherwise.

working on the next episode now. they take a while because i tend to revise them until im satisfied. some point in time im going to edit the prologue and chapter 1. at the request of my brother who is a grammar nazi.


You still haven't told me how old the priest is...
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Posted 6/28/08 , edited 7/7/08
this is an update:

i have returned from vacation(the beach ftw ) and have episodes 3 and 4 completed. the only problem is i lost a page of the original document(from chapter 2). i now have to recreate it. i hope to re-finish episode 2 and post it tommarow. i shall also post the next 2 episodes directly after. hopefully this mass update will be ready by tommarow. i am terribly sorry to make you all wait.

-mafiaman
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mafiaman wrote:

this is an update:

i have returned from vacation(the beach ftw ) and have episodes 3 and 4 completed. the only problem is i lost a page of the original document(from chapter 2). i now have to recreate it. i hope to re-finish episode 2 and post it tommarow. i shall also post the next 2 episodes directly after. hopefully this mass update will be ready by tommarow. i am terribly sorry to make you all wait.

-mafiaman


What ! the chap 2 is gone damn ,i'm eager to read your new post ...anyway
you did a really great job on creating a story
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Posted 7/7/08
update: episodes 2 and 3 have now been posted. more to come.

side note: i have decided to revise/rework episode 4 because it doesnt meet my standards. there will be another update with chapter 4 later this week when i am done "operating" on episode 4.
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