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Post Reply The story of Fine and Shade
Posted 7/5/08
took her hand and turned his head as fast as he could. fine wondered, "what in the world?" but then she saw the blush cover his face as he began to say, " s- sorry." he took a deep breath and then exhaled. still holding her hand he began to say...
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Posted 7/6/08
"I, I, I" he kept on mumbling until he said
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Posted 7/6/08
I luv you he said ...quietly then fine turned to him and said REALLY??
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23 / F / In the computer r...
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Posted 7/6/08
Just then a HUGE bear like moster comes out of no where and knocks Fine to the ground
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Posted 7/6/08
then shades kisses fine for her to stay alive with him 4evah
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Posted 7/6/08
she turns around starts walking He grabs her arm gazed at her then kisses her again and the woods suddenly stated showing the dark velvet sky of the night was brighten by the stars and meteor showers
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Posted 7/6/08
*wow vivid imagination!!!* Just then, Rein and Bright got out to the clearing and they gasped, Shade and Fine looked up troubled...
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Posted 7/7/08
He now had to accept that Rein's words about Fine were true. Out of shame and frustation he ran back to the castle leaving Rein to stare after him, standing there confused and upset. Fine walked over to her sister........
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Posted 7/8/08
Fine wanted to say sorry, but her mouth kept her from saying those words out.
'...-" Rein was too surprised to say anything, she kept her back turned from her.
"Well, isn't this perfect?" she said, with nearly a small laughter bursting from her mouth,tears also overflowing from her eyes, and onto the ground,"I got what I wanted, and you got yours, so there's no problem, right?...-"
Rein's hands were shaken by anger, she wanted to slap Fine, for saying those words. Fine wouldn't understand anyway, Rein's feelings towards Prince Bright.
She managed to utter a few words to Fine, "......You-...y-y-" There was tears hitting softly on the ground, followed by little raindrops of rain............
Posted 7/8/08
fine then dropped to her knees, not knowing why. shade looked at her in a confused look, and couldn't tell if she was crying because of the rain. rein then turned, running after prince bright. after that, shade got on one knee and put his hand on fine's back. he realized fine was actually crying/. she mumbled under her breath "..i..i.." shade tried to listen to her then was shocked when she screamed....
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Posted 7/8/08
Black birds flew out of the tops of trees, it was a dark dark night. Rein couldn't find Bright and got back to her room where she sat there staring into the drop-drop-drop of the rain. While Shade...
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Posted 7/8/08
Was trying to calm Fine. He didn't know why but she was screaming and her face had gone pale. He kept trying to get her to tell him what was wrong, but she only said "Darkness" over and and over. They were both soked in the rain but he couldn't get her to move.....
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Posted 7/9/08
Fine turns away and starts to walk.... BUT suddenly shade caught her arm, looking straight in her eyes.
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Posted 7/9/08
Fine tried to pull away but Shade pulled her toward him and hugged her tightly... soon Fine stopped struggling and the rain ceased... Shade whispered...
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Posted 7/10/08
don;t move plese
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