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The Subjugator
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again the post two up was before reading the recent post you made.
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*relieved laugh*...i can't edit or critique too harshly anyways...not a mod and you guys are the best writers on CR i know. ok, no rating. i hated doing that anyway.

thank you in return
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im getting tempted to delete this just so sirb and deth will stop arguing
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deth and joji. difference. I am not a hybrid. I am not a god, dragon, whatever. (Pure weakling human! See? *holds up hands*)
Savior of Twilight
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Everyone of you just needs to shut the hell up and get the fuck along......... This isn't how I envisioned MY damn group........

1. This is for dethreaper............ You may be my co-writer...... you may be the only one capable of pulling our vision to reality....... you may even be one of the greatest writer that I have ever encountered...... but that's it man.......... you are in charge of helping out with the stories, editing, telling use what should be edited and changed...... and finding a way to make sure we get it all done... but man, you are over stretching your boundaries...... this is an open group...... i don't care if you don't think that it's for fun or not man. we are all here to have FUN, chat, write stories, joke around, and MAKE FORUM's........... you can't deny a member of this group for doing something to GET ACTIVE within the group man........... if he wants to be the critique withini the group, then go on and let him..... I for one think it's a great idea (don't get too happy Jojiro, I'm coming for you next)....... so please man, as cool as you are, just chill the hell down and clarify your thoughts with me first before you jump down peoples throats..... this is why i would rather people talk to me first about stuff, because i know you too well and what you would do, should anyone come at you wrong.........

2. This is for Jojiro......... DON'T GO RETALIATING TO DETH, ALL IT WILL DO IS INDUCE A BIGGER FIGHT, WHICH WILL PISS ME OFF MORE AND YELL AT THE BOTH OF YOU............ I'm not saying this is all your fault because i did give you permission ot make this forum....... but you don't need to argue back with people about what I've told you, you can do............ just say, you have no room to yell at me about this because Sirberius (the creator) told me i could do this.............. if they have any further objections just notify me and I'll personally defend you and shut them the hell up..... cause I can't have bullying of any kind within my group..... if I allowed that, then I wouldn't be a very good Leader, would I??? now with that said........... IT WAS COMPLETELY IDIOTIC OF YOU TO ARGUE WITH DETHREAPER......... I TOLD YOU TIME AFTER TIME, DON'T DO IT........ HE IS MORE RUTHLESS THAN I AM........ (unless I've had a bad day and i don't feel like dealing with shit...... which is what you people are about to see if you kepe this shit up)......... next time just tell him to consult me...... he will do it, trust me......... that is all I have to say to you......... just try not to make people feel bad with this critiqueing thing........ AND DON'T WRITE IN THE GODDAMN FORUMS!!!!!!!! (sorry, I just like saying that......... hehehehe....... I know twisted sense of humor).........

3. VALENTINE....... YOU DO NOT HAVE THE AUTHORITY TO DELETE FORUMS. IF YOU DO IT I WILL PERSONLLY STRIP YOU OF YOUR MODERATOR PREVILeGES...... YOU AREN'T ON THE COUNCIL (yet) SO YOU DON'T HAVE THE SAME POWER THAT DETH HAS...... AND NONE OF YOU HAVE THE SAME POWER AS ME..... NO WHERE CLOSE TO IT...........

4. This is for everyone............ GET TEH HELL ALONG........... if ya'll keep on acting like a bunch of ignorant children with your pety arguements I'll strip all of you of your moding previleges....... it is a PREVILEGE to mod, not a right...... even if you are in the Council........... and I know what you are all think, "but you argue and stuff with Sheep"........... well i have this to say.......................... em................................. uh.............. ok I ain't got nothing for that............ just stop it already damnit...........

hahahah pretty dots....... I wonder why i do that........... it's just a damn habit now........... GET ALONG!!!!!! OR THE GROUP GETS DESTROY.................. TRY AND TEST MY PATIENCE AND I GUARANTEE THAT YOU WILL RUE THE DAY YOU DID IT...................
The Subjugator
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just a thought on the last comment ... i have every story on back up so if you do delete the group i have the stories so that isnt a threat to me ... also ... meh you have a point .... but i wasnt threatining him for MAKING the forum but instead i said IF he ATTACKS any of the group members he deals with me ... i dont care if they ask for it or not ... and no you dont seem like an ass to me ... hell i cant call any of you an ass, your doing your job and thats fine. I have nothing against Jojiro at all i just will defend peoples rights to write without fear of people critiquing it ... but i didnt know they gave permission so all is good ... and YEAH DONT ARGUE WITH ME I LOVE TO RETALIATE AND I WILL DO SO WITHOUT HESITATION ... so just say you talked to Sirberius about it right off the bat and ill go to him about it.
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thank you that's all i ask............. and as if I'd destroy this group............ it was too much damn work putting this all together...... like I'd ever just throw away all my hard work..... do you think i am that stupid......
The Innovator
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Sirberius wrote:

Everyone of you just needs to shut the hell up and get the fuck along......... This isn't how I envisioned MY damn group........

1. This is for dethreaper............ You may be my co-writer...... you may be the only one capable of pulling our vision to reality....... you may even be one of the greatest writer that I have ever encountered...... but that's it man.......... you are in charge of helping out with the stories, editing, telling use what should be edited and changed...... and finding a way to make sure we get it all done... but man, you are over stretching your boundaries...... this is an open group...... i don't care if you don't think that it's for fun or not man. we are all here to have FUN, chat, write stories, joke around, and MAKE FORUM's........... you can't deny a member of this group for doing something to GET ACTIVE within the group man........... if he wants to be the critique withini the group, then go on and let him..... I for one think it's a great idea (don't get too happy Jojiro, I'm coming for you next)....... so please man, as cool as you are, just chill the hell down and clarify your thoughts with me first before you jump down peoples throats..... this is why i would rather people talk to me first about stuff, because i know you too well and what you would do, should anyone come at you wrong.........

2. This is for Jojiro......... DON'T GO RETALIATING TO DETH, ALL IT WILL DO IS INDUCE A BIGGER FIGHT, WHICH WILL PISS ME OFF MORE AND YELL AT THE BOTH OF YOU............ I'm not saying this is all your fault because i did give you permission ot make this forum....... but you don't need to argue back with people about what I've told you, you can do............ just say, you have no room to yell at me about this because Sirberius (the creator) told me i could do this.............. if they have any further objections just notify me and I'll personally defend you and shut them the hell up..... cause I can't have bullying of any kind within my group..... if I allowed that, then I wouldn't be a very good Leader, would I??? now with that said........... IT WAS COMPLETELY IDIOTIC OF YOU TO ARGUE WITH DETHREAPER......... I TOLD YOU TIME AFTER TIME, DON'T DO IT........ HE IS MORE RUTHLESS THAN I AM........ (unless I've had a bad day and i don't feel like dealing with shit...... which is what you people are about to see if you kepe this shit up)......... next time just tell him to consult me...... he will do it, trust me......... that is all I have to say to you......... just try not to make people feel bad with this critiqueing thing........ AND DON'T WRITE IN THE GODDAMN FORUMS!!!!!!!! (sorry, I just like saying that......... hehehehe....... I know twisted sense of humor).........

3. VALENTINE....... YOU DO NOT HAVE THE AUTHORITY TO DELETE FORUMS. IF YOU DO IT I WILL PERSONLLY STRIP YOU OF YOUR MODERATOR PREVILeGES...... YOU AREN'T ON THE COUNCIL (yet) SO YOU DON'T HAVE THE SAME POWER THAT DETH HAS...... AND NONE OF YOU HAVE THE SAME POWER AS ME..... NO WHERE CLOSE TO IT...........

4. This is for everyone............ GET TEH HELL ALONG........... if ya'll keep on acting like a bunch of ignorant children with your pety arguements I'll strip all of you of your moding previleges....... it is a PREVILEGE to mod, not a right...... even if you are in the Council........... and I know what you are all think, "but you argue and stuff with Sheep"........... well i have this to say.......................... em................................. uh.............. ok I ain't got nothing for that............ just stop it already damnit...........

hahahah pretty dots....... I wonder why i do that........... it's just a damn habit now........... GET ALONG!!!!!! OR THE GROUP GETS DESTROY.................. TRY AND TEST MY PATIENCE AND I GUARANTEE THAT YOU WILL RUE THE DAY YOU DID IT...................


arent u being kinda hypocritical since ur arguing too?
Savior of Twilight
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dmitrivalentine wrote:


Sirberius wrote:

Everyone of you just needs to shut the hell up and get the fuck along......... This isn't how I envisioned MY damn group........

1. This is for dethreaper............ You may be my co-writer...... you may be the only one capable of pulling our vision to reality....... you may even be one of the greatest writer that I have ever encountered...... but that's it man.......... you are in charge of helping out with the stories, editing, telling use what should be edited and changed...... and finding a way to make sure we get it all done... but man, you are over stretching your boundaries...... this is an open group...... i don't care if you don't think that it's for fun or not man. we are all here to have FUN, chat, write stories, joke around, and MAKE FORUM's........... you can't deny a member of this group for doing something to GET ACTIVE within the group man........... if he wants to be the critique withini the group, then go on and let him..... I for one think it's a great idea (don't get too happy Jojiro, I'm coming for you next)....... so please man, as cool as you are, just chill the hell down and clarify your thoughts with me first before you jump down peoples throats..... this is why i would rather people talk to me first about stuff, because i know you too well and what you would do, should anyone come at you wrong.........

2. This is for Jojiro......... DON'T GO RETALIATING TO DETH, ALL IT WILL DO IS INDUCE A BIGGER FIGHT, WHICH WILL PISS ME OFF MORE AND YELL AT THE BOTH OF YOU............ I'm not saying this is all your fault because i did give you permission ot make this forum....... but you don't need to argue back with people about what I've told you, you can do............ just say, you have no room to yell at me about this because Sirberius (the creator) told me i could do this.............. if they have any further objections just notify me and I'll personally defend you and shut them the hell up..... cause I can't have bullying of any kind within my group..... if I allowed that, then I wouldn't be a very good Leader, would I??? now with that said........... IT WAS COMPLETELY IDIOTIC OF YOU TO ARGUE WITH DETHREAPER......... I TOLD YOU TIME AFTER TIME, DON'T DO IT........ HE IS MORE RUTHLESS THAN I AM........ (unless I've had a bad day and i don't feel like dealing with shit...... which is what you people are about to see if you kepe this shit up)......... next time just tell him to consult me...... he will do it, trust me......... that is all I have to say to you......... just try not to make people feel bad with this critiqueing thing........ AND DON'T WRITE IN THE GODDAMN FORUMS!!!!!!!! (sorry, I just like saying that......... hehehehe....... I know twisted sense of humor).........

3. VALENTINE....... YOU DO NOT HAVE THE AUTHORITY TO DELETE FORUMS. IF YOU DO IT I WILL PERSONLLY STRIP YOU OF YOUR MODERATOR PREVILeGES...... YOU AREN'T ON THE COUNCIL (yet) SO YOU DON'T HAVE THE SAME POWER THAT DETH HAS...... AND NONE OF YOU HAVE THE SAME POWER AS ME..... NO WHERE CLOSE TO IT...........

4. This is for everyone............ GET TEH HELL ALONG........... if ya'll keep on acting like a bunch of ignorant children with your pety arguements I'll strip all of you of your moding previleges....... it is a PREVILEGE to mod, not a right...... even if you are in the Council........... and I know what you are all think, "but you argue and stuff with Sheep"........... well i have this to say.......................... em................................. uh.............. ok I ain't got nothing for that............ just stop it already damnit...........

hahahah pretty dots....... I wonder why i do that........... it's just a damn habit now........... GET ALONG!!!!!! OR THE GROUP GETS DESTROY.................. TRY AND TEST MY PATIENCE AND I GUARANTEE THAT YOU WILL RUE THE DAY YOU DID IT...................


arent u being kinda hypocritical since ur arguing too?


SHUT THE HELL UP VALENTINE............... geez, leave it to you to find the error of my goddamn arguement.... god, can't I just have a moment to act as a creator and leader should without you screwing things up............... bastard.............
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The Innovator
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lol
Mystic
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The awesome thing is that I came in so late that the only thing I have to reply to is the last comment: Valentine's lol.

Yeah, lol indeed.
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It isnt bad if its construtive, so it will help the person. Theres my 2¢.
The Innovator
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when is any criticizing in this group ever good?
The Human God
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IDK, it just souded like something good to say at the time.

I raise my 2¢ 2 more, yay! 1¢ more and i got a nickel...
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