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Prologue
One day during the modern times, there was a girl that was an angel during the day and a vampire during the night. Her name is Serena. When she was going to her high school, during the day, she met a boy. He was the most handsome, nice, and popular in the school; but what people didn't know was that he had bad terms with his family and had a very nasty personality. But he didn't show his nasty side during the day because he only shows it during the night, so that people won't get the wrong idea and starts to hate him.
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Chapter 1
Did you ever think it was possible for one girl to live with her face hidden? With no one to tell who she really was? With no one to understand? Well to tell the truth there is one, actually two fated souls. They were combined by a curse.

Through the ancient times there was one girl that was hunted by the thousands. She was a menaced and lonely girl, but a real beauty at that. Through the dark she lived because she traded her soul for the one that she loved, so that he would be saved out of the grasp of death. But to her knowledge the one that captured her soul was none other than the lord of vampires. She was forbidden to talk to the person she loved after that. After all what would become of a blood thirsty vampire and a human. Her lover, however, had realized that he had no feelings for her and forgot about her. Later he married another woman. Seeing this the vampire was hurt and became the uncaring bitter person she is today. Still living among the people. Her name was Mizuki.


Meanwhile a new angel was being recruited her name was Serena.

As there is evil, there is good. Have you ever heard angels come down to help the living? Well this girl, was assigned by God to help a village. A village with the belief that there was no hope for living(the effect of the vampire). She came down and restored the village with her cheerful personality, and soon her assignment was complete so she must return to Heaven. But on her way, she saw one person that she hadn’t helped, a lonely girl. The only thing that she didn’t know was that lonely girl was our unfortunate vampire, Mizuki. The angel tried and tried to help, but numerous times; that girl would reject her and even tried to attack her.

One day the angel was at heaven, when she saw one of God’s top secret potions. It was called “the happiness of opposites”. She confused the meaning of the name as a potion that would help someone that is an opposite personality as her become happy. Knowing that God would be happy if she used it for good she brought it down to where the vampire was and put it in her blood drink. Accidentally the angel put it in her own drink (as for she was clumsy). And she lured the vampire with the blood drink. When both drank their drinks; by midnight their bodies were bound. A note then appeared in front of them saying: “opposites attract and that is bound, the curse will break until your loved one is found, someone to understand your feelings and pain ; then only then will two hearts be gained.”


When they saw the message, they thought it was some kind of dream that they combined bodies. But when they found out the truth; they were very sad because then they weren't able to live their usual lives.

When the sun is out it was Serena and when the moon is out it's Mizuki. They had to live their lives without knowing of the others existence. So, when Serena stayed at her house(god gave it to her, so she could keep watch on Earth) during the night, she didn't know that she will change into the vampire, Mizuki. So while, Mizuki was out, Serena will have no memory of her, she went hunting for blood. While shes hunting for blood, since as she is a vampire, she finds a human boy and drank their blood. When the body was found, people thought it was a murderer who killed the boy; no one knew that it was a vampire who killed him.


While, Serena spent her time still helping the less fortunate. She couldn't help seeing someone in need. While she stayed on earth things seemed to be at peace. When the news of the dead boy spread, she was horrified. So she went out and tried to find the murderer, as they said.

One day, she went back to heaven and found a crystal ball. (All Guardian Angels had these.) Their jobs were to guide the dead and the living to one place, Heaven. The crystal ball showed the death of the boy, and she saw that it wasn't a human that killed the boy, but a vampire. Then, she remembered the one vampire she helped, Mizuki. Her memory then came to the last time she saw Mizuki. Questions filled her mind: Why did i forget this? When was that? Where is she? Serena was starting to grow closer to knowing the truth.


Serena was looking into the crystal ball very hard just to see if she could find Mizuki, but there was no clue. The crystal ball couldn't find Mizuki anywhere. While Serena was searching, it was going to become night really soon and that she had to hurry home, so she won't be in any trouble.

When it hit night, Serena changed into Mizuki and during that night, Mizuki went out again.

Mizuki said, "Now, Let's see if I could find another person to eat."

So, while she was on her search, she found another victim. It was a young girl this time. Mizuki attacked her and drank her blood. The young woman died and Mizuki left the body there. Mizuki went back to the house that she was in because day was getting closer by the minute.


As the days go on, Serena gets visions of what Mizuki is seeing but Serena thinks that God is trying to tell her who is killing people at night. When Mizuki sleeps during the day, she also starts to see vision of what the angel is seeing. Mizuki then starts to think she is losing her mind. One day, Mizuki was resting and she saw more visions of Serena. Then, Mizuki starts talking and says to Serena, "Who are you?". After Serena heard Mizuki talking, she replies back and says, "My name is Serena and did God send you to tell me something?". Mizuki had heard Serena say this but just ignored it because she really thought she was losing her mind again.

A few days later, Mizuki starts to think about what has happened the other day. Mizuki starts to think if she will talk to that "voice" once again. Since the sun was about to rise Mizuki went fast asleep. In the morning, Serena woke up and cooked breakfast. After eating breakfast she seemed so bloated that she sat down and just started thinking about what has happened to her lately. A few minutes later, Mizuki saw visions of Serena and said once again, "Who are you?". Serena answered back saying, "I'm an angel named Serena." Mizuki then asked her why she is seeing visions of her. Suddenly, Serena starts to remember getting the potion that she used. Then she tells what happened. Then, Mizuki says to her, "Don't tell me you're that angel that appeared to me before?" Serena tells her that she is. Furthermore, Serena and Mizuki just keep on talking about themselves so when they started to get along with each other. Serena then told Mizuki, "A few weeks from now, I am going to start high school as a second year."


End of Chapter 1
Posted 6/27/08

Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:

One day during the modern times, there was a girl that was an angel during the day and a vampire during the night. Her name is _______(don't have a name yet). When she was going to her high school, during the day, she met a boy. He was so handsome/cute, nice, and popular in the school; but what people didn't know was that he had bad terms with his family and had a very nasty personality. But he didn't show his nasty side during the day because he only shows it during the night, so that people won't get the wrong idea and starts to hate him.



nice start..:DDD
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YAY DESU!!!!!!!!awesome
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Nice start ;D Once you get your characters/names; I suggest describing your ideal of 'handsome/cute' or having a real talk between the two characters..

Other than that.. It's really original and it seems it'll be awesome <3
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teresapham96 wrote:

Nice start ;D Once you get your characters/names; I suggest describing your ideal of 'handsome/cute' or having a real talk between the two characters..

Other than that.. It's really original and it seems it'll be awesome <3


thx!!! since we just thought of th story, we didn't hav enough time 2 figure out th names......
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Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:

One day during the modern times, there was a girl that was an angel during the day and a vampire during the night. Her name is _______(don't have a name yet). When she was going to her high school, during the day, she met a boy. He was so handsome/cute, nice, and popular in the school; but what people didn't know was that he had bad terms with his family and had a very nasty personality. But he didn't show his nasty side during the day because he only shows it during the night, so that people won't get the wrong idea and starts to hate him.



nice start..:DDD


thx!!
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Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:


teresapham96 wrote:

Nice start ;D Once you get your characters/names; I suggest describing your ideal of 'handsome/cute' or having a real talk between the two characters..

Other than that.. It's really original and it seems it'll be awesome <3


thx!!! since we just thought of th story, we didn't hav enough time 2 figure out th names......


It's okay ;D Making a name is really really hard xP That's why I said whenever you do get a perfect name for them ;D
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Posted 6/27/08

teresapham96 wrote:


Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:


teresapham96 wrote:

Nice start ;D Once you get your characters/names; I suggest describing your ideal of 'handsome/cute' or having a real talk between the two characters..

Other than that.. It's really original and it seems it'll be awesome <3


thx!!! since we just thought of th story, we didn't hav enough time 2 figure out th names......


It's okay ;D Making a name is really really hard xP That's why I said whenever you do get a perfect name for them ;D


yea, i kno......
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The Story Has A Great Plot But That Seems Like A Summary Not Chapter. I Think U Should Add A Few More Details. ^.^ But Really Awesome Job.
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LovEvolution wrote:

The Story Has A Great Plot But That Seems Like A Summary Not Chapter. I Think U Should Add A Few More Details. ^.^ But Really Awesome Job.


sorry!!! i just started making it up, so i didn't really hav enough time 4 th rest.....
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Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:


LovEvolution wrote:

The Story Has A Great Plot But That Seems Like A Summary Not Chapter. I Think U Should Add A Few More Details. ^.^ But Really Awesome Job.


sorry!!! i just started making it up, so i didn't really hav enough time 4 th rest.....


Sorry!!!! I Know Its Not Your Fault. I Just Wanna Help. Dont Worrie U Did Great.This Might Be A Little Too Straight-Forward But... *Hugz U* It Will Be Fine.
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Posted 6/27/08

LovEvolution wrote:


Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:


LovEvolution wrote:

The Story Has A Great Plot But That Seems Like A Summary Not Chapter. I Think U Should Add A Few More Details. ^.^ But Really Awesome Job.


sorry!!! i just started making it up, so i didn't really hav enough time 4 th rest.....


Sorry!!!! I Know Its Not Your Fault. I Just Wanna Help. Dont Worrie U Did Great.This Might Be A Little Too Straight-Forward But... *Hugz U* It Will Be Fine.


thx!!! and it's ok........ it does sound lyk a summary tho....
Posted 6/27/08

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daneaeriel wrote:


Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:

One day during the modern times, there was a girl that was an angel during the day and a vampire during the night. Her name is _______(don't have a name yet). When she was going to her high school, during the day, she met a boy. He was so handsome/cute, nice, and popular in the school; but what people didn't know was that he had bad terms with his family and had a very nasty personality. But he didn't show his nasty side during the day because he only shows it during the night, so that people won't get the wrong idea and starts to hate him.



nice start..:DDD


thx!!


no problem!! i'm excited on what would happen if they meet with the boy..heehee..:D

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Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:


daneaeriel wrote:


Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:

One day during the modern times, there was a girl that was an angel during the day and a vampire during the night. Her name is _______(don't have a name yet). When she was going to her high school, during the day, she met a boy. He was so handsome/cute, nice, and popular in the school; but what people didn't know was that he had bad terms with his family and had a very nasty personality. But he didn't show his nasty side during the day because he only shows it during the night, so that people won't get the wrong idea and starts to hate him.



nice start..:DDD


thx!!


no problem!! i'm excited on what would happen if they meet with the boy..heehee..:D



*hee hee* did u read th new parts 2 th story yet???
Posted 6/27/08

Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:


daneaeriel wrote:


Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:


daneaeriel wrote:


Vampire_Angel_Sakura wrote:

One day during the modern times, there was a girl that was an angel during the day and a vampire during the night. Her name is _______(don't have a name yet). When she was going to her high school, during the day, she met a boy. He was so handsome/cute, nice, and popular in the school; but what people didn't know was that he had bad terms with his family and had a very nasty personality. But he didn't show his nasty side during the day because he only shows it during the night, so that people won't get the wrong idea and starts to hate him.



nice start..:DDD


thx!!


no problem!! i'm excited on what would happen if they meet with the boy..heehee..:D



*hee hee* did u read th new parts 2 th story yet???



yup2!! heehee..:DD
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