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Posted 6/26/08
Got any complains, compliments or critique for the ongoing story? Discuss it here....
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Posted 6/27/08
This is for when/if the story actually starts
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Posted 6/27/08
I got a complain. The story hasn't started a month ago and it still hasn't started to day. Boy that sound confusing. LOL
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Posted 6/27/08
so what do u guys not get about. races. lol. the whole town thing i am kinda against now, cuz we're not makin a game we're writing a story. we can pretty much wing it, i mean it's all about explaining in detail, same with terrain and the land n weather n shit.
same for the races but yea. lol
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Posted 6/27/08
The Race, i understand the Human and undead. But the are the other 2 race i am unclear of (your using big words, so i don't understand). I think is to explain the detail of the race.in the story thinging.
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Posted 6/27/08
I don't think we should have designated races like, you are classified as this or that.
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Posted 6/27/08
we definitely should have classified races or else things are gonna get messed up

Every group sticks to their own in a sense, vampires wont fight zombies cause their all undead
humans won't fight other humans (war scale not petty brawls) croniels - fairies won't fight elves, bestials - orcs wont fight minotaurs

That way at least there's some harmony and corporation, everyone needs a big enough genre to belong to and some common thread history...

This is just to keep the confusion to a minimum

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Posted 6/27/08 , edited 6/27/08
Lol actually. say the faries could have beef with elves. n what not. in real life there is betrayal everywhere. chinise faught chinise even tho the mongolians were rapin them in battle. kinda thing

ok races wise leme explain since i brought it up.

Void: Beings made from living creatures. through magic or plague. The person must die before they can become a void. In a sense they are undead, all of them. They are immortal but could still be killed. Some depend on strength and weapon like forms that portrude(stick out) from their bodies. Some use devastating magic, like curses and dark magic. Some control other voids that are of lower class than they are. Some use their inteligence and invent different types of plagues that kills other creatures slow and painful, deseases that destroys all ur senses and leave you alive just to feel pain until either they or the person ends their life.

example: Vampire, Werewolves, Chupacabra, Zombies, Demons, Succubus, Incubus, Cambion, Ghosts, Troll, Parasites, Fel Creatures, Siren, Wraith, Groul, youkai, akuma, lol hollow.. haha just somewhere along those lines, even an undead dragon or w.e creature that can die.


Croniels: Creatures rumored usually as myths, misterious and secretive they are in touch with every aspect of nature to the point they no longer need phisical labour. These creatures rely on magic, they rely on the very essesnse of life to provide for them. Some small, some large, some completely agile, and most of all they are very inteligent creatures. This group of beings live for milenias unless killed, they arent immortal, but their lifespan outlive the rest. Most live lives for self fulfilment, the protection of their pride and their own, the protection of their own kind only. Most are very proud and closed(they dont like to associate with other races but their own) and think of other beings as if they are lesser(they think they are better than everyone else). Only a few live humble lives, mainly because of their size, but even with such small stature their magic is more of a match against their large counterparts. These creatures are very loyal to their own people and will die for a cause that best fit their morals.

examples: Elves (Wood elf, high elf, dark elf, man u can make up any type of elf u want.) Fairies, Mind flayers, niad, centaur, silph, nymps, mermaids or mermen or mercreatures lol, harpians(harpy/human), well u kno somwer along those lines, u can make anything up so long as they have those traits.


Querza(for now i'll call them this.): Creatures that are most distant with nature, their short lived life spans are lived trying their utmost best to make something of themselves, to be remembered, to live a life with power, live a life of excitement, live a life of inteligence and scientific breakthru, life of discovery. Since their life do not last as long as most beings they live their life to the fullest, Some rise to power and try to take over lands and unify, some pillage and wreck havoc for the sake of self fulfillment. Some fight for love and peace, while others try to survive while having nothing. Most are very selfish and care nothing more for others but themselves, while some try to care for others at the cost of their own. These creatures strive for inteligence, some build their entire lives trying to improve their society, make life easier to live, create better tools so their lineage could live lazy lives. Some invent continuesly invent better architectual defenses, some invent weapons of mass distructions so that they could take someone else's property, or in fear of being unable to protect their own.

examples: Humans, Dwarves(many types of dwarves), Gnomes(many types of gnomes), Goblins(many types of goblins), Orcs, Giants(many types of giants), w.e races u can make up as long as they have these traits, think final fantasy or those type of games, man it could be even be an undead race tryina be smart lol.


Troukriel(from the word truculent): Savage creatures that found enough inteligance to form some sort of civilization. Though poor in technology nor magic these creatures' senses, reflexes, speed, agility, stamina, and strength. Most use part of their body as a weapon, those that dont are extremely skilled in weapons, even deadly without them. These creatures usually live in caves, small villages deep in an unexplored areas of the world. Beings that rely deeply on their instincts in the heat of the moment, some have such ferocity that their rage turn into a sort of magical drive that removes pain from their naturally tough body, called berserking. Some use their large size and sheer power to drive through anything in their path. Their weapons are usually simple and prehistoric, tho some of these creatures attained enough inteligence to even use guns, from the process of stealing and raiding supply bands. Some feed on others, some feed on themselves, they are a pretty random creatures where u never know what they'll do next. Some can speak and interact with others, while some act too quick in their instincs that no1 can never get close to. They are a hazard to their own race, specially other races, and maybe even themselves.

Examples: Half beast creatures such as Minotaurs, Pig orcs, Harpies, Anolians, feline humanoids, hob goblins, Bug bears, K9 humanoids, man just think half animal or even pure animal. anything that looses its self at some point in time, or have a tendency of going wild, lol could even look close to humans but still act savage n what not but yea u get what im sayin..


If anyone want a more easier explanation about a specific race come talk to me. this isnt the best i could explain this but it's all i could think of right now, theres way more but i tried to get to their characteristics more than everything else.

AND, just because u are in a category does not mean you have to be exactly like that. You can be a rebel in your comunity, instead of being EVIL as a VOID u can be a good undead lol, like u dont agree with how ur community acts, u can be an exile or what not man. u can be an elf and be evil lol. well dark elf pretty much spells that out, but yea u can be a wood elf(most peaceful elves) and be a warlord that takes countries. u can come from a prideful race and be humble, dont limit urself with this, u can be w.e the hell u want, but u gota start and be born from something right? lol
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Posted 6/29/08

cycrone wrote:

so what do u guys not get about. races. lol. the whole town thing i am kinda against now, cuz we're not makin a game we're writing a story. we can pretty much wing it, i mean it's all about explaining in detail, same with terrain and the land n weather n shit.
same for the races but yea. lol


I get the races thing but i dont get how the characters will interact with one another.....like if i meet your character halfway down the story(god forbid..lol) how will you and i converse?
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Posted 6/29/08
I'd say like a roleplay kind of
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Posted 6/29/08

syphl wrote:


cycrone wrote:

so what do u guys not get about. races. lol. the whole town thing i am kinda against now, cuz we're not makin a game we're writing a story. we can pretty much wing it, i mean it's all about explaining in detail, same with terrain and the land n weather n shit.
same for the races but yea. lol


I get the races thing but i dont get how the characters will interact with one another.....like if i meet your character halfway down the story(god forbid..lol) how will you and i converse?


oh u will meet my character... *grin* everyone will.. "mwahahah."

i actually have that same damn issue. i dono how we'd be doing it. there is lost of different ways. the question is.. which one..

i guess wen our chars meet, we can leave it off as a cliff hanger for a while and discuss the conversation privately or in a thread. like we can have a "Character Interaction Thread" lmao.. or something.
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Posted 6/29/08

fmalover54 wrote:

I'd say like a roleplay kind of


wont work cuz of the time zones, and the replys dont go till a few hours. it'll look like posts of a few words it'd look pretty lame lol.
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Posted 6/30/08
What about the character interaction thread you mentioned earlier? How would that work?
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Posted 6/30/08 , edited 6/30/08
hmmm, I keep putting stuff up but it disappears....

I was thinking we work each with one post to keep the story simple... so if we want to move town we can copy our thread, if we want to interact we can double post, one in your forum and the other in the persons, I dunno and we can always use the group chat feature and discuss things...
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Posted 7/1/08
for those who have an idea of how this will work...NOT ME.....
post an example.....!!! please
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