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Posted 7/1/08
Okay so what I was thinking was ...

Karla's post - I ran into a human girl dressed in the military uniform, she was staring blankly into the sky. She turned and looked at me and automatically I said "Hi". She asked me rather coldly, "Hello what are you doing here?" And I responded, "looking for herbs" wondering why she seemed so distant when my disguise was perfect...

Syphl's post - I turned and saw a strange youth staring at me, there was something strange about her and I immediately reached for my gun. "Hi" she said, and I responded coldly "Hello what are you doing here?" she smiled and replied "Looking for herbs," she looked so innocent yet I could not trust her...

So basically if you've prediscussed the plot, the conversation, how things are gonna go before hand, then in your post as well as the post of the person you have met, you need to have the two sides of the conversation, in each of your different styles, so that if someone reads the other persons story they will meet the same conversation and be like, oh so this was this characters point of view, while the others was that...

Less confusing
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karlaf wrote:

Okay so what I was thinking was ...

Karla's post - I ran into a human girl dressed in the military uniform, she was staring blankly into the sky. She turned and looked at me and automatically I said "Hi". She asked me rather coldly, "Hello what are you doing here?" And I responded, "looking for herbs" wondering why she seemed so distant when my disguise was perfect...

Syphl's post - I turned and saw a strange youth staring at me, there was something strange about her and I immediately reached for my gun. "Hi" she said, and I responded coldly "Hello what are you doing here?" she smiled and replied "Looking for herbs," she looked so innocent yet I could not trust her...

So basically if you've prediscussed the plot, the conversation, how things are gonna go before hand, then in your post as well as the post of the person you have met, you need to have the two sides of the conversation, in each of your different styles, so that if someone reads the other persons story they will meet the same conversation and be like, oh so this was this characters point of view, while the others was that...

Less confusing




AHHH brilliant brilliant....i get it now....yay.....ALRIGHT...i motivated to start writing again...
okay and we'll discuss the plot beforehand during chat sessions?
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Posted 7/1/08

karlaf wrote:

Okay so what I was thinking was ...

Karla's post - I ran into a human girl dressed in the military uniform, she was staring blankly into the sky. She turned and looked at me and automatically I said "Hi". She asked me rather coldly, "Hello what are you doing here?" And I responded, "looking for herbs" wondering why she seemed so distant when my disguise was perfect...

Syphl's post - I turned and saw a strange youth staring at me, there was something strange about her and I immediately reached for my gun. "Hi" she said, and I responded coldly "Hello what are you doing here?" she smiled and replied "Looking for herbs," she looked so innocent yet I could not trust her...

So basically if you've prediscussed the plot, the conversation, how things are gonna go before hand, then in your post as well as the post of the person you have met, you need to have the two sides of the conversation, in each of your different styles, so that if someone reads the other persons story they will meet the same conversation and be like, oh so this was this characters point of view, while the others was that...

Less confusing


ayyyyyyt lol i liek that stylll. I guess we could do it that way, that is proly has the best function without confusing everyone.

so let me get this straight. we all got our own threads. with our own titles. and we just let it rip?

so to get to another town where another character is, we'd pretty much have to follow everyone's story to see where they are O.O oh man that is pretty hectic in it self but i see it working. cuz people would actually be forced to read everyone else's story if they wanna interact and 95% of the time we're all here cuz we want to write together.

aryt if it came to it I vote ur way lol.
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Posted 7/2/08
The character prolouges are so interesting but the format of the story writing should be the same i beleiev..either everyone should write the story as the first person narrative or second person narrative or third person narrative!!!
But i personally think the third person narrative would be the most interesting!!!
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Posted 7/3/08
That's definitely something to be discussed I'm not the best third person narrator but I would if thats what we want to do...
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Posted 7/3/08
third person is probably the best way to hone skills. cuz anyone can do first person, talk like they are the character, but few could utilize enough words and detail through third person.
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Posted 7/3/08
True, true, gotta stop being lazy, third person all the way
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Posted 7/15/08
ok i quickly changed mine from first person. soz would hav done it sooner but comp crashed nd only just got it bak
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Posted 7/16/08
som1 come to the town im in
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Posted 7/17/08
pft not me....
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Posted 7/17/08
My characters tracking the military, is anyone going to reply to that?
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Posted 7/17/08
yuppp im on that...lol...
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Posted 7/17/08
my characters in the military lol
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hey^^ the story is great! U all have a very good writing style..... so sad that my english is way to bad to take part....

please keep it up the way it is... just one thing: try to write a good story. I doesen't depend on whos chara is the best and the most spiecial or whatever... try to write a great story! a real story... not just some lines about some anime super heros^^
just wanted to say that to remind you all... especially the new members. we're writing here. you can have fun in the warriors topic or the chara-pup. it's just if you look at the charas... they are all really special and really anime like. that's not a bad thing... but try to not drift away....

@ all new members: please read the rules and ther "setting of the story"... you can see there wht I am talking about.... and u will see how the story should be
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Posted 7/29/08

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hey^^ the story is great! U all have a very good writing style..... so sad that my english is way to bad to take part....

please keep it up the way it is... just one thing: try to write a good story. I doesen't depend on whos chara is the best and the most spiecial or whatever... try to write a great story! a real story... not just some lines about some anime super heros^^
just wanted to say that to remind you all... especially the new members. we're writing here. you can have fun in the warriors topic or the chara-pup. it's just if you look at the charas... they are all really special and really anime like. that's not a bad thing... but try to not drift away....

@ all new members: please read the rules and ther "setting of the story"... you can see there wht I am talking about.... and u will see how the story should be


Hey, i don't think your English is that bad, hehe..My writing skill is definitely not at the same level with them, the others really have very good talent in writing. I don't feel very bad though as my mother tongue is not English. And i'm trying to improve here What do you think about mine btw? Oh, ya! we're writing this in third person view, right? It seems like you're the God who tell the story in this book
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