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Posted 6/27/08 , edited 6/28/08
Glass Rose

The blooming of life...
The wilting of Death...
The roots grow deeper into pain...
You try to take your life,
but your too afraid...
You bair the pain for years,
hoping it will end...
Everyday it grows, stronger,
and stronger...
Everyday you get closer to death...
The pain grows,
and is now too much to bair...
You drop, and shatter the rose,
ending your life...

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Posted 6/29/08
Its really pretty and sad at the same time, great job ^^
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Posted 6/29/08
Thnx
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27 / F / LeSLy's WoRLd! ^^
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Posted 6/30/08
its a really good poem! congrats!
Posted 7/13/08 , edited 7/29/08
great poem i love the name =3
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Posted 7/28/08

kagura4 wrote:

great poem onee-chan i love the name =3


Thnx!!
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Posted 7/29/08
Thats a really great and "darkish" poem. It reminds me of the sudden stop to people's lives within the world. You've done a great job visualizing it in some ways. hoping to see more of you work =]
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Posted 7/29/08

azndisaster wrote:

Thats a really great and "darkish" poem. It reminds me of the sudden stop to people's lives within the world. You've done a great job visualizing it in some ways. hoping to see more of you work =]


Thnx!!
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