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Episode 1: Access On! : Kamen Rider Access

5 years ago...

Inside a large underground cave, an activity unknown to human society and even the government is being done...

Scientist1: This is incredible! T-t-this could be our key to fame and luxury!
Scientist2: Your right! I can't wait to relay this to the WORLD!
Scientist3: Wait! There's something not right!
Scientist1: Quit your yappin! Were gonna be famous!
Scientist2: Agreed!
Scientist3: Please stop first Kasuma-san, Touryo-san!
Scientist1(Kasuma): Leonardo-san, you just want the fame to be only yours!
Touryo: Yeah!
Leonardo: N-No its not what you think!
Touryo: STFU! *Hits Leonardo in the face; knocking out Leonardo*
Kasuma: Good, he's knocked out cold!

Kasuma prepares the machine while Touryo ties Leonardo.

Touryo: Serves you right...
Kasuma: It's ready....
They both look at each other...
Touryo: Lets do it...

The machine starts to function as Leonardo wakes up....
Leonardo: NO! IT'S DANGEROUS! YOUR BEING BLINDED BY FAME THAT WILL NEVER BELONG TO BOTH OF YOU! PLEASE STOP!

That was the last words heard from that cave... The experiment resulted to release of unknown monsters that haunts and kills humans up to present...

Its 20XX and the world is still not informed about the accident that happened 5 years ago, the police and local government kept the secret about the monsters which they call "Virions".
A private company which has a great connection with the government had secretly fighting these "Virions" for 3 years already... This company is named EWD (Eternal World Corporation), for normal it looks like a normal company that produces great new inventions and run by normal people.

This things had been kept a secret until this very day...

Unknown man: S**t! I'm late! My boss gonna kill me! Why do i always wake up late???

The man runs out of the house several minutes after... The man's name is Seiji Ren, 20 years old, single and lives in his own house given by his parents after they died 2 and a half years ago. He works as a part-timer in a computer shop that also has an internet cafe named ComWorX... He's lazy and somewhat an easy-go-lucky guy...

Ren arrives at ComWorx 2 hours late than he should be...

Boss: Seiji-kun! You had been late for 3 days now! Your just a part-timer and yet you do this! Be careful or i'l fire you next time!
Ren: Gomennasai Azuma-san! I'll start my work now!
Boss/Azuma: Well you really need to! Now GO GO GO!
Ren:*Whispers* Geez he never really counts, i have been late for already 15 times already, well at least i'm not fired yet~

Ren walks toward the cashier as a girl spotted him...
Girl: Seiji-kun!
Ren: Lena-chan! Wow, , you really changed a lot!
Lena: well, hehehe... Am i beautiful?
Ren:*tying his shoes* Huh? what did you just say?
Lena: Eh~ Seiji-kun your mean~
Ren: Eh~? Btw, what are you doing here?
Lena: Of course buying a computer Seiji-no-Baka!
Ren: Look who's mean~ Hehehe~ Let me help you in choosing~
Lena: Arigato!


After Ren helped Lena in picking the best computer for her, he helped Lena in bringing the new computer at Lena's house due to Lena's plea and also his shift has ended already...

Ren: This is heavy you know~ hehehe
Lena: Gomen!~ Well you know my younger brother is at school so i dont have anyone to help me~
Ren:*thinks*: so you chose our store so someone can help you~
Lena: Well, we arrived already~ Thanks!
Ren: No problem~ Well, i need to go now, my fave anime is almost about time to show~
Lena: You never change! hehehe
Ren: Yeah... R-Right...

As he walks home and goes inside his room. He lies down looking at the ceiling thinking what life really is... Then something caught his eyes in the ceiling... He never noticed it before... A part of the ceiling is slightly opened... He grabs a chair and tried to open it... Opening, something fell and hist his head causing him to fall...

Ren: Ouch~ What the hell is this?

A box covered in dust had fell from the ceiling... Ren cleans the dust away revealing the letters EWC and the symbol gamma placed on an earth... The symbol and name! It was Eternal World Corporation in which his parents worked for before! Suprised, Ren opens the box revealing something strange... There inside it, a Card, a strange belt with something in its sides, an envelope, a USB and a rectangular machine-looking thing that has a clear sphere crystal on it. Curiosed, he opened the envelop that was in it and read it...

" To you, who may find this. This thing will save the world or may destroy it! This what we called "Rider System". We created this to save the world from creatures called Virions that appeared 5 years ago. This Virions can appear as human and only show their forms in their prey or victims. We dont know if you believe us or you would be using this in good. But we sincerely plea to you to protect humans from Virions. We hide tis to prevent the Virion Cosmo to get and destroy this invention. We included the instructions on how to use this in a USB. Please, save our world!
Sincerely,
Mr Lei Seiji and
Mrs.Sakura Seiji"

Ren: WTF? Am i dreaming? Virions? EWC? What the hell are these?

Confused yet, curiosed from what he read, Ren inserted the USB in his laptop... Reading the first parts of the file inside the USB he can't believe that these Virions do exist and EWC is there to stop them. Confused and feeling sad, he walks outside and went to the park with the case of the Rider system. Feeling that everything is nonsense, he was going to throw the Rider system in a bin when he heard something behind him. Instinctively he turned to see someone looking at him.

Ren: What do you want? I'm not in a good mood you know?
Man: Your life is precious, give it to me!

The man transformed into somewhat like a horse monster. Surprised on what he saw, a Virion! The letter and the Rider system wasn't a bluff! Realizing, he was about to open the case but the monster attacked making him drop the case. He was punched on the stomach sending him a few meters away.

Ren: URGH!

Recovering from the punch, he tries to find a way to get the case and use the rider system. The horse Virion tries to attack but due to Ren's training in martial arts he was able to dodged it giving him time to run toward the case. But the monster was already in front of him. As the monster's hand changed into a blade he dodges but the monster was able to hurt him a little.

Ren: Damn! Think think think!

Seeing some stones, he threw them at the monster who was charging at him. Luckily he hits the monster's eye and seeing the opportunity grabs the case and opened it.

Ren: Let's see if this works! The file said to put the belt on my waist(of course what's a belt for?) then swipe the card on the device and... Ah! I know aready!

Ren stands up with the belt on him already, he swiped the card on the device, then...

HenshinDevice: INITIALLIZING!
Ren: For oto-san and okaa-san! HENSHIN!

He placed the device on the belt and threw the card in front of the belt.

HenshinDevice: Portal out!

The laser hits the card and transformed the card into a hologram. The hologram passes through him transforming him in to Kamen Rider Access!

Henshindevice: Accessed on!
Default mode!

Ren: So this the rider system, cool!

Ren charges to the surprised monster, throwing punches and kicks on the monster. The monster attacks but was easily dodged by Ren. He gave the monster an upper cut lifting the monster a few feet rom the ground and then kicking the monster in the stomach causing the monster to fly several metes away. Seeing that the monster is weakened, he gets 3 chips from the right side of the belt and slotted it in the side of the device.

Henshindevice: Power!
Gravity!
Kick!
Destruction Kick!


The monster tries to stand as Ren is surrounded by data-like things and goes into him.

Ren: Rider.... Kick!

And then Ren jumps up to 15m high and due to the chips effect goes down diagonally accelerating more every milisecond and hits the monster straight into the chest causing the Virion to explode. As the smoke and fire disappears, Ren walks silently away and goes back to where he left the case...

Ren: HOW THE HELL DO I RETURN BACK TO HUMAN FORM???



End of Ep1
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heh still incomplete..=)
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yah~ i accidentally pressed the post button!
Well i'l post the full laters! ^^
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sure =)..waiting forward more fans art
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comments are welcome! ep1 is out! Ep2 will arrive this week but after i'll post the other ep once a week!
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not bad..at 1st i tod that USB can b use to power up him..XD
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nice one ^^
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djloi wrote:

not bad..at 1st i tod that USB can b use to power up him..XD


lolz~ im just a begginer in writing just like everyone else~ hehehe~ well its the rider chips that can power him up... heres a spoiler: ^^

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Hey, this isn't too bad at all... are the chips like memory cards (you know like SD cards) ? I like the concept you have here...

If I could make a suggestion, consider making a sidestory, like in the format of a movie and create exclusive chips that wouldn't normally appear in the regular fanfic's storyline (like REALLY powerful ones (something to have fun with) ...for instance, a Chrono Chip, which would allow the Rider to move through time) and even make it dangerous/ highly sought after, to create more drama lol.

Overall, its seems to be getting off to a good start, good work.
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wow urs is good better than mines i will try to make mines better lol but urs can go far
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artmaster079 wrote:

Hey, this isn't too bad at all... are the chips like memory cards (you know like SD cards) ? I like the concept you have here...

If I could make a suggestion, consider making a sidestory, like in the format of a movie and create exclusive chips that wouldn't normally appear in the regular fanfic's storyline (like REALLY powerful ones (something to have fun with) ...for instance, a Chrono Chip, which would allow the Rider to move through time) and even make it dangerous/ highly sought after, to create more drama lol.

Overall, its seems to be getting off to a good start, good work.


Well thanks, i will have that in mind thnx for telling me^^
i'll might post ep2 this evening~ lol
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not bad. i like the cliche. but i think u can still improve the first episode. if people agree, i'll make ur own page. but ofcouse you must have 3 episodes first.
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WOW GREAT READ!!!
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nice one i like it
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Aegis85 wrote:

not bad. i like the cliche. but i think u can still improve the first episode. if people agree, i'll make ur own page. but ofcouse you must have 3 episodes first.


tnx^^... I already editing my ep2 and on the process of prewriting ep3~ ^^
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