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thats for now~ lolz
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yea d way u make him like nago..fangire hunter! opss...Virion hunters...but i suppose he can hang longer when fighting tat turtle..lol


lolz... he just lost to that turtle coz he didn't analyze his enemy... (he easily gets angry)...
But he killed many low-rank Virions already...


haha..he remind me those coward hunter who only hunt low rank monster and get proud bcoz of tat..lol..sorry for d comment XD


well the comments ok... although he can only hunt and kill up to rank 55 coz his human strength can't hold them off... (well he got unlucky to fought that turtle, his weapons were not enough) Well he hasn't encountered one... those higher than rank 55 prefer to attack secretly... lolz
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heh..so ur story only 1 KR? if u make lance as a KR also..cool~!! =P
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so when r u making ep 3??
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heh..so ur story only 1 KR? if u make lance as a KR also..cool~!! =P


hehehe... not really... lolz... i'll say it anyway, there might be 3+ riders excluding the other riders in a special edition(movie in kr sereies lolz)
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so when r u making ep 3??


i'm in the process... loz... might post it this night probably
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so when r u making ep 3??


i'm in the process... loz... might post it this night probably


oo i am looking forward to it ^^
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Episode 3
Malfunctions!

Kamen Rider Access gets 3 chips from the right side of the belt and slotted it in the side of the device.

Henshindevice: Power!
Gravity!
Kick!
Destruction Kick!


KRAccess: Rider... Kick!


The virion is hit and explodes... Access stares at the little fire caused by the explosion of the virion... He clenches his fist and then walks away while reverting to his human form... Unknown to him, someone had seen him returning to human form... A few hours later, at ComWorX, he is startled by a familiar man...

Man: Ren! It's been a long time! How have you been? Got many girls already? Wait, did you say a hundred? Lol, i'm just joking!
Ren: Your voice too loud Shinji... I'm fine AND I DON'T have a hundred girlfriends...
Shinji: Cool your head man! I was just joking! Hehehe~ Beware or i'll tell your secret to everybody~ *evil grin*
Ren: What secret? I don't have one...

Shinji is 21 years old, he has glasses that make him look like a complete idiot but he has a high level of intelligence, though he rarely uses it...

Shinji:*whispers* about "that" form of you... The form you used to kill that "monster"
Ren: *surprised* How did you know???
Shinji: HA! As i thought! It was you! I thought I was just seeing things! Hahahaha~ Imagine it my frien ca..*mouth was covered by Ren*
Ren: STFU! You saw me? Keep quiet! I don't want anyone to know! Ok?
Shinji: *nodded his head*
Ren: Good... I'll tell you about it later after work, ok?
Shinji: SuuuuuRrrre~

Suddenly Lena appeared and rushing toward Ren...

Lena: Seiji-kun! AYou-Know-What appeared at the plaza!
Shinji: *eyes sparkling* Lena-sama! I missed you! Will you go out with me now!? *rushes towards Lena ready to hug*
Lena: *punches Shinji's face* Seiji-kun! You need to go!
Ren: I know... *prepares to leave* Boss! I'll just buy something!
Azuma: Sure, sure...
Shinji: Wait! Don't tell me you guys are dating???
Ren and Lena: NO!!!
Shinji: Good, and what's a "you-know-what"?
Ren: The one i fought before... *leaving the comstore*
Shinji: oh...
Lena: *looks at Ren* He KNOWS???
Ren: Talk to you guys later! I'll contact you after this "Business"!

Ren rushes and rides on his newly bought motorcycle to where the virion is... Ren arrizes to see human bodies, dead... Heat rise up in his body as he saw the Virion who killed these humans still present...

Ren: You bastard! I'll never let any of you exist! HENSHIN!

Ren swipes the card on the device...

HenshinDevice: Initiallizing!

He placed the device on the belt and and thre the card in front of the belt...

HenshinDevice: Portal out!

The card became a hologram and passes through Ren allowing him to change into Kamen Rider Access...

HenshinDevice: Accessed on!
Default mode!

Out of anger, Access charged towards the monster and began attacking very violently as if he doesn’t know what he's doing... The Virion didn't even have the chance to attack back... Then, Access gets 3 chips and slotted it in the device...

Henshin Device:
Power!
Punch!
Fire!

Flame Strike!

Access punches the Virion in the stomach and sent it flying... The virion explodes at midair as Ren, reverts back to human form... Panting, he turns around to see Shinji watching him...

Shinji:...
Ren: What?
Shinji: You fight with anger on your heart, just like the last time i saw you... What are you fighting for? Revenge?
Ren: None of your business...
Shinji: It’s also mine you know, because Lena-sama is involved...
Ren: Your obsessed wit her...
Shinji: No i'm not; i'm IN LOVE with her...
Ren: Whatever... Lets talks later at the cafe with Lena-chan...

The two walks away quietly... The same time in the EWC building, Lance is presenting his report about the rider he saw last time...

Lance: I just got the pictures of his back because, as you know, i was hurt badly by the Virion... This "rider" could be the same as our rider system program... But the question is where did it come from and who uses the system?
Man1: hhmm... If my intuition is correct, could it be xgd-07 Access?
Man2: Hhm... You may be right but i thought it was destroyed 2 and half years ago?
Man3: We can conclude for now my gentlemen is that "rider" is using the same program as we are, but we are not sure if it's xgd-07 or a product of another company or organization that fights virion...
Lance: I think the same too, Lorenzo-san...
Lorenzo: Well, let’s investigate further to know more... Dismiss!

As everyone leaves, Lorenzo thinks about something...

Lorenzo: *thinks* If it is xgd-07, then how can that man survive the flaws of that system??? *walks away*

At the cafe, Lena, Shinji and Ren talks about the rider system, telling Shinji everything and showing the USB that holds some data about KR Access... Shinji puts the USB in his laptop and carefully reads its contents...

Shinji: Interesting... Hhmm... Oh… Very complicated... But... Hey Ren, can I borrow this for now? I'll just study it... Don't worry, its writhe protected... And i won't copy it... In return i'll keep your secret and help you with this...
Ren: Hhmm.. Sure, but be sure or i'll kill you...
Lena: Yeah! And I will kick your ass if you do...
Shinji: Sure, you guyz are scary you know... Btw, Lena-sama are you free tomorrow?
Lena: Yes, but I will not go on a date with you...
Shinji: Aw... you’re mean... Well, for the mean time I’ll study it and I’ll tell you anything i find tomorrow... Well for now, bye... I have something to do!
Lena: Sure, bye... Oh Seiji-kun, I'll go to my house to cook for my little brother... bye
Shinji: Ok, bye for now...

Shinji quietly walks home... Unconsciously, he didn't see that he and Lance met in the way... Both thinking deeply... He returns at home feeling very tired... Tired that he didn't know that he fainted at his room...

He wakes up realizing that he fell asleep and takes a bath... The he saw something strange... There were bruises in his chest... Thinking about his last fight, he thought about the last fight... He didn't bother about it... He just thinks that the virion must have hit him unknowingly...

He prepares to go to his work when suddenly, his eyes got blurred... Shaking his eyes he goes to his work but on the way he saw a woman running away... And he thought something is rong, the woman's dressed is damaged by cuts... Instinctively he concluded it was a virion that’s attacking the woman... He followed her and saw the Virion had already killed the woman... Anger rose to him as he transforms to KR Access...

At Lena's house, Lena's phone is ringing... Lena wakes up and picks her phone...

Lena: Who's this?
Shinji: Eh~ Well, do you know where Ren is?
Lena: No, why?
Shinji: We must not let him transform anymore! That system is dangerous! Well we can let him but after i fixed that bug! Or else he might suffer heavy physical injuries or worst, DEATH!
Lena: WHAT? Why did you called me instead of him???
Shinji: I can’t contact him! He must be fighting a Virion right now!
Lena: Damn it! Let's find him! When either of us finds him call! OK?
Shinji: Sure! Ok, let's go!

As Access's fight goes on, Ren starts to experience weird things... His eyes gets blurry and having the feeling of fainting... But he continues and then...

KrAccess: ARGH! What?

Seeing the opportunity the Virion attacked Access and sent him fa few meters away... Access can't fight anymore due to something, unknown that keeps hurting his whole body... Unable to fight, the Virion attacked him full forced that sent him flying away and reverts him back to human form... Luckily he fell far enough so that he wasn't found by the virion... He was still conscious suffering from extreme pain... And as he reaches for the rider system faints...
END of Ep3!
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Now u r talking !! u rock as always dude ^^
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Now u r talking !! u rock as always dude ^^


thnx~ hehehe~^^
I dont know when to post ep4 but if i get another free time this weekend i might post 4 and maybe up to 5... after that i might post 2 ep a week... lol
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Now u r talking !! u rock as always dude ^^


thnx~ hehehe~^^
I dont know when to post ep4 but if i get another free time this weekend i might post 4 and maybe up to 5... after that i might post 2 ep a week... lol


i am thinking about making episode 3 now
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Now u r talking !! u rock as always dude ^^


thnx~ hehehe~^^
I dont know when to post ep4 but if i get another free time this weekend i might post 4 and maybe up to 5... after that i might post 2 ep a week... lol


i am thinking about making episode 3 now


lolz... you don't need to rush things~ hehehe~ just let the kamen rider flow into you~ lol
and you can create better than before.... thats what i do... i imagine my rider and do blah blah to help with my plots... hehehe
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uhh..bugs in d system..~~~.....sound like IXA prototype...XD
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pls check some spelling. there are some text missing. and i think there's part like where did it come' need grammar corrections. i dont mind for grammar mistakes but spelling corrections are necessary.
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pls check some spelling. there are some text missing. and i think there's part like where did it come' need grammar corrections. i dont mind for grammar mistakes but spelling corrections are necessary.


lolz... i'll edit it today... heehe~ thnx for telling me!
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