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Posted 8/5/08
what does he mean by 'stalk his time?'
it's getting better but still there's lot of space to improve.
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Posted 8/5/08

DiabloKnight wrote:

what does he mean by 'stalk his time?'
it's getting better but still there's lot of space to improve.


thx for the advice ^^
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Posted 8/7/08 , edited 8/7/08
Thinking Ep 8 ..............
and of course no one is waiting .... T_T
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Episode 8 : The 5 Element Devils !!

After the numpad was fixed, Takumi and the others brought the computer home given by Uncle Satio to track down Scyther.
Soon they reach home ....

Takumi: You sure you know how to do it ??
Megumi and Sakura: No problem !
Daisuke: Maybe they can do it ...

After a few hours later, the computer was done and they started to search for the scyther ..

Sakura: ok! lets check
Megumi: Hope it works ...

Computer sensor started blinking and they zoom to check it

Sakura: Unknown ??
Takumi: How can it be ??
Daisuke: Are they something different from Scyther ?
Takumi: I am not sure ... i will find out

Takumi soon ran to the location where is the unknown was found and he spotted the unknown ...

Takumi: Who are you??
Unknown: You will find out soon ... there are 5 of us , do you can stand a chance ??

Soon the Unknown fled ...

Takumi: i will go back for now ...

Soon Takumi went back home and told them about the things that unknown said

Megumi: 5 of them ??
Daisuke: That is crazy, we can't beat them ..
Takumi: The chances are low ...
Sakura: Don't think the oppsite way .. we can win them i know it

Computer sensor started blinking again

Sakura: Unknown ... East from here
Takumi: lets go Daisuke ..
Daisuke: ok ...

They rush to the scene and saw the unknown ..

Takumi: you are the unknown from before, who the heck are you ?
Unknown: Allow me to introduce myself ... I am 1 of the 5 Element Devils , I am Fire Devil
Daisuke: 5 Element Devils ??
Takumi: Lets do it Daisuke !
Daisuke: ok !
Takumi: Rebirth !! Henshin !!
Daisuke: Dice !! Henshin !!

Daisuke and Takumi's belt appear , Takumi press 456 on the numpad and place it in the belt while Daisuke place the card in the belt .
Daisuke's Belt announced : Ready up !! While Takumi's Belt announced : Online !!
Daisuke become KR Dice and Takumi become KR Rebirth .

KR Rebirth: Lets go it !
KR Dice: ok

KR Rebirth press 145 on the numpad while KR Dice press Kick and enter on the card
Rebirth's belt announced : 1,4,5... Sonic Blazing Kick while Dice's belt announced : Kick
Both of them kick the Devil ...

Fire Devil: This is pathetic ...

Fire Devil created a fire ball and threw at Rebirth and Dice as they flew away

KR Dice: His good ..
KR Rebirth: Darn ...
Unknown: Fire , playing again ?? how can you start without us ??
Fire Devil: Come out then ..

4 Devils appear from the rooftop and flew down

Unknown: I am Water Devil ..
Unknown: I am Earth Devil ..
Unknown: I am Wind Devil ..
Unknown: I am Thunder Devil ..
All Devils : We are the Element Devils , Lets begin with our attack

Fire Devil: Fire explosion !
Water Devil : Water Blast !
Earth Devil: Earthquake !
Wind Devil: Whirlwind Strike !
Thunder Devil: Thunder !

Rebirth and Dice took all 5 damage as they flew away ...

All Devils: Its over !! Element Strike !!

5 of the Devils created a large beam and strike at the Rebirth and Dice ..
As Rebirth and Dice hit against the wall, they turn back to Human

Takumi: Daisuke ...
Daisuke: Tak ...
Water Devil: they are weak ....
Fire Devil: Lets go then ...

Soon as the 5 devils flew away, Takumi and Daisuke Faint..........
Megumi and Sakura rush to the place and bring them to Hospital
Soon Takumi and Daisuke woke up ..

Takumi: How can this be ?
Daisuke: They are strong, our chances of winning is low ..
Takumi: we can't lose ...
Daisuke: how can we win ??
Takumi: We have to defeat them 1 by 1
Daisuke: It is easy said than done .

Soon the Wind Devil appear and became to a Human and went to the room where Takumi and Daisuke is .

Wind Devil: my my , what have we here ?
Takumi: Wind Devil !
Wind Devil: We will leave you alone for now .. until you become a good opponent , we will fight u again
Takumi: We will defeat you !!
Wind Devil: We will see... haha !!

Wind Devil Disappear ..

Takumi: Darn ...

End of EP 8 ^_^
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Posted 8/7/08
err...super fast episode...
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err...super fast episode...


i was rushing it ......
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u want to end it too? btw, it's just about to get better...
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u want to end it too? btw, it's just about to get better...


end wat ??
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i not ending it till i make the last episode !!!
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aiyah~ ofcoz u will end it at last episode. but what i'm asking is...are you going to end it fast?
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aiyah~ ofcoz u will end it at last episode. but what i'm asking is...are you going to end it fast?


that depends ......... maybe up to 50 but hard
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Episode 9 : The Shooting Battle !! Rush Mode !!

After the wind devil told Takumi that they are too weak and they won't fight them until they get stronger, Takumi trained himself .

Takumi: Why can't i win ?
Daisuke: Stop thinking about it, not everything we will win.
Megumi: ya, lose once isn't that bad
Sakura: you just have to calm down
Daisuke: lets relax now ...

Computer Sensor started blinking

Sakura: West from here

As they turned behind, they saw Takumi missing ...

Daisuke: Tak ??
Megumi: Where he go ??
Sakura: Must to the location already..

As soon as Takumi reached the location, he saw a scyther holding a machine gun .

Takumi: Scyther holding a machine gun ? forget it .. Rebirth !! Henshin !!

Takumi's belt appear , Takumi press 456 on the numpad and place it in the belt . The belt announced :
Online !!
And Takumi become KR Rebirth .

KR Rebirth: lets do it !

KR Rebrith press 579 on the numpad , The belt announced : Speed mode , Online !!
Rebirth armour and eyes from White become Dark blue and a blue staff appear infront of him as he grab it .

KR Rebirth: you will lose !
Monkey Scyther: don't underestimate me boy .
KR Rebirth: Darn you ...

As KR Rebirth tried to slash the Scyther, the scyther used its machine gun and shoot at KR Rebirth .
And KR Rebirth flew miles away and he turn back to Human .

Monkey Scyther: Thats a boring one ...

The Scyther Fled..

Takumi: He is strong ...

Daisuke went out and find Takumi as he saw him in the river .

Daisuke: Tak ! i will bring you back ..

Soon Daisuke bring Takumi home , Takumi woke up ..

Takumi: What happened ??
Daisuke: you were defeated by the Scyther ..
Megumi: you lose because you are still injured from the 5 Devils Fight
Sakura: All you have to do is rest for now ...

After Takumi heard they said, he felt asleep and the rest slept for the day
The next day Takumi woke up,

Takumi: I think i felt better.

Computer Sensor started blinking as the rest wake up

Sakura: North from here !
Takumi: Got it, Daisuke .
Daisuke: yes??
Takumi: This Fight , i will fight alone ..
Daisuke: ok then ,

Takumi ran out of the house and soon the he reach the location and saw the scyther ..

Takumi: Rebirth !! Henshin !!

Takumi's belt appear , Takumi press 456 on the numpad and place it in the belt . The belt announced :
Online !!
And Takumi become KR Rebirth .

KR Rebirth: this time i will not go easy on you .
Monkey Scyther: Bring it on !

KR Rebirth run towards the scyther but the scyther used its machine gun and shot KR Rebirth as he
was send miles away.

KR Rebirth: I remember there is 2 codes that Uncle Satio said ... 589 and 599.. Lets use it !

KR Rebrith press 589 on the numpad . The belt announced : Rush Mode !! Online !!
Rebirth armour and eyes from White become Dark Green and a Green Magnum appear infront of him as he grab it .

KR Rebirth: This time, we will fight shooting !

KR Rebirth and the scyther started running and shooting each other but none was shot until both stop under a wall

KR Rebirth: Guess i need a good shot

KR Rebirth and the Scyther ran out of the wall . this time both of them stop running as KR Rebirth shot him .

Monkey Scyther: Darn i forgot to reload
KR Rebirth: I don't have to reload mine . During that period of time , you were thinking how to shoot me without reloading your gun
Its over !!

KR Rebrith press 852 on the numpad . The belt announced : 8,5,2 .... Tornado Shot !!
KR Rebirth Started spinning and a Tornado is created .Soon KR Rebirth stop spinning ,
the Tornado went near the scyther as he keep spinning . KR Rebirth Charged a Green Large Ball
and shot the scyther when it was in the middle of the tornado and the scyther burst.

KR Rebirth : i kind of like this form ...

Daisuke . Megumi and Sakura rush to the location

Daisuke: Tak??
Sakura: thats Rebirth's new form ??
Megumi: Nice !

KR Rebirth change back to Takumi ..

Takumi: i felt better after that fight , lets go have some pizza !
All : we are in !
Takumi: Lets go !!

Takumi turned back

Takumi: just you wait Devils, we will defeat you !
Daisuke: come on , Tak !! Lets go !!
Takumi: ok

End of EP 9 ^_^
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that's short! more please!
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DiabloKnight wrote:

that's short! more please!


done already becuz jus accidently press post reply
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wait...i dont get one thing. schyter shoot is fast. but rebirth said his is faster. but he had to dial and need to charge b4 he could shoot. how is that faster to u? i'm confused
in this case isnt schyter is just too slow?
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