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wait...i dont get one thing. schyter shoot is fast. but rebirth said his is faster. but he had to dial and need to charge b4 he could shoot. how is that faster to u? i'm confused
in this case isnt schyter is just too slow?


i change everything again hehe ^^
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Takumi: i felt better after that fight , lets go have some pizza !
All : we are in !
Takumi: Lets go !!

Takumi turned back

Takumi: just you wait Devils, we will defeat you !
Daisuke: come on , Tak !! Lets go !!
Takumi: ok


lol. this part is funny. i can imagin like

otaku A: "Yo! he's treating us FOOD!"
otaku gang act like zombies: "FOOD!FOOD!FOOD!FOOD!"
marching to pizza hut.

this realy makes me hungry. chow guys!
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cool, Dark Green is my favourite colour
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cool, Dark Green is my favourite colour


i dont c any color...
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zafz wrote:

cool, Dark Green is my favourite colour


i dont c any color...


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zafz wrote:

cool, Dark Green is my favourite colour


i dont c any color...


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@Aegis: there you go ~


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KR Rebrith press 589 on the numpad . The belt announced : Rush Mode !! Online !!
Rebirth armour and eyes from White become Dark Green and a Green Magnum appear infront of him as he grab it .



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VictorBoy wrote:


Aegis85 wrote:


zafz wrote:

cool, Dark Green is my favourite colour


i dont c any color...


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haha aegis juz jk..dun keep in heart
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djloi wrote:


VictorBoy wrote:


Aegis85 wrote:


zafz wrote:

cool, Dark Green is my favourite colour


i dont c any color...


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haha aegis juz jk..dun keep in heart
nah its ok ^^
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i found ur writing have improve....u can form a storyline well but still lack with details...try improve on this

good luck..i believe ppl will appreciate ur fanfics if u write well =)
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i found ur writing have improve....u can form a storyline well but still lack with details...try improve on this

good luck..i believe ppl will appreciate ur fanfics if u write well =)


thx ^^
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Episode 10 will be out tmr ^^
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Episode 10 : The Truth

After Sakura and Megumi saw Rebirth's Rush mode, they are interested to see what is Rebirth's last code that Uncle Satio gave him .

Megumi: Hey Tak, what mode does 599 have??
Sakura: yes ! use it at the next battle !
Takumi: until i think is really the time to use , i will use it

Soon a man came up to Takumi's house and knock the door as Daisuke open it

Man: Are you Fujiwara Takumi ??
Daisuke: nope i am not , he is ..

The man was happy to see Takumi as he introduced himself

Man: i am Horie Kenta ..
Takumi: uncle??
Kenta: my nephew !!
Takumi: what brings you here?
Kenta: lets go have a walk ..

Soon they reached the park, as children were running happily , Kenta was happy to see children happy

Takumi: you like children's laughter??
Kenta: ya , i love to see the happy face on them
Takumi: thats good ... well i need to go back , see you soon uncle

Soon Takumi went back home,A Cicada Scyther started killing children that are not laughing

Sakura: South from here
Takumi: Lets go Daisuke !
Daisuke ok !

Soon they reach location ...

Takumi shouted Rebirth !! Henshin !! while Daisuke shouted Dice !! Henshin !! As Takumi press 456 on the numpad and place in the belt while Daisuke place the card in the belt .Takumi's belt announced : Online !! and
Daisuke's belt announced : Ready Up !!
And Takumi became KR Rebirth while Daisuke became KR Dice ..

KR Rebirth: y does that scyther target children that are not laughing ??
KR Dice: lets beat him first
KR Rebirth: ok !

As KR Dice grab on the scyther , KR Rebirth press 143 on the numpad . The belt announced : 1,4,3... Sonic Blazing Punch !!
KR Rebirth punched the scyther but scyther throw KR Dice one side and the right arm was hit as it flew miles away and fled...

KR Dice: you did it ??
KR Rebirth: No ... i punch its right arm ...
KR Dice: lets head back
KR Rebirth: ok then ..

Soon both of them change back to human and went home , they saw Horie Kenta was injured with his right arm ..

Takumi: Uncle !!
Kenta: its ok ...

Soon Takumi saw the Horie Kenta's right arm is injured at the same place where KR Rebirth punch the Cicada Scyther ..

Takumi: uncle, how you injured yourself ??
Kenta: i fell over the river
Daisuke: ouch ...
Kenta: i better get going ..
Sakura and Megumi: see you then ...

Soon Takumi began to think that Horie Kenta is acting strange as a same scyther appear on the computer screen ..

Sakura: North from here
Takumi: ok !!
Daisuke: Lets do it !!

After they reach , Takumi shouted Rebirth !! Henshin !! while Dice shouted Dice !! Henshin !! As Takumi press 456 on the numpad and place in the belt while Daisuke place the card in the belt .Takumi's belt announced : Online !! and
Daisuke's belt announced : Ready Up !!
And Takumi became KR Rebirth while Daisuke became KR Dice ..

KR Rebirth: Do the same as before , grab him !
KR Dice : ok !!

KR Dice did the same thing as he did while KR Rebirth press 145 on the numpad . The belt announced 1,4,5 ... Sonic Blazing Kick !!
KR Rebirth kick the scyther as it flew under a tree and became Horie Kenta.After KR Rebirth and Dice were shocked, they change back to human and ran towards Horie Kenta .

Takumi: uncle , i never it was you ..
Kenta: Takumi , its time to tell you ..
Takumi: tell me what??
Kenta: 17 years ago... i was the one who killed your parents ..
Takumi: why ?? but i remember only the horse scyther is there ..
Kenta: After knowing i was scyther , your parents kick me out of the house and i wanted revenge . After i saw them dead then i call the horse scyther as a scapegoat, i saw you crying .. i felt guilty for letting you cry , all i wanted was you to smile .. So i was waiting for the time for someone to kill me
and i hope the last person i saw is you ...
Takumi: your time is running out ...
Kenta: ya i will melt soon ..
Takumi: uncle ...
Kenta: Tak, promise me one thing ..
Takumi: yes ??
Kenta: smile ....

After Takumi smile, Horie Kenta melted as Takumi started crying that he shouldn't have done that kick

End of ep 10 ^_^
Posted 8/9/08
hmm...although ep9 is better, but ep 10 makes me sick of battles. too much battle. does takumi ever get tired? i feel pity for him coz he dont get much rest.
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Posted 8/10/08
ep 11 tmr ^^
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