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Posted 7/4/08
geh-san. : how do u think about my story??
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Posted 7/4/08

jsbluish07 wrote:

geh-san. : how do u think about my story??
hehehe


ahehe..gomen for the l8 rply..ano, ur story is nice..it only nids some kind of twist in the story...

and most of all, u make me a bit thrilled of what will happen next...ehehe..

well i hope u get my point...ehehe
Posted 7/5/08
aha!! i get it..
hmm... wt twist?? 4 example?
ahaha... u get thrilled? woa.. thanks!!^^
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Posted 7/5/08
hmm example..
at the end there will be
something
that will make the
readers
read the
next chapter...

example the part is confession.... then at the end..
EX: Daiki: whoa!! wait! No!!!
Viniel: watch out!!

u know that? hmm.. hehehehe
then thats the ending..
Posted 7/5/08
aha!! thanks!!^^ i get it now..
tnx deen22..^^
Posted 7/5/08
Minna, this is a preview of chpter 3..!!
ahahaha..^^


“Matte yo!” Viniel shouted.
“COW! Why are you yelling early in the morning…?” Yamada smirked.
“I have a name!” Viniel hit his head.
“Hey! My precious hair…” Yamada whined.
“Childish!” Viniel commented.

---

Yamada burst out from laughing.
“Weird, why are you laughing?” Viniel asked.
“AHA!!! Were still not late…” Yamada replied and show his watch to Viniel.
“Eh? It’s still early!!! “Viniel yelled in shock.
“Our time is 8 am and it’s 7:15 only” Yamada mumbled.
“Yea... yea…” Viniel said.



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Posted 7/5/08
waah!cool preview...

anou btw, jane chan...pls do read my fanfic too..its my first time too ac2lly like you...

but its pretty long...i hope u won't get bored...
Posted 7/5/08
Geh-san : okay.. i will read it too.. but my twin loves 2 read fics
thats why i think she will loved it also..^^
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Posted 7/5/08
rily?..i'm glad...

and yeah...anou, want to be a part of it of my fic?..it wud be fun...ahehe...

i'm rily hoping u wont get bored..bcoz i'm telling u..its rily long..ehhe

dont forget to leave comments too ne?...ehhee...i just want to know if my story is great or what...ehehe...criticisms are also accepted..i can handle that...ehehe
Posted 7/5/08
whoa.. xur..^^ hehe..
thanks...^^
wee... send me the link..
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Posted 7/6/08

jsbluish07 wrote:

whoa.. xur..^^ hehe..
thanks...^^
wee... send me the link.. :)


http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-251030/Our-School-Days-a-KAT-TUN-FANFIC.html<---dats the link..enjoy...ohyeah, join JE fanfict lovers group...coz i know ur fond of fics too...cmon!hehe
Posted 7/6/08
aha!! really thanks geh-san!!
wee..^^ hope u like my fic.. haizt..
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Posted 7/6/08
of corz i like ur fic..it just only needs a funny part...hehe...

kip up the good work!gmbatte!
Posted 7/7/08
yea.. i hve a funny part also.. wee..^^
as always.. aha!!!
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