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Author's Note: This is just a prologue/preface or whatever I made as a sort of teaser. It's very vague - you've been warned! I hope you like it though. It's an original plot by me and it was inspired by the Twilight Saga. I made my own version of Edward Cullen (if you don't know him - you're missing half or your life!) but you'll find him different. The plot is totally my own and I didn't copy from Ms. Stephenie Meyer. Anyway, I've babbled enough. Just one more thing: NO STEALING PLEASE!

~||~Kismet~||~ Prologue

Fear.


It was the only distinguishable emotion among the scattered fragments of my heart. I was trapped; there was no way I could possibly escape! Tears began to form in my eyes but stubborn as I was, I did not allow them to spill.

I could only back away as much as the wall permitted (which wasn’t much at all) while he steadily advanced towards me. He was so close; I didn’t want to watch his approach any longer. I forcefully shut my eyes; opting to prepare myself for the onslaught of pain that I knew would come.

I felt his death cold fingers gently caress my pallid cheeks, shoving the tangles of my long dark hair away. I could also feel his cool breath in my ears as he slowly closed in on my exposed neck.

This time, I couldn’t fight back the moisture in my pale blue eyes; they streamed down from them like a never-ending waterfall.

I had lost all hope. No one knew where I was. No one would come and save me. I was not worth their effort anyway. In fact, no one would care enough to notice I was gone. I had no real friends; I was an outcast. To put it simply, I did not belong. I should be thankful, at least, since I was going to die in the hands of the one I loved…



Author's Note: Thanks for bothering to read. I can post the Introduction too (it's like the summary on the book cover. I made it out of boredom but it's quite nice, I think.) I know you wouldn't understand a thing about the Prologue, it's too vague. But that's actually the way I want it. So, comments whether good or bad are accepted. Please and Thank You.

COMMENTS GO HERE: ~PurpleSkye~ |x|Honest Thoughts|x|

ADDITIONAL REMINDER: Comments, if any, should be posted on a different thread. The one for the Author. I'll make mine and all authors should too if ever you would post your stuff here!
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PurpleSkye wrote:

Author's Note: This is just a prologue/preface or whatever I made as a sort of teaser. It's very vague - you've been warned! I hope you like it though. It's an original plot by me and it was inspired by the Twilight Saga. I made my own version of Edward Cullen (if you don't know him - you're missing half or your life!) but you'll find him different. The plot is totally my own and I didn't copy from Ms. Stephenie Meyer. Anyway, I've babbled enough. Just one more thing: NO STEALING PLEASE!

~||~Kismet~||~ Prologue

Fear.


It was the only distinguishable emotion among the scattered fragments of my heart. I was trapped; there was no way I could possibly escape! Tears began to form in my eyes but stubborn as I was, I did not allow them to spill.

I could only back away as much as the wall permitted (which wasn’t much at all) while he steadily advanced towards me. He was so close and I didn’t want to watch his approach any longer. I forcefully shut my eyes; opting to prepare myself for the onslaught of pain that I knew would come.

I felt his death cold fingers gently caress my pallid cheeks, shoving the tangles of my long dark hair away. I could also feel his cool breath in my ears as he was slowly closing in on my exposed neck.

This time, I couldn’t fight back the moisture in my pale blue eyes; they streamed down from them like a never-ending waterfall.

I had lost all hope. No one knew where I was. No one would come and save me. I was not worth their effort anyway. In fact, no one would care enough to notice I was gone. I had no real friends; I was an outcast. To put it simply, I did not belong. I should be thankful, at least, since I was going to die in the hands of the one I loved…



Author's Note: Thanks for bothering to read. I can post the Introduction too (it's like the summary on the book cover. I made it out of boredom but it's quite nice, I think.) I know you wouldn't understand a thing about the Prologue, it's too vague. But that's actually the way I want it. So, comments whether good or bad are accepted. Please and Thank You.

ADDITIONAL REMINDER: Comments, if any, should be posted on a different thread. The one for the Author. I'll make mine and all authors should too if ever you would post your stuff here!


aw man im intrigued i want more...
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brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:

Author's Note: This is just a prologue/preface or whatever I made as a sort of teaser. It's very vague - you've been warned! I hope you like it though. It's an original plot by me and it was inspired by the Twilight Saga. I made my own version of Edward Cullen (if you don't know him - you're missing half or your life!) but you'll find him different. The plot is totally my own and I didn't copy from Ms. Stephenie Meyer. Anyway, I've babbled enough. Just one more thing: NO STEALING PLEASE!

~||~Kismet~||~ Prologue

Fear.


It was the only distinguishable emotion among the scattered fragments of my heart. I was trapped; there was no way I could possibly escape! Tears began to form in my eyes but stubborn as I was, I did not allow them to spill.

I could only back away as much as the wall permitted (which wasn’t much at all) while he steadily advanced towards me. He was so close and I didn’t want to watch his approach any longer. I forcefully shut my eyes; opting to prepare myself for the onslaught of pain that I knew would come.

I felt his death cold fingers gently caress my pallid cheeks, shoving the tangles of my long dark hair away. I could also feel his cool breath in my ears as he was slowly closing in on my exposed neck.

This time, I couldn’t fight back the moisture in my pale blue eyes; they streamed down from them like a never-ending waterfall.

I had lost all hope. No one knew where I was. No one would come and save me. I was not worth their effort anyway. In fact, no one would care enough to notice I was gone. I had no real friends; I was an outcast. To put it simply, I did not belong. I should be thankful, at least, since I was going to die in the hands of the one I loved…



Author's Note: Thanks for bothering to read. I can post the Introduction too (it's like the summary on the book cover. I made it out of boredom but it's quite nice, I think.) I know you wouldn't understand a thing about the Prologue, it's too vague. But that's actually the way I want it. So, comments whether good or bad are accepted. Please and Thank You.

ADDITIONAL REMINDER: Comments, if any, should be posted on a different thread. The one for the Author. I'll make mine and all authors should too if ever you would post your stuff here!


aw man im intrigued i want more...


Though I thank you for that comment..

OOOOPSSS...comments shouldn't be in this thread!!! It should be on the Author's Comment Thread. Mine is the "~PurpleSkye~ |x|Honest Thoughts|x|"!
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