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I called my Comment Thread as "Honest Thoughts" because I want you to tell me honestly what you think. I don't care if it's positive or negative. Point out my mistakes so that I'll be able to correct them so as not to make the same mistakes twice, thrice, etc.

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ok there sorry about the other comment...but yeah i want more...
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ok there sorry about the other comment...but yeah i want more...


It's all right. But, I don't think I will update that story anymore. It's an original and I'm afraid of someone stealing it (and no, it's not an excuse because I'm lazy to write chapter 1 ^^,). I hope the Prologue/Preface had done what I wanted (that is to intrigue readers and make them want to read more and more), though... ^^, But I'm also very sorry for this.
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brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:

ok there sorry about the other comment...but yeah i want more...


It's all right. But, I don't think I will update that story anymore. It's an original and I'm afraid of someone stealing it (and no, it's not an excuse because I'm lazy to write chapter 1 ^^,). I hope the Prologue/Preface had done what I wanted (that is to intrigue readers and make them want to read more and more), though... ^^, But I'm also very sorry for this.


its ok and i don't blame you if the prologue is that good the actual story must be amazing so i could see how you wouldn't want it to get stolen....
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brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:

ok there sorry about the other comment...but yeah i want more...


It's all right. But, I don't think I will update that story anymore. It's an original and I'm afraid of someone stealing it (and no, it's not an excuse because I'm lazy to write chapter 1 ^^,). I hope the Prologue/Preface had done what I wanted (that is to intrigue readers and make them want to read more and more), though... ^^, But I'm also very sorry for this.


its ok and i don't blame you if the prologue is that good the actual story must be amazing so i could see how you wouldn't want it to get stolen....


That's not exactly what i meant to say by that... Hahahaha...Is it really good..? ^^, Well, I already experienced someone stealing my stories so I'm a bit traumatized. Hahahaha...
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PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:

ok there sorry about the other comment...but yeah i want more...


It's all right. But, I don't think I will update that story anymore. It's an original and I'm afraid of someone stealing it (and no, it's not an excuse because I'm lazy to write chapter 1 ^^,). I hope the Prologue/Preface had done what I wanted (that is to intrigue readers and make them want to read more and more), though... ^^, But I'm also very sorry for this.


its ok and i don't blame you if the prologue is that good the actual story must be amazing so i could see how you wouldn't want it to get stolen....


That's not exactly what i meant to say by that... Hahahaha...Is it really good..? ^^, Well, I already experienced someone stealing my stories so I'm a bit traumatized. Hahahaha...


yeah it is....and oh that sucks...

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brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:

ok there sorry about the other comment...but yeah i want more...


It's all right. But, I don't think I will update that story anymore. It's an original and I'm afraid of someone stealing it (and no, it's not an excuse because I'm lazy to write chapter 1 ^^,). I hope the Prologue/Preface had done what I wanted (that is to intrigue readers and make them want to read more and more), though... ^^, But I'm also very sorry for this.


its ok and i don't blame you if the prologue is that good the actual story must be amazing so i could see how you wouldn't want it to get stolen....


That's not exactly what i meant to say by that... Hahahaha...Is it really good..? ^^, Well, I already experienced someone stealing my stories so I'm a bit traumatized. Hahahaha...


yeah it is....and oh that sucks...



Thanks so much! ^^, Can you please try reading my other story, I'll be sure to update that one!
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PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:

ok there sorry about the other comment...but yeah i want more...


It's all right. But, I don't think I will update that story anymore. It's an original and I'm afraid of someone stealing it (and no, it's not an excuse because I'm lazy to write chapter 1 ^^,). I hope the Prologue/Preface had done what I wanted (that is to intrigue readers and make them want to read more and more), though... ^^, But I'm also very sorry for this.


its ok and i don't blame you if the prologue is that good the actual story must be amazing so i could see how you wouldn't want it to get stolen....


That's not exactly what i meant to say by that... Hahahaha...Is it really good..? ^^, Well, I already experienced someone stealing my stories so I'm a bit traumatized. Hahahaha...


yeah it is....and oh that sucks...



Thanks so much! ^^, Can you please try reading my other story, I'll be sure to update that one!


sure...is it in the threads...
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Posted 7/10/08
wow that was good... cant wait for more...
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brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:

wow that was good... cant wait for more...


Thanks! I'll be updating today, so I hope you read it! ^^,
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brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:

wow that was good... cant wait for more...


Thanks! I'll be updating today, so I hope you read it! ^^,


ok i will then ill tell you how it was...

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PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:

wow that was good... cant wait for more...


Thanks! I'll be updating today, so I hope you read it! ^^,


ok i will then ill tell you how it was...



That would be nice, thanks! ^^,
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Posted 7/12/08

PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


brotherhoodofthewolf wrote:

wow that was good... cant wait for more...


Thanks! I'll be updating today, so I hope you read it! ^^,


ok i will then ill tell you how it was...



That would be nice, thanks! ^^,


np and it was great cant wait for the next chapter...
Posted 8/27/08
Very few mistakes.

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Very few mistakes.



Aww...thanks! Did you edit anything..?
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