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milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:

i read kismet and i think the whole thing with the i lost hope makes it seem like someone is gonna come i know its like foreshadowing but it sorta feels obvious
so someone was trying to kill her and she backed away right so im confused at the end where it says shes in the hands so is she at the wall or in the hand


Thanks for your comment! ^^, I appreciate it very much.

And BTW, of course someone's going to come! I needed to make that part a bit subtle though so I wrote the "i lost hope" thing (the character didn't know someone was coming, even though I did! hahaha...)! I somewhat intended it to be that way.

Well, she was at the wall but the one she loved was the one going to kill her so that's why I said she'd die in the hands of the one she loved... ^^, Hope that made sense... >.< Hahaha...


whys the guy she like gonna kill her?
and somehow magically someone else who likes her comes into the scene lol


Well, that question could be answered if you read the whole of my story but since I'm not going to be posting it up... it'll be okay to tell you! hahaha... ^^,



I hope that explains it...


so her friend magically comes into the scene


You got that right! lol


so why does she like him?


Well aside from that guy is TOTALLY HANDSOME (not that her best friend isn't, though, her best friend is a hottie too!)...she feels as if they have so much in common and he was always so nice to her...so... yeah.


but doesnt she have more things in common with her best friend
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milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:

i read kismet and i think the whole thing with the i lost hope makes it seem like someone is gonna come i know its like foreshadowing but it sorta feels obvious
so someone was trying to kill her and she backed away right so im confused at the end where it says shes in the hands so is she at the wall or in the hand


Thanks for your comment! ^^, I appreciate it very much.

And BTW, of course someone's going to come! I needed to make that part a bit subtle though so I wrote the "i lost hope" thing (the character didn't know someone was coming, even though I did! hahaha...)! I somewhat intended it to be that way.

Well, she was at the wall but the one she loved was the one going to kill her so that's why I said she'd die in the hands of the one she loved... ^^, Hope that made sense... >.< Hahaha...


whys the guy she like gonna kill her?
and somehow magically someone else who likes her comes into the scene lol


Well, that question could be answered if you read the whole of my story but since I'm not going to be posting it up... it'll be okay to tell you! hahaha... ^^,



I hope that explains it...


so her friend magically comes into the scene


You got that right! lol


so why does she like him?


Well aside from that guy is TOTALLY HANDSOME (not that her best friend isn't, though, her best friend is a hottie too!)...she feels as if they have so much in common and he was always so nice to her...so... yeah.


but doesnt she have more things in common with her best friend


Well, her best friend drives her crazy... Their relationship is weird, they always argue (like 24/7) but they are close friends...
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Posted 11/14/08

PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:

i read kismet and i think the whole thing with the i lost hope makes it seem like someone is gonna come i know its like foreshadowing but it sorta feels obvious
so someone was trying to kill her and she backed away right so im confused at the end where it says shes in the hands so is she at the wall or in the hand


Thanks for your comment! ^^, I appreciate it very much.

And BTW, of course someone's going to come! I needed to make that part a bit subtle though so I wrote the "i lost hope" thing (the character didn't know someone was coming, even though I did! hahaha...)! I somewhat intended it to be that way.

Well, she was at the wall but the one she loved was the one going to kill her so that's why I said she'd die in the hands of the one she loved... ^^, Hope that made sense... >.< Hahaha...


whys the guy she like gonna kill her?
and somehow magically someone else who likes her comes into the scene lol


Well, that question could be answered if you read the whole of my story but since I'm not going to be posting it up... it'll be okay to tell you! hahaha... ^^,



I hope that explains it...


so her friend magically comes into the scene


You got that right! lol


so why does she like him?


Well aside from that guy is TOTALLY HANDSOME (not that her best friend isn't, though, her best friend is a hottie too!)...she feels as if they have so much in common and he was always so nice to her...so... yeah.


but doesnt she have more things in common with her best friend


Well, her best friend drives her crazy... Their relationship is weird, they always argue (like 24/7) but they are close friends...


does her friend like her?
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Posted 11/14/08

milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:

i read kismet and i think the whole thing with the i lost hope makes it seem like someone is gonna come i know its like foreshadowing but it sorta feels obvious
so someone was trying to kill her and she backed away right so im confused at the end where it says shes in the hands so is she at the wall or in the hand


Thanks for your comment! ^^, I appreciate it very much.

And BTW, of course someone's going to come! I needed to make that part a bit subtle though so I wrote the "i lost hope" thing (the character didn't know someone was coming, even though I did! hahaha...)! I somewhat intended it to be that way.

Well, she was at the wall but the one she loved was the one going to kill her so that's why I said she'd die in the hands of the one she loved... ^^, Hope that made sense... >.< Hahaha...


whys the guy she like gonna kill her?
and somehow magically someone else who likes her comes into the scene lol


Well, that question could be answered if you read the whole of my story but since I'm not going to be posting it up... it'll be okay to tell you! hahaha... ^^,



I hope that explains it...


so her friend magically comes into the scene


You got that right! lol


so why does she like him?


Well aside from that guy is TOTALLY HANDSOME (not that her best friend isn't, though, her best friend is a hottie too!)...she feels as if they have so much in common and he was always so nice to her...so... yeah.


but doesnt she have more things in common with her best friend


Well, her best friend drives her crazy... Their relationship is weird, they always argue (like 24/7) but they are close friends...


does her friend like her?


Yes, a lot. ^^, So it was very painful for him to find out she fell in love with someone else...
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Posted 11/14/08

PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:

i read kismet and i think the whole thing with the i lost hope makes it seem like someone is gonna come i know its like foreshadowing but it sorta feels obvious
so someone was trying to kill her and she backed away right so im confused at the end where it says shes in the hands so is she at the wall or in the hand


Thanks for your comment! ^^, I appreciate it very much.

And BTW, of course someone's going to come! I needed to make that part a bit subtle though so I wrote the "i lost hope" thing (the character didn't know someone was coming, even though I did! hahaha...)! I somewhat intended it to be that way.

Well, she was at the wall but the one she loved was the one going to kill her so that's why I said she'd die in the hands of the one she loved... ^^, Hope that made sense... >.< Hahaha...


whys the guy she like gonna kill her?
and somehow magically someone else who likes her comes into the scene lol


Well, that question could be answered if you read the whole of my story but since I'm not going to be posting it up... it'll be okay to tell you! hahaha... ^^,



I hope that explains it...


so her friend magically comes into the scene


You got that right! lol


so why does she like him?


Well aside from that guy is TOTALLY HANDSOME (not that her best friend isn't, though, her best friend is a hottie too!)...she feels as if they have so much in common and he was always so nice to her...so... yeah.


but doesnt she have more things in common with her best friend


Well, her best friend drives her crazy... Their relationship is weird, they always argue (like 24/7) but they are close friends...


does her friend like her?


Yes, a lot. ^^, So it was very painful for him to find out she fell in love with someone else...


is this a chatroom
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Posted 11/14/08

milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:

i read kismet and i think the whole thing with the i lost hope makes it seem like someone is gonna come i know its like foreshadowing but it sorta feels obvious
so someone was trying to kill her and she backed away right so im confused at the end where it says shes in the hands so is she at the wall or in the hand


Thanks for your comment! ^^, I appreciate it very much.

And BTW, of course someone's going to come! I needed to make that part a bit subtle though so I wrote the "i lost hope" thing (the character didn't know someone was coming, even though I did! hahaha...)! I somewhat intended it to be that way.

Well, she was at the wall but the one she loved was the one going to kill her so that's why I said she'd die in the hands of the one she loved... ^^, Hope that made sense... >.< Hahaha...


whys the guy she like gonna kill her?
and somehow magically someone else who likes her comes into the scene lol


Well, that question could be answered if you read the whole of my story but since I'm not going to be posting it up... it'll be okay to tell you! hahaha... ^^,



I hope that explains it...


so her friend magically comes into the scene


You got that right! lol


so why does she like him?


Well aside from that guy is TOTALLY HANDSOME (not that her best friend isn't, though, her best friend is a hottie too!)...she feels as if they have so much in common and he was always so nice to her...so... yeah.


but doesnt she have more things in common with her best friend


Well, her best friend drives her crazy... Their relationship is weird, they always argue (like 24/7) but they are close friends...


does her friend like her?


Yes, a lot. ^^, So it was very painful for him to find out she fell in love with someone else...


is this a chatroom


Not really, but it looks like one right now! hahaha... ^^, It's okay 'cause we're not out of topic anyway...
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Posted 11/15/08

PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:

i read kismet and i think the whole thing with the i lost hope makes it seem like someone is gonna come i know its like foreshadowing but it sorta feels obvious
so someone was trying to kill her and she backed away right so im confused at the end where it says shes in the hands so is she at the wall or in the hand


Thanks for your comment! ^^, I appreciate it very much.

And BTW, of course someone's going to come! I needed to make that part a bit subtle though so I wrote the "i lost hope" thing (the character didn't know someone was coming, even though I did! hahaha...)! I somewhat intended it to be that way.

Well, she was at the wall but the one she loved was the one going to kill her so that's why I said she'd die in the hands of the one she loved... ^^, Hope that made sense... >.< Hahaha...


whys the guy she like gonna kill her?
and somehow magically someone else who likes her comes into the scene lol


Well, that question could be answered if you read the whole of my story but since I'm not going to be posting it up... it'll be okay to tell you! hahaha... ^^,



I hope that explains it...


so her friend magically comes into the scene


You got that right! lol


so why does she like him?


Well aside from that guy is TOTALLY HANDSOME (not that her best friend isn't, though, her best friend is a hottie too!)...she feels as if they have so much in common and he was always so nice to her...so... yeah.


but doesnt she have more things in common with her best friend


Well, her best friend drives her crazy... Their relationship is weird, they always argue (like 24/7) but they are close friends...


does her friend like her?


Yes, a lot. ^^, So it was very painful for him to find out she fell in love with someone else...


is this a chatroom


Not really, but it looks like one right now! hahaha... ^^, It's okay 'cause we're not out of topic anyway...


did she tell him she liked that guy or did he just notice it
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Posted 11/15/08

milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:

i read kismet and i think the whole thing with the i lost hope makes it seem like someone is gonna come i know its like foreshadowing but it sorta feels obvious
so someone was trying to kill her and she backed away right so im confused at the end where it says shes in the hands so is she at the wall or in the hand


Thanks for your comment! ^^, I appreciate it very much.

And BTW, of course someone's going to come! I needed to make that part a bit subtle though so I wrote the "i lost hope" thing (the character didn't know someone was coming, even though I did! hahaha...)! I somewhat intended it to be that way.

Well, she was at the wall but the one she loved was the one going to kill her so that's why I said she'd die in the hands of the one she loved... ^^, Hope that made sense... >.< Hahaha...


whys the guy she like gonna kill her?
and somehow magically someone else who likes her comes into the scene lol


Well, that question could be answered if you read the whole of my story but since I'm not going to be posting it up... it'll be okay to tell you! hahaha... ^^,



I hope that explains it...


so her friend magically comes into the scene


You got that right! lol


so why does she like him?


Well aside from that guy is TOTALLY HANDSOME (not that her best friend isn't, though, her best friend is a hottie too!)...she feels as if they have so much in common and he was always so nice to her...so... yeah.


but doesnt she have more things in common with her best friend


Well, her best friend drives her crazy... Their relationship is weird, they always argue (like 24/7) but they are close friends...


does her friend like her?


Yes, a lot. ^^, So it was very painful for him to find out she fell in love with someone else...


is this a chatroom


Not really, but it looks like one right now! hahaha... ^^, It's okay 'cause we're not out of topic anyway...


did she tell him she liked that guy or did he just notice it


Well, I haven't really gotten into that part of the story but when I picture the scene in my head, she doesn't say it directly...she just babbles a lot about him and they get into a g\fight...that's why her best friend is almost too late saving her life..! ^^,
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PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:

i read kismet and i think the whole thing with the i lost hope makes it seem like someone is gonna come i know its like foreshadowing but it sorta feels obvious
so someone was trying to kill her and she backed away right so im confused at the end where it says shes in the hands so is she at the wall or in the hand


Thanks for your comment! ^^, I appreciate it very much.

And BTW, of course someone's going to come! I needed to make that part a bit subtle though so I wrote the "i lost hope" thing (the character didn't know someone was coming, even though I did! hahaha...)! I somewhat intended it to be that way.

Well, she was at the wall but the one she loved was the one going to kill her so that's why I said she'd die in the hands of the one she loved... ^^, Hope that made sense... >.< Hahaha...


whys the guy she like gonna kill her?
and somehow magically someone else who likes her comes into the scene lol


Well, that question could be answered if you read the whole of my story but since I'm not going to be posting it up... it'll be okay to tell you! hahaha... ^^,



I hope that explains it...


so her friend magically comes into the scene


You got that right! lol


so why does she like him?


Well aside from that guy is TOTALLY HANDSOME (not that her best friend isn't, though, her best friend is a hottie too!)...she feels as if they have so much in common and he was always so nice to her...so... yeah.


but doesnt she have more things in common with her best friend


Well, her best friend drives her crazy... Their relationship is weird, they always argue (like 24/7) but they are close friends...


does her friend like her?


Yes, a lot. ^^, So it was very painful for him to find out she fell in love with someone else...


is this a chatroom


Not really, but it looks like one right now! hahaha... ^^, It's okay 'cause we're not out of topic anyway...


did she tell him she liked that guy or did he just notice it


Well, I haven't really gotten into that part of the story but when I picture the scene in my head, she doesn't say it directly...she just babbles a lot about him and they get into a g\fight...that's why her best friend is almost too late saving her life..! ^^,


wow babbling on and on about a guy to a guy that likes you thats a classic
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milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


milknc00ki3s wrote:

i read kismet and i think the whole thing with the i lost hope makes it seem like someone is gonna come i know its like foreshadowing but it sorta feels obvious
so someone was trying to kill her and she backed away right so im confused at the end where it says shes in the hands so is she at the wall or in the hand


Thanks for your comment! ^^, I appreciate it very much.

And BTW, of course someone's going to come! I needed to make that part a bit subtle though so I wrote the "i lost hope" thing (the character didn't know someone was coming, even though I did! hahaha...)! I somewhat intended it to be that way.

Well, she was at the wall but the one she loved was the one going to kill her so that's why I said she'd die in the hands of the one she loved... ^^, Hope that made sense... >.< Hahaha...


whys the guy she like gonna kill her?
and somehow magically someone else who likes her comes into the scene lol


Well, that question could be answered if you read the whole of my story but since I'm not going to be posting it up... it'll be okay to tell you! hahaha... ^^,



I hope that explains it...


so her friend magically comes into the scene


You got that right! lol


so why does she like him?


Well aside from that guy is TOTALLY HANDSOME (not that her best friend isn't, though, her best friend is a hottie too!)...she feels as if they have so much in common and he was always so nice to her...so... yeah.


but doesnt she have more things in common with her best friend


Well, her best friend drives her crazy... Their relationship is weird, they always argue (like 24/7) but they are close friends...


does her friend like her?


Yes, a lot. ^^, So it was very painful for him to find out she fell in love with someone else...


is this a chatroom


Not really, but it looks like one right now! hahaha... ^^, It's okay 'cause we're not out of topic anyway...


did she tell him she liked that guy or did he just notice it


Well, I haven't really gotten into that part of the story but when I picture the scene in my head, she doesn't say it directly...she just babbles a lot about him and they get into a g\fight...that's why her best friend is almost too late saving her life..! ^^,


wow babbling on and on about a guy to a guy that likes you thats a classic


Hahaha... Yeah. I wanted a bit of cliche in my story! Hahaha... I feel sorry for him though... >.<
Posted 5/31/09
i read the short story in the other group!!! :DDD woooo!! lol sorry i just felt like saying that xD
Posted 5/31/09
and... one other thing.. PEOPLE. USE SPOILERS! XD
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i read the short story in the other group!!! :DDD woooo!! lol sorry i just felt like saying that xD


Hahaha... I read yours too... It was creepy but sweet! XD
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and... one other thing.. PEOPLE. USE SPOILERS! XD


Yeah, I know I should have but you know... I forgot. XD
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i dont know what i was thinking XD
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