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Well this is my new fanfic done by me *^^*
i had to name it Tantei Gakuen because its supposed to be Detective School
Here's how it is like~!!

The new detective school is a very famous school for children up to young adults. There are new people coming in but can they make it through the school? They seem to be a michiveous bunch of children. Can the detective teachers teach them properly? There seems to be cases given to the children. But who? Why?

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The new term begins, new students walk in the hallways, what will be in stored for them, will be a secret until they find out.
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WOAH!!
Interesting!!
and I love the characters!! ^-^
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haha.. i think i was typing them like some sort of composition o_o
^^ i wanna do detective for a change
cos alot of people are doing school things haha
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hahaha!!
I'm really interested in detective stuffs!!
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seems very interesting!! even their characters sound interesting!!
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yayayah!!
go for it h4Ck~rin!! ^-^
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yosh!go for it h4ck chan!!!can't wait for the part 1 of it..hehe

are u going to join the contest?...hehe

cmon join!
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yeahh..
can't wait 4 da 1st part~~
hehe
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waa~~
can't waiit..
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yosh!go for it h4ck chan!!!can't wait for the part 1 of it..hehe

are u going to join the contest?...hehe

cmon join!


yea i'm gonna join..
but this one is not counted in it ^^
this is the fanfic i'm doing for fun
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wa! is this a serious fanfic? i mean, not a comedy fanfic just like in yamada ryosuke group? waaa!! can't wait! XD
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haha.. it also has abit of comedy ne?
^^ i can't live without putting comedy routines in my fanfics~~!!!^^
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Comedy??
AWESOME!! ^-^
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ah~!! first chapter has come ^_~

"ahh!!" Yuto runs away from the enemy. "i won't let you hurt Yamada~kun!!! GO DIE!!!" Yuto shouted at the enemy and kicks him in the stomach with full force.
"Yuto~kun!!" Yamada shouted at Yuto, while tied up to a chair.
"Yamada!!" he shouted as he ran towards Yamada to quickly untie the rope.
"oh Yuto~kun, my hero~!!" Yamada said romantically with eyes like a girls'.
"come here and give your hero a kiss" Yuto said near Yamada's face. Yamada was shocked but gave in with his slightly blushed face "oh~ Yuto~kun~!" giving a gently kiss.

"YUTO!! WAKE UP!!"
"YUTOO!!!!
"I'm up i'm up!" Yuto said as he got up from bed. "ah.. it was all a dream" Yuto sighed, picking up a framed picture of Yamada, he looked at it and said "someday... i will protect you"
"YUTOO!!!! BREAKFAST!!!"
"OK!!!!!" Yuto said, rushing downstairs.

"cereal again? mom! i'm supposed to have cool food like what detective has!!" Yuto whined and complained.
"shut up and eat your food brat!" Yuto's brother pushed his head into the cereal. "onii~san!!" Yuto whined.

Running out of the door, Yuto shouted "itekimasu!!!"
"YUTO! YUTO!! YOU FORGOT YOUR UNDERWEAR!!!!" Yuto's mom shouted in return.
"what underwear?!" Yuto shouted as he cycled off to his new Detective School, Tantei Gakuen. He met Yamada on the way there.

"ohyo" Yamada said to Yuto with a sweet smile that made 'me' melt. [xD]
"o-ohyo" Yuto said, turning away to avoid facing Yamada. Yamada was puzzled and said to Yuto "did you have a dream about me kissing you this time again?" Yamada quickly said. Yuto blushed alot and said in reply "n-no... why would i have those dreams? i'm not gay you know" avoiding Yamada's face.
"yea.. i know you very well.. well enough to know that you dream about me kissing you" Yamada replied, eating his bread he was holding. "h-hey! thats enough! Yuto shouted at Yamada and faced him. Yuto's face was incredibly near to Yamada's and Yuto blushed instantly. "r-right" Yuto said in shyness.

"ah! we're here.. behave on your first day, i'm not going to take care of you this time" Yamada said quickly to Yuto. "what are you talking about?! your not my care-take!" Yuto shouted back.

"have you got your handphone?"
"yes"
"have you got your money?"
"got it"
"have you got your water bottle?"
"yup"
"have you got your underwear?"
"right here... eh.. HEY!!!"

"and you said i wasn't your caretaker" Yamada said walking away. "wait up!" Yuto ran as fast as he could to Yamada. "wow! a crowd?!" Yuto said in amazement. Yamada entered the crowd and then went out of the crowd. "what was that about?" Yuto asked. Yamada faced him and replied "i'm jinxed with you" and walked away. "huh?! what?!" Yuto responded quickly. "where are you going?"
"to the classroom of course" Yamada said in reply. "how do you know which classroom it is?" Yuto asked. Yamada walked somemore and turned around and said "just follow me". "ahh! yes!!" Yuto replied quickly, chasing after Yamada.

"ah.. the classroom" Yamada said as he opened the door and entered.
"OHYO!!!!" someone greeted. "so your in the classroom too?" the person looked all around Yamada and Yuto's body and checked every single spot. "wow! your amazing!" he pointed at Yamada. "its a shame your friends with this guy" he looked at Yuto with sharp eyes. Yuto turned to him in anger and shouted "WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!" Yamada quickly turned and faced Yuto with his angered eyes. "yes.. boss..." Yuto said quickly back. Yamada walked in and took his seat, he looked around and saw 3 other people.

"Good morning" the teached said as he entered the class. "you guys have been chosen to be in the Detective School, Tantei Gakuen. It isn't an easy school to be admitted into. If you have any fear of heights, robbery or any other such, please leave your seat and leave this school."

The students just stared at him.

"ah! anyways.. my name.. is Kamenashi Kazuya. The number 1 detective in this school! Well, except for the master that is."

"who's the master?" Yamada said with his cool and composed face. "that you shouldn't or needn't to know" Kamenashi replied. "anyways! lets start on greetings! my favourite part~!" Kamenashi said with a cute, happy face of his.

"I'm Kamenashi Kazuya. I will be your teacher here. I'm ONLY 22 years old and please have fun with me!"

"My name is Morimoto Ryutaro. I'm 13 years old and i'm happy to be here! My friends said i look like a chipmunk because of my face"

"Hai! My name is Nakajima Yuto! I'm 15 this year and i l-*Yamada covered his mouth and looked at him with angered eyes* ah! n-nice to meet you!"

"I'm Morimoto Shintaro! I'm Ryutaro's brother! I'm 11 this year~ and i'm very happy to be here!!"

"Chinen Yuuri desu! My friends say if i have ears and a tail i'll be like a squirrel. I love sitting on people's laps so please let me do so! Thank you very much!" *bows*

"I'm Yamada Ryosuke. I'm ONLY 15 years old. *cough*younger than kamenashi*cough* and i hope to do well here. I'll be in your hands."

"so you like to mock me eh?!" Kamenashi said to Yamada. "i'm just stating the truth" Yamada replied looking out of the window"

"anyways.. this is what you guys are best at.. i will explain to you on how you did during the tests." Kamenashi said to the class.

"Morimoto Ryutaro and Morimoto Shintaro, often called the Morimoto Brothers, have special techniques that can only be used between them"

"Nakajima Yuto, only seems to fight back in full force when Yamada is harmed, pretty much useless, i guess we can use Yamada as a decoy then"

"Chinen Yuuri, despite his cuteness, his acrobatic skills are tops"

"Yamada Ryosuke, his intelligence skills are best and a very composed character. When doing investigations and hanging out, his appearance will change drastically"

"ok! so thats what you know about each other. So right now, i'm the best agility fighter in this school."

"that means he never uses his brains" Ryosuke muttered to Yuto and Yuto laughed softly. "I HEARD THAT!" Kamenashi shouted and threw a chalk at Ryosuke. Ryosuke caught it quickly with his bare hands. Everyone turned to him in amazement. Ryosuke threw it back "i think this belongs to you", Kamenashi caught it and said "y-yea.." and read the chalk that was printed on it so what did you think, kame~chan ♥. Kamenashi quickly turned to face Yamada who was looking at him with a slight smile.

"ahh! break time so fast! i have nothing to do.. *yawn*" Yamada said going out of the classroom. Kamenashi quickly turned to Yamada and said "Yama~chan ♥ wait here please~" Kamenashi said with a fake happy smile. Yamada turned and made a small laugh and said in reply "of course~ ♥" with an even more fake happy smile. Yuto turned and saw both of them making fake smiles and was shocked but walked away.

"So.. you think you can mock me eh?" Kamenashi said as he faced Yamada.
"i heard girls are all over you?"
"heh.. so you know me well?"
"of course i have to know you well, i have to defeat you don't i?"
"thats impossible don't you think? you should just be a nice little boy and do your work as a student"
"then do your work as a teacher first"

Kamenashi looked at him with a shocked face. "why don't you take off your glasses? don't try to look smart. its not working." Yamada said as he took off Kamenashi's glasses.

From outside, Yuto was watching Yamada take off Kamenashi's glasses, in his imagination, he saw Yamada with a blushed face as if he was ready to kiss Kamenashi" Yuto turned red with anger and did a flying kick on the window and as soon as he landed in the classroom, he shouted "YAMADA IS MINE!! LET GO OF HIM!!" Yamada walked up to Yuto. "Yamada~kun.." Yuto said in happiness with a blushed face.

"ouch!" Yuto shouted when Yamada punched him in his face. "what kind of image were you imprinting now?" Yamada said as he faced Yuto.

"i think Yamada has a fan club right?" Kamenashi said as he faced them. "The creator is Nakajima Yuto isn't he?"

Yuto stared at him and blushed.

"This is none of your concern, we're going" Yamada said as he took Yuto's hand and went out of the broken window. Yuto looked at his hand and blushed happily.

Later on, Yamada lectured Yuto to reflect on what he did earlier.

"Kame?" Jin said as he walked in. "ah! Jin." Kame turned to Jin.
"have you found some interesting boys?" Jin asked Kame. "just one... a very interesting one" Kame said as he turned to where Yamada was.

"very interesting indeed, can you search for his profile and his past?" Kame asked Jin.
"yea.. no problem..." he said as he faced Yamada playing with Yuto, Chinen, Shintaro and Ryutaro.

Yamada has turned out to catch the eye of Kamenashi Kazuya. but why?...



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finally!!
I've finished reading it!!

btw..
I thought there was going to be just a bit of comedy??
I was like laughing the whole time!!
I extremely love it!! *fangirling*

Yamada's soOoo cool!!
Shin's there!! *melts*
Kame is also there?? AWESOMENESS!!
And I love Yuto's gay-ness!! ^-^

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