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hahahaha!!! xD
i thought it was abit.. oh well~~~
i can't leave my comedy-ness in the toilet can i?

hahaha!! Yuto's gay-ness is always there
muahahaha!!
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kyaa! i love it h4ck chan! u rily have a great sense of humour!

esp yuto's part...it rily makes me laugh...
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me too!!
I love it h4Ck~rin!!
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hmm.. somehow i love to bully Yuto..
hahaha!!!
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aahhahahah...that was funny..great story h2CkSigN!!!!!
can't wait till next part!!
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more h4Ck~rin!!
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2nd chapter minna *^^* hai! dozo~
this is abit sad ok~? ^^ but its just to show how Yuto and Yamada are very good friends.

"Ding Dong Ding Dong" the bell rang and it was time for school. Everybody walked to their respective classrooms.

"is everybody here today? let me take the attendance..." Kamenashi said to the classroom when they were all seated already.

Yamada looked out the window and mumbled to himself "why does he even need to take attendance if theres only 5 people in this classroom....."

Kamenashi immediately heard this and threw a duster towards Yamada, but Yamada instincts were too high and he had caught it. Everybody stared at him with big eyes. Yamada looked at all 4 of them staring at him and was annoyed by that.

"SUGOI!!!! YAMA~CHAN SUGOI NE!!!!" Yuto jumped and shouted in the middle of the silence. The whole class started laughing alot at Yuto, Yamada made a small laugh to himself but Yuto caught Yamada's laugh and smiled back at him.

"alright alright.. thats enough.. Yuto.. return back to your seat" Kamenashi shouted. Yuto was embarrassed because he just figured out in the middle of the silence, he suddenly jumped and shouted something stupid. He shyly went back to sit down and caught Yamada smiling a sweet smile back to him. Yuto was overjoyed and turned back to his notebook and blushed heavily. What Yuto didn't realise was that Yamada was writing "Yuto~kun ♥" on his notebook. The class ended and they were to start their next subject. Another teacher walked in...

"ah! Jin! Everyone~ this is your maths teacher, Akanishi Jin~ please be nice to him~" Kamenashi suddenly said to the class.

"Yoroshkune" Jin said, bowing down.

"heehhh.. so Jin is your lover? Kaaaame~chan~ ♥?" Yamada said with a fake smile.

Kamenashi annoyed and embarrassed by that since Jin was standing right there went and reply back "of course not~ he has a girlfriend of course~ right Jin?" Kamenashi faced Jin who was slightly annoyed by his answer. Jin went up to Kamenashi and forced him against the wall. There, he spoke quietly, "so that boy is your lover eh? then am i a substitute?" Kamenashi was surprised at what Jin said. Kamenashi, having a crush on Jin for 8 years, slightly blushed and turned away. "Th-theres class now.. i had better leave.. the class is staring at us" Kamenashi said awkwardly. He ran out of the room, blushing heavily.

"ah.." Jin said, combing his hair with his fingers. "Sorry you had to see that~ we were having a friendly argument"

Yamada saw through Jin and saw the Kamenashi was blushing when he left the classroom. He quickly found out what happened.

"ah! are we going to learn how to do matrices today, sensei?" Chinen spoked up.

Jin turned to Chinen and replied "yes we are. do you like that subject?"

"yes! very much!" Chinen replied with his enthusiastic-ness. "because that's Ohno's favourite subject in maths ne~" he smiled very happily. Jin looked at him and said "oh.. you like Ohno?" Chinen blushed and said "yup! very much!"

Chinen didn't know that Ohno had hatred to Tantei Gakuen and therefore became an enemy of the Tantei Gakuen. Jin knew this but kept it a secret in order not to hurt Chinen. Instead, he just smiled and said "he's a very nice guy isn't he?" and turned away to the board to write some things down.

"sensei! write bigger! i can't see!" Yuto shouted out.

Jin, being annoyed by people keeping on asking him to write bigger, started shouting at Yuto "WHY DID YOU SIT AT THE BACK THEN?! JUST COME TO THE FRONT AND COPY YOU FRIGGIN BASTARD!!!!"

Yuto was very shocked and scared at Jin. Not only him, but everyone else as well.

"ah!" Jin had returned to his normal cool self and said "sorry.. just come to the front.. i need alot of space on the board so i have to write small" and gave a warm smile.

Yuto confused at this, just stayed at his seat and copied Yamada's work.

"sir!" Ryutaro began.
"can you explain question 4?" Shintaro continued.
"we find it very hard" Ryutaro said after that.
"so we need help with it" Shintaro and Ryutaro said together.

Jin surprised at the way they talked, began "uh.. does anybody know how to do question 4?"

Only one hand was raised up, Yamada's hand. "yes.. i know.."

Jin purposely ignored Yamada and said "oh? no one? oh well.. i'll expl....."

*bang!* Yamada threw his pencil case at Jin's face.

"oi! i said i know how to do!" Yamada shouted.. annoyed that Jin was ignoring him.

Jin took the pencil case, he wanted to throw it out the window. "i'm gonna throw this"

Yamada scared at that, because the pencil case was the one his dead mom had bought him when she was still alive, being a very prized possession for Yamada, quickly stood up to run and get it, but Yuto ran faster to Jin, Yuto punched Jin on the face and took the pencil case from him. "don't you dare ever do that again, you bastard." Yuto said with his cool face. He returned back to his seat and handed over Yamada's pencil case. "i remember.. the day you were crying when your mom past away.. i will never forget.." Yuto said to Yamada. Yamada, unable to speak because of shockness and sadness, just let his tears flow. Yuto felt a sharp pain his heart whenever Yamada cried, and quickly went to hug him.

After school, Yamada asked Yuto, "lets go to the beach..."

Yuto looked at Yamada and agreed.

"My mom.. died on this very beach... you know that right?" Yamada began, having a fake smile but showed complete sadness, Yuto could not bear to be happy and made a fake smile as well. Although he was very sad. "She was my role model... i loved her... very much..." Yamada said after. "but i'm sure.. she's happy.... in heaven....." Yamada suddenly had tears in his eyes. He could not keep the tears in any longer and began to let them flow out, like they could never stop anymore. Yuto saw this, and hugged Yamada a 2nd time for today. "don't keep them to yourself anymore.. share them.. with me.." Yuto said quietly into Yamada's ears. More tears started flowing.

"ah~ thanks more today.. i feel.. much better" Yamada smiled at Yuto.

There was no more sadness in Yamada's eyes.. Yuto was happy at that and smiled happily. "un!"

That night, Yamada could not sleep. He kept on having flashbacks of his mom. He took his family's picture next to his table, the one next to him with Yuto. "we'll always be a family.. right?" and he went to sleep.

The next morning was a sunday morning. Yamada did his usual. He rode his bike to do the grocery shopping for his family and had to go back to make dinner. It was different today though, Yamada met Yuto.

"oh~ doing grocery shopping again?" Yuto started. He was on his roller blades.

"yea.. the usual.." Yamada said with a big smile.

Yuto knew that Yamada had been crying all night, but was happy enough that Yamada was more cheerful than yesterday. "don't do grocery shopping today.. we're going to the amusement park!" Yuto shouted at Yamada.

"what?! i have to do this! its my...." Yuto took over and said "hey! we're going to the amusement park!". Yamada.. surprised at what Yuto said agreed.

"ah! Kamenashi sensei!" Yamada spotted.

Kamenashi turned around when he heard someone say his name. "ah! Yamada~kun?" He said when he spotted Yamada there. "Yuto~kun as well?" he walked over to them.

"what are you doing at the amusement park? isn't this for teenagers only?" Yamada asked. "hey! i'm 22!" he shouted. "T-W-E-N-T-I-E T-W-O!!!" he spelt out.

"thats t-w-e-n-t-y" Yuto said.

"uh.. right! i was just... testing you!!! heh.. you guys pass" Kamenashi said half embarrassed.

Yuto and Yamada stared at him with this face =.= "right..." they both said together.

"ah! isn't that Morimoto Brothers?!" Kamenashi said

Yuto and Yamada turned to see "eh? where?! sensei.. we don't see" they both turned around to face Kamenashi but he was gone.

"that little idiot" yamada thought inside his head.

Yuto saw a cotton candy stand and wanted to buy one for Yamada. "ne.. yama~chan.. do you want one cotton candy?" Yuto asked.

"ah.. but i can never finish it" Yamada answered but wanted the cotton candy

Yuto thought and said "ah~ we can share!"

"ok!!" Yamada answered with enthusiasm.

Yamada saw a picture of a woman that looked just like his mom. Elegant, beautiful, just like his mother. He stared at the picture for a while. Yuto noticed him staring at a picture and saw the picture. "Just like his mom" Yuto thought to himself. "he misses her.. i'm sure of it.." Yuto looked at Yamada's face, where his eyes were red, his nose was red, and tears were flowing, yet again.

"ah! Yama~chan!" Yuto shouted with worried-ness.

Yamada turned around to Yuto "eh?" he just realised tears started flowing. "haha.. whats this.. i can't.. stop..." he began crying too much to hold it in. Yuto knew he could do nothing but hug and comfort him and he did so.

After a while, Yamada was brought back to their holiday house where they were staying together. Yuto layed Yamada on the bed and instantly Yamada fell asleep.

In Yamada's dream, his mom came to him, "oka~san?" Yamada said when he saw his mother. "Ryosuke, don't worry about me ok? i'll always be with you, next to you, Yuto is a good boy. He represents me. Don't ever cry Ryosuke.. it will hurt me. Yuto will be the light for you. And you will be the light for Yuto." his mom said. She suddenly just dissappeared out of the dream and Yamada woke up. He turned to his right to see only Yuto, there, sleeping, waiting for him to wake up. Yuto woke up after Yamada had moved slightly when putting his hand over Yuto's head.

"ah! Yama~chan! are you o...." Yuto was shocked. Yamada hugged him, and thanked him. Yuto was so happy, he started having tears now.

friendship can never be broken

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aww h4ck chan!that was sweet...

it was soo funny how jin acted cool after he did that scary attitude! ]

but then he was hit by yama chan with a pencil case..huhu

its still ok though...i rily can't blame yamachan too...

i want more parts h4ck chan!pls!
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WAH!!
very interesting!!
Jin as the math teacher??
and the "Yuto~kun ♥" !! OMiiGosh!!
Kame's crushing on Jin!!
Oh!! and will Ohno be the antagonist?? ^-^

WOAH!!
the hug scenes are so touching!!

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can't wait!!
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haha yea!! ^^
whats an-ta-go-nist means? hehez~ *^^*

yea.. this chapter somehow was very touching..
i didn't want it to be but my hands just type it
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haha yea!! ^^
whats an-ta-go-nist means? hehez~ *^^*

yea.. this chapter somehow was very touching..
i didn't want it to be but my hands just type it


h4ck chan..antagonist means opponent, enemy or adversary...

btw, gambatte h4ck chan!
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h4CkSigN wrote:

haha yea!! ^^
whats an-ta-go-nist means? hehez~ *^^*

yea.. this chapter somehow was very touching..
i didn't want it to be but my hands just type it


h4ck chan..antagonist means opponent, enemy or adversary...

btw, gambatte h4ck chan!


ooo!! i know what adversary means!
i learn it in english!! not so long ago
yay!!^^
thanks~ hehez
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whoaaa yamada and kame san is fighting?? hahahah!!
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eh? yamada and kame is fighting?
*looks back*
eh.. hahahaha.. i didn't know they were fighting
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