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Posted 7/8/08
I think it's more like..Jin and Yamada are fighting!!
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Posted 7/8/08
haha yea... i think..
most probably haha!!
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Posted 7/9/08
LooooooooooooL
when will you post the next part btw?? ^-^

no pressure!!
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Posted 7/10/08
heheh...that was good..i love the friendship..yuto and yamada have...!
great chap again!! just love it!! though its sad to know that yamachan's mommy
is dead in this story!!
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Posted 7/11/08
more h4Ck~rin!!
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Posted 7/15/08
Jin-chan so scaryy!!! The story is really good!!! YutoXYamada. =DDD
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Posted 7/16/08
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YamaJima!!
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where's the new part btw?? ^-^
Posted 7/19/08
THIS ~~roCks~~
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Posted 7/19/08
yeah!!
haha!!

I can't wait for the new part h4Ck~rin!! ^-^
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sorry~ have exams ^^ so i'll make this one right now~
hahaha.. well enjoy~~

"a new start of a school day..." Yamada said as he entered the school gates.
"yamada... YaMaDa... YAMADA!!!" suddenly a voice shouted 'Yamada' and it was getting louder and louder. "....and its not gonna be a normal one either" Yamada sighed. Yuto asked in generosity "are you ok today?!" Yamada flashed a look at him "what do you mean?" Yuto stunned by Yamada's expression.. knew he had to answer or he would be in trouble.. "yesterday... you...." Yamada turned away "what... don't remember anything about yesterday every again.. and don't you ever mention it again..." and Yamada walked away. Yuto knew that Yamada didn't want to remember any sadness of his mom and didn't want to be embarassed by crying like that in front of Yuto. Yuto smiled and walked to class with Yamada.

"woah.. busy isn't it?" Yuto said after looking in the class.. everybody looked like they were in a real mess. And they were all teachers. Yuto wanted to step in but as he put one foot in to walk.. Yamada stopped him, stretched his hand across to block Yuto and said "don't enter" and quickly moved Yuto and himself to one side to eavesdrop on their conversation.

"what are we going to do?!"
"should we let some of the detectives do it?"
"we should get proffessional ones right?"
"why not let teachers do them?"
"we can't let the children know about this"
"Kame can't go?"
"it seems he has alot to teach the students"
"we can only entrust this situation to students who can do the job"

Yamada stepped in front of the door and said "i'll do it". Yuto shocked at what Yamada said followed up and said "yea... i will too..." The other 3 came and said "so will we". The teachers looked up at the students and stared.. "who are they?" one asked... "Special A students, 5 of us" Chinen answered. "Actually 6..." a new person walked in front of them, he stood in the coolest stand of all, his hands in his pocket, his body facing sideways, and smiled a cool smile, and was similar to the way Yamada was standing. "i'm a new member assigned to this group"

"fine... all 6 of you... come in.." a teacher said. All 6 of them walked in, took a seat, and a screen was showed. "This is the crime scene. Investigate it. And bring no trouble to this school. Now go, your destination is on Sakura Onigiri Street. Block 3A, room 315." a teacher quickly explained. All 6 of them went out, and got ready to go to their destination. Chinen took his rollerblades, Morimoto Brothers used their bicycle which had 2 seats, Yuto skateboarded there, and Keito and Yamada ran there. On the way there, Yamada looked at Keito, someone who was very farmiliar.

"Whats your name?" Yamada began. Keito turned to him and answered "Keito... Okamoto Keito.. and you?" "Ryosuke.. Yamada Ryosuke..." Yamada answered in turn. "Your new here in Japan?" Yamada spoke up. "Just came from England. How do you know?" Keito answered politely. "Because it seems that your looking at the sign boards and if you didn't know where to go you would look at me and follow me where to go" Yamada answered. Keito grinned and said "oh.. your quite a smart one aren't you? Your the smartest out of all 5 of them aren't you... Ryo-chan..." Yamada flashed and stared at Keito. "what? don't remember me?" Keito suddenly said. Yamada couldn't say anything, since he knew he couldn't remember who Keito was. "How dreadfully sad... you can't remember your childhood friend? We studied one year together then i had to leave for England." Yamada thought hard but couldn't picture it. Keito brought out a picture showing him and Yamada in kindergarten playing with blocks. Yamada stopped and looked at the picture. "Keito..... your...." he looked up and stared at Keito. "well now you remember? haha! well nows not the time to stop.. we have to go..." Keito quickly said. "ah right!" Yamada got running again.

6 of them reached Sakura Onigiri Street. They were now in front of Block 3A. They all stared at the building. "kind of tall isn't it?" Shintaro spoke up. "really tall..." Ryutaro continued. "what floor are they on?" Chinen asked. "on the 21st floor." Yuto answered. "Lets go then" Keito said with a smile on his face. They all went up. In the lift : "so where did you come from Keito?" Yuto asked. "From England" Keito said and had a small smile. "I was Yamada's best friend in kindergarten..." Keito said after. "wow! thats amazing" Chinen said in enthusiasm. Shintaro just looked at them talking. Ryutaro spoke up "so you did this class test in England?" Keito looked at him and smiled "yea i did.. then i got transfered here. "we're here..." Yamada answered.

They went up to the door and rang the door bell. No one answered. "maybe the door bell is spoilt? or ran out of batteries?" Shintaro said with his teeth chattering. It was quite obvious he was scared. Ryutaro stood next to him and put one of his arm around him and whispered in his ear "don't be scared... it will only get you weaker" Shintaro heard this clearly and stood up bravely. Yamada went to try and open the door and it could be opened. "ah.. its opened?" Yuto looked and said. "Lets go in" Chinen answered.

The place looked fine... nothing was abnormal. It was neat... too neat... "Their quite stupid aren't they.. leaving this place so neat to trick us that nothing had happened." Yuto said. "oh.. but what is this?" Keito said.. lifting up a large cloth. "Blood stains?" Keito said. "no...." Yamada walked up nearer to the cloth. "Paint... crylic paint..." Yamada said. "oh your quite clever aren't you?" Keito answered. "yes.. they are paint... trying to trick us again? Will you at least come out now?" Keito said... looking at a cupboard. "What are you talking to?" Yuto said. "Theres nothing there.. just a cupboard.. are you ok??" Shintaro and Ryutaro walked up to the cupboard and opened it. Under all the cloths they had lifted up, they saw a person, dead. "ahhh!!!!" Shintaro yelled as he saw the dead person. "The blood... its still fresh... its been killed not long before we had entered this place. Lets go look for the murderer!!" Keito said.. in a hurry. Yamada looked out a window and said "there! that guy has a knife! as well as a cloth with the real blood stains on it!" Yamada looked using a pair of binoculours.

Chinen hurried down to catch the person. Yuto followed up, and so did Shintaro and Ryutaro. Keito stood there looking at the dead person. "weird..." he began. Yamada turned to him and said "what is it?" Keito answered "well i know very well.. but.. if the person was killed not so long ago.. he might still be alive somewhere in there for awhile. but... he's completely dead." Keito said. Yamada thought for awhile. "i got it.." he said. Keito turned to look at him. "yesterday, he slit off the vein on the wrist. the person was dying then. he then stitched it up to look like there was nothing there. then before we had walked in.. he stabbed in the heart to make it look like he just killed it." Keito took a look the wrist. There, was a stitched mark. "clever..." Keito said to Yamada.

Soon after.. Chinen, Ryutaro and Shintaro and Yuto caught the bad guy. "But why would he want to go to jail.. he knows very well he would end up being caught." Yamada said to Keito. "maybe he was threatened by the evil person who is behind this." Keito joked and gave a laugh. Yamada looked at him and could no longer keep that serious face, and laughed as well. Yuto looked at both of them and smiled.

The next day in class, the 6 of them were sent to Kame's office. "Very good job done boys" Kame clapped. "not bad for a rookie" Jin followed up. "jin...!!" Kame shouted at Jin. The 6 boys left the room. "its not over.. there is still a long way to go..." Ueda told them after the boys had left. "i believe those 6 boys can do this by themselves.. with a little help from us that is" Taguchi said with a smile. "heh.. so lets see what will happen in the near future" Kame answered.

Keito said to Yamada softly "its not over yet" Yamada answered softly "its just the start" with a grin on his face.
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Posted 7/23/08
waah!sugoi!!!i love this part!!!very clever!...

well of corz h4ck chan did it!i want more!..can't wait for the nxt part!its pretty brilliant!!!...
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Posted 7/24/08
THAT WAS SOOO EXCELLENT~!!
i wonder how you made up the ideas in your story. Which is like pure genius!
Continue writing more!! =]]
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Posted 7/25/08
whoaaah~~
I LOVE THIS FANFIC SO MUCH .
more,more,and MORE pleaseeeeeeeee . =]
h4ck-rin sureee really CLEVER nee~~
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Posted 7/25/08
Wah!!
h4Ck~rin!!
you're soOoo creative and smart!!

it's so stupid of me to not see your new chap!!
wah!!
you posted it 2 days ago!!
gomen.. T.T

btw..
Keito as the new character??
CooooooooL!! ^-^
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