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Posted 7/25/08
Wow thats really good ^^
i'll be waiting for the next part ;P
Posted 7/28/08
aww. i'm really waiting for the next chap. this story's really great!
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Posted 7/28/08
h4Ck~rin!!
I'm missing you!!
where are you?? T.T
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Posted 7/28/08
waah!!!ya me too...

i'm missing u h4ck chan!same as how hsj chan misses u...
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Posted 7/28/08
waaa...sugoi..it was great!!!kyaa
more more more!!
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Posted 7/28/08
hai!!^^ oh i feel so.. whats the word... ah! i feel so touched^^
thank you all of you~~ =]
hai! please enjoy my next part of Tantei Gakuen^^

"whats this?" Yamada said as he touched his neck. "sweat?" he felt. "on my back too? i'm soaked! oh well, its sunday right? right.. i'll just sleep in....zzz....." and Yamada quickly fell asleep agan.

*knock knock* <----- Yamada's father knocked gently

...................................................no answer

*KNOCK KNOCK* <----- Yamada's father got irritated and knocked harder

..................................................no answer

*BAM BAM BAM* <------ Yamada's father started banging the door

...................................................still no answer

*BAM!!!* <------ Yamada's father knocked the door down

He saw Yamada still sleeping soundly nicely in bed and got annoyed.
"YAMADA RYOSUKE!!! HOW LONG DO YOU INTEND TO STAY IN BED?!?!?!" he shouted in Yamada's ear. "AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! I DIDN'T DO IT!!! YUTO DID!!!!!" Yamada shouted, in shock of suddenly waking up. "eh? oh its you dad... let me sleep..." and he covers himself with his blanket. "don't blame me if your gonna be late for school....." Yamada's dad said to him. "what? its sunday....." Yamada said, half asleep. "pfft.. sunday?! its monday son!" Yamada's dad said, half laughing. "WHAT?! omg!! i'm gonna be late!! i can not be late!!!" Yamada said right up to his father and rushed to the bathroom to take a quick shower.

Yamada's father picked up a photo next to Yamada's bed, a photo of him, Yamada and Yamada's mom. "your son has grown up alot" he said, as if he was talking to Yamada's mom. "WAAAAA!! STUPID DAD!!!!" a shout came from the bathroom. "haha.. but he has alot to learn..." Yamada's father said as he put down the picture, half laughing again.

*running noises*
"waaaaaaa!!! made it!!!" Yamada shouted as he entered the class. "YOU MADE IT!!!" Yuto shouted as he ran up to him and hugged him until they both fell down, Yuto on top of Yamada. "hey.. get off me.. your heavy..." Yamada said, acting all annoyed but he was pretty happy that Yuto did that. Yamada took a glimpse at Keito, who was staring out the window. Keito looked back to Ryosuke and smirked at him, Yamada was shocked and snuffed him. [meaning you turn away from the person's face and do something like 'hmph!']

"ok ok.. back to your seats, class is starting... oh and Yuto..." Kame said as he entered the classroom. "yes sir?" Yuto said, suddenly a dog's tail appeared and was wagging and he was in the position of a dog. "stop hugging Yamada" Kame continued. "a-ah... r-right..." Yuto said, letting go and was abit embarassed.

"congratulations on solving the case given last friday" Kame started off. "now.. there is another case..."
"another case?" Chinen asked. "yes... Sato Emi, a girl who is now an orphan, staying by herself alone, because her mother was murdered yesterday and dad, past away 5 years ago. i want you to solve it and unravel it" Kame explained. "Sakura Street, B501" Kame continued. "ah.. yes sir.." Yuto said out. "this time its different.... only Keito and Yamada will go" Kame finished off. "eh? just us 2?" Yamada said in shock. "yes... just you 2.. and no one else must be helping them. Understand??" Kame said in a strict manner. "yes sir" the class answered. "now go.. and don't waste time..." Kame told them at once, and they left in a hurry.

"why just those 2 sir?" Yuto asked. "their special....." Kame answered. "special?" Yuto answered back, clueless. "maa... you 4 just have to learn the basics for now" Kame told the class. "hai!!" an answer came back from the classroom.

"we're here" Yamada said, as he looked at the house. "ring the door bell" Keito said to Yamada. "you ring it" Yamada fought back. "fine..." Keito said as he sighed. "w-wait! i'll get it!" Yamada said to Keito at last minute. "reverse psycology" Keito muttered to himself, and made a small laugh.

"y-yes?" a small timid voice was heard from a girl peeping through the door. "we're come to inspect on the case of your mom being murdered?" Yamada answered the girl. "a-ah.. yes... come right in...." Emi said, scared. Keito took a glance at her, and she got scared immediately by those eyes of Keito's.

"your mom was killed here?" Yamada said, as he entered the master bedroom. "y-yes..." Emi answered. "on the bed.... " Yamada pointed. "what is it?" Keito went and took a look. "blood?" Keito said. "whats this?" Yamada said, as he saw the blood on the bed. There was a word, "TASUKETE!!" written in blood. "looks like it was written by Emi's mom" Yamada said. "yea... but.. its fresh?" Keito said, as he took a sample on his finger and smelt it. "she was killed yesterday wasn't she? how come its not dried?" Yamada said to Keito, and then took a look at Emi. "u-uh...i-i don't know..." Emi said, and turned away because she wanted to avoid eye contact with Yamada and Keito.

"tell us the truth" Keito said, as he cornered Emi with his arm placed next to her against the wall. "i-i don't know.... anything...." Emi answered, very scared this time. "don't be so harsh on her... we don't know yet if she is the one" Yamada answered.

"f-fine... i'll tell...." Emi said at last. Keito looked at her straight in the eyes. "my mom came home drunk that night, it was all dark and i was alone, the lights were switched off and everything couldn't be able to be seen. Because my mom was drunk, i didn't know who she was, i was scared, very scared, i ran into the kitchen, i took a knife and stabbed her. She died instantly" Emi explained.

Yamada, shocked that Emi would do such a thing, looked down. "ok... because it was like that, and i know you were saying the truth because of your eyes, you will be sent to court first" Keito explained to her.

"y-yes.. i'm terribly sorry..." Emi said, as she led Yamada and Keito out. When Yamada and Keito had left, and were not seen at all....

"worthless girl" a voice came at the back of Emi. Before she could turn around to see who it was, she was stabbed, and died instantly.

The next day, Yamada and Keito met together on the way to school. "yesterday's case was amazing wasn't it?" Yamada said to Keito. "its not over you know..." Keito said to Yamada. "i know.. but its getting more interesting.." Yamada said with a smile.

When both of them reached class, Yuto suddenly pounced on Yamada again. "I MISSED YOUUUUU!!!" Yuto whined. "we had to go through all sorts of dumb training!!! and i didn't even see you the whole day!!!" Yuto complained. Yamada suddenly hugged Yuto, Yuto knew that not even in a 100 years would Yamada hug Yuto back, so Yuto was so happy he suddenly had tears in his eyes. "now get off me" Yamada said to Yuto in a jokingly way, but Yuto took it seriously and got off him immediately.

"ok ok.. break it up you 2... class is beginning" Kame said as he entered the class. He looked stress out and frustrated. He walked up to both Yamada and Keito and whispered to them "come to me after class". Yamada and Keito looked at each other then turned back to do their studying.

After class, Yamada and Keito had to go to see Kame. "what is it sir?" Yamada said to Kame. "Sato Emi..." Kame said. "yes?" Keito answered back, eagerly. "was stabbed, murdered, killed, and died instantly" Kame finished off. Yamada and Keito was in such a huge shock. "what?!" Yamada said, as he fell down to his knees. "is there a chance she would suicide because she was scared?" Keito asked Kame. "no.. someone killed her... she didn't attempt suicide" Kame answered.

"Just as i thought.. its only the beginning" Keito said to himself.

Ok! thats the end for now!! =D
hope you guys enjoyed it^^

"waa!! why didn't i appear at all?!" Shintaro yelled. "Shin! stop that! come back here!!" Ryutaro said, chasing after Shintaro. "nooooo.. where is h4Ck-rin?! i must complain to her!! waaaiiii!!!" Shintaro shouted, running away from Ryutaro. "get back here!!!" Ryutaro chased after Shintaro. "nooooooooooooooooo........"

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Posted 7/28/08
That part was REALLY AWESOME!!
Poor Emi. T^T
Uwahhh, that was truly amazing.
No words can explain it.
CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU NEXT PART~!!
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Posted 7/28/08
waah!h4ck chan!At last ur back!!!*hugs tight*
the ending to me appears to be funny bcoz of shintaro being so demanding about him not shown in this part!!
but anyway i enjoy it!!!kip it up..i'm sure there will be more clever ideas running out from ur mind that we will expect on the next part ne?ganbatte!*raises the good luck banner*
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Posted 7/29/08
thank you!! ;D

but a little note to you guys..

do NOT write a fanfic like this at night time alone...
cos i scared myself typing this out =="
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Posted 7/29/08
oh ok!!arigatou for the piece of advice h4ck chan...

right now..i think i'm getting ur point...
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Posted 7/29/08
YAYAYAY!!
the new part is posted!!
OMGosh!!
this is GREAT!!
I'm lovin' it more and more!!
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Posted 7/29/08
its creeping me out

lol....

because i imagined the picture in my head >w<
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Posted 7/29/08
kyaa...sugoi..i love it!!!
Posted 7/29/08
that was amazing! real great! i can't wait to read the next!
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Wow that was fun and scary to read,, im alone home T.T
but i loved it <3
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