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Posted 8/1/08
wahahha kawai!! i like the first part!! heheheh
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Posted 8/23/08
well this topic is dead xDD
gomen! i was having exams plus i went to germany!!

saa.. i'm writing this now since ruru-pan abandonned me in msn xDD

"What should we do about this matter?" Kame said to Jin, while sitting on his black, leather chair. "He's striked..." Jin said...... "Pluto......" Kame followed up...

"uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!" Yamada yelled. "what is this?! why am i having a dream like this?? is it because i was acting too much in Tantei Gakuen Q??" Yamada said to himself and sighed. He looked around and everyone, Chinen, Ryutaro, Shintaro, Keito and Yuto stared at him. "ah..." he said as his mouth dropped down. He then remembered they were on a summer camp. "ah.. wari wari" Yamada said and quickly went back to sleep. It was 3am in the morning and they all went back fast asleep.

"ohyo!!" Kame shouted when he opened the tent of the 6 boys. "uwaaaaaaaa!!" all of the boys yelled in shock except for Keito, who was always composed. "Oi! Kame! Help me with this!" a voice yelled, it was Jin and he needed help making a tree boat. He was wearing a bandanna on his head, a hawaii t-shirt with a white shirt inside, 3/4 cargo pants and slippers and he had toothpick in his mouth. A perfect person who was washed upon the seashore. "eh? meaning i was dead?" Jin said to 'me'.

"Yes yes...." Kame said as he went to help Jin. *Yawn* Yuto yawned. "Lets get up" Ryutaro said strictly. "What's happened to him" Keito asked Yamada. "Hurry up! What are you 4 lying down like lazy people for?" Shintaro yelled at them. "Oh no..." Yuto said. "What? what?" Keito asked, very persistent. "Its...." Yamada turned to Yuto with a scary face. "...come...." Yuto finished up, looking at Yamada with a scary face. "ehhh!! what's come??" Keito asked. "When Ryutaro and Shintaro have a bad dream... they become very scary when the sun is up" Yamada explained to Keito with a scary face. "And you have to obey them.. whatever it is..." Yuto turned to Keito with a scary face. "ehhhhhhhhhhh!!" Keito yelled.

"hahahahahaha!!" They all laughed. "eh?" Keito said, puzzled. "Yatta! We did it!" Shintaro yelled, doing a high five with Ryutaro. "Yea!!" Ryutaro said as well. "ehhh??" Keito said again. "This is the first time we've seen you doing this expression.... its very cute" Yamada said, with a smile on his face. Keito blushed rapidly then adjusted back to his composed and cool position. "Right..." he said and brushed off outside to the beach.

"We're going to use this to go to that island" Jin explained to the 6 boys as he pointed to an island, which was abandonned in 1945. "uwaa.. kowaii!!" Yuto shouted as he went and hid behind Yamada. "And on this thing?!" Keito said... "Its the best we could do" Jin replied. "OK! Lets go!" Kame shouted as he ushered the 6 boys onto the tree boat.

maa.. i wanna sleep now since its 10.42am and i didn't sleep at all at night.. gomen...
i'll continue it.... when i feel like it xDD

jaa!!
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Posted 8/23/08
waaaa GERMANY!! sugoi!! anyways the part was great!! me love it!! hehhe more please!!
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Posted 8/23/08
WOAH!!
Keito blushed because of Yamada's smile?!
wahahaha!! ^-^
kawaii!!
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Posted 8/23/08
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! keito blushed kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!
wanna seee xDDD

KAWAI H4CK~ KEKEKE~^^
KEEEEEEEEEEEEEP IT UP~~~^^
Posted 8/24/08
i can't wait for the next part! waaa!
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Posted 8/25/08
germany
lucky you! ^^
and the story is getting very interesting ^-^
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Posted 8/25/08
waaah!..can't wait for the next part!!!and what's with keito blushing? ...btw, h4ck rin...i was on in my msn...and i like keep on giving u pms but u didn't rply back to me...i even gave u a nudge but still no response..I wonder why...
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gomen!! lets see.. i was either sleeping, eating or watching tv
then when i came back i saw "ah... geh-san left me a message"...."ah.. she's offline"
gomen gomen!!!!!!! >"<

"What kinda island is that!! kowaii!!" Yuto shouted, while grabbing onto Yamada. "Its just an island, its called.... Torcher of the Dead" Yamada said with a scary face while facing Yuto. "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!" Yuto screamed, running to the back of the tree boat and shouting back at the island they came from "mommy!!! i wanna go back home!! mommy!!!!!!!!" he kept on shouting like a baby. "annoying..." Yamada said, but in truth, he was laughing in his head.

Keito was reading a book. Yamada turned to Keito and went up to him. "what are you reading" Yamada said, taking interest in the book. "nothing special" Keito replied. The book looked very old, black, and was hard covered. Yamada tried to peep and see what the book was but Keito pushed him away, not letting him see.

"I'll definitely get that book!" Yamada shouted towards Keito. Keito laughed silently and went away. Shintaro and Ryutaro on the other hand, were playing cards. More like Shintaro was shouting at Ryutaro because Ryutaro kept on winning. "Hey!! you cheated!!" Shintaro shouted at Ryutaro. "i did not!!" Ryutaro shouted back. They kept on shouting at each other. Chinen was hopping around with a little bunny he had. Kame and Jin, were sitting on beach chairs, wearing sunglasses and leaving their hawaii-en button shirt open, they were looking as if they were tanning while drinking coconut. What a site. Everybody was having fun until.....!!

They arrived at the island. Yuto was kept clinging onto Yamada, shivering and looking around desperately. "ahh!! ok!! all of you, stand in front of me!!" Kame shouted to them. "Chinen and Yuto, get the woods! Yamada and Keito, get the stones, Shintaro and Ryutaro, fix up the tents! Now go!" Kame continued. "what about you sensei?" Keito asked. "me? why.. i'll be supervising of course~" Kame replied. They all went off.

"Kowaii, kowaii, kowaii, kowaii, kowaii..." Yuto kept repeating on and on. "shhh..." Chinen said. Yuto turned to Chinen in shock. "i hear something" Chinen said. "ehhhh!!" Yuto shouted. "shhhhhhhhhhhhh!!" Chinen hushed him. "its right there!!" Chinen said, and both of them went up there. "i don't see anything" Yuto said in a whining voice as he turned back to Chinen. "boo!!" Chinen shouted at Yuto. "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!" Yuto screamed like he's never screamed before, and Chinen laughed like he's never laughed before. "thats not funny.." Yuto pouted. "ok ok.. lets go get the woods" Chinen said.

"do you know the mystery of this island?" Keito said to Yamada. "what was in that book?" Yamada replied. "they say that once you go in this island, you can never come back out" Keito said. "what was in that book?" Yamada replied again. "that might become to us too!" Keito said to Yamada, trying to scare him. Yamada turned around and said "what was in that book?". Keito look startled "is that all you think about?!" Keito said to Yamada. "whats in that book" Yamada said to Keito, face to face, their faces were so close that they could almost kiss. They both stared at each others eyes for awhile. "not telling!" Keito said, sticking his tongue out to Yamada. Yamada looked annoyed and said "i will get that book! i will see whats inside that book! and i will....!!" Yamada shouted at Keito, but by the time he said "i will...." Keito had gone. Yamada caught up with him and said to him "slow down... that was rude! what are you doing?" Keito looked at Yamada and said "picking up rocks" Yamada's face looked flushed because he completely forgot about getting the rocks.

"Ugh! i want the orange tent!" Shintaro shouted at Ryutaro. "no! orange is always mine!" Ryutaro shouted back. "mom said i could have the orange one!" Shintaro shouted back. "oh.. then you can have orange number two!" Ryutaro shouted back. They kept shouting and fighting who would have the orange tent. In the end, Kame and Jin told them BOTH to share the same tent. After everything was set up, they had dinner.

"casserol anyone?" Kame showed. While they were having fun, someone was spying on them behind some grass and trees, but no one knew. After that, he ran away from there and went back to where he was suppose to go back after spying. "Not inviting me huh...i'll show them!" a peculiar voice said. He ran off.

"ring ring...." Jin's handphone rang. "mm.. your phone Jin" Kame said to Jin. "ah ah.. yes..." Jin said. He looked at his phone and saw a message "you won't get out alive" Jin stared at it and though "whats this suppose to mean" he looked annoyed, and couldn't think straight. Kame looked at Jin with a happy face but after seeing Jin's face, his face looked worried.

whats this all about, what does this mean?

gomen!! its short again! can't think of anything
maa... bye bye~~
Posted 8/27/08
whoa. i am really excited!!! c=
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Posted 8/31/08
This story get more interesting everytime! o.o
i love it <3
i can't wait for the next part ^-^
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Posted 8/31/08
waa~~
LOVE H4CKRIN'S FANFIC SO MUCH !!
h4ckrin is vry creative ..
haha .
shintaroo mustt chase h4ckrinn ..
and bring h4ckrin to RYOCHAAN .. <3
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Posted 9/1/08

vanialestari wrote:

waa~~
LOVE H4CKRIN'S FANFIC SO MUCH !!
h4ckrin is vry creative ..
haha .
shintaroo mustt chase h4ckrinn ..
and bring h4ckrin to RYOCHAAN .. <3


ahaha.. i'm not that creative..
your saying too much.. haha xDD
demo.. sankyuu~~
=D *imagines Shin chasing me*
i'll let myself be caught!! xDD

and wow... people still read my fanfic o.o
*shock*
Posted 9/1/08

h4CkSigN wrote:

and wow... people still read my fanfic o.o
*shock*


of course we still read it! we love it! ^^
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Posted 9/1/08
eh its ok eventhough its short at least it makes all sense at all!!!i love it!!!can't wait to read the next part...i agree with sono chan[bowling1991]...we love your fic!!!oh yeah as for this one..
gomen!! lets see.. i was either sleeping, eating or watching tv

then when i came back i saw "ah... geh-san left me a message"...."ah.. she's offline"
gomen gomen!!!!!!! >"<

its ok..i thought ur mad at me or something...ehehe


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