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Posted 7/7/08 , edited 7/8/08
waah!

more yaoi-ness! ahehe..but of corz w/ limitation again..haha

i want AKAME,<---saiko!

RYOPI<---better...

PIN<---not a chance! weeh!..haha..just kidding!
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h4CkSigN> HAHA im a Ryo fan xD but i cuden tink of anyone else to pair wif pi so i juz HAD to make him the sort-of-bad guy...OH WELLS x))

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CHAP 3

(JIN’S SIDE)

It has been 3 days since Yamapi left, 3 days since Jin’s heart was broken, 3 days since he fell into depression. Just 3 days, just 72 hours, but to Jin, it was eternity.

Jin was now staying at Kazuya’s place, with Kazuya by him almost 24/7. Even when Kazuya was at work, he wasn’t alone. His close friends Junno and Ueda came over everyday. They were Kazuya’s colleagues but had different shifts, and thus were often around when Kazuya was away.

Truth to be told, they were all worried. Worried that Jin would do something silly, they couldn’t bear to think what. Sure, Jin appeared happy the past 2 days, but they all knew he was breaking up inside. Jin was a bad actor, he was a terrible actor, and everyone knew it.

The worst thing was, it was not only Jin they worried about. Now Kazuya added to their worry list too. Kazuya was like Jin in every way. He appeared strong and determined on the outside, but deep down, they were both so fragile, so delicate, only that no one knew. Or at least they thought so.

In just 3 days, Junno and Ueda witnessed Kazuya change from an active young man to a tired, worn-out one. He came to work every morning with huge eye bags and couldn’t stop yawning in the meetings. If only they could help. They knew Jin was the cause, but whenever they tried talking to Kazuya, he would simply remind them to take good care of Jin when he was not around. The man needed sleep really, really badly. He probably stayed up all night worrying about Jin.

Whenever they saw Jin in Kazuya’s house, he always had red, puffy eyes. They needn’t ask to know why.

Unrequited love – The worst feeling ever. Yet Kazuya clung on to the hope that one day, Jin would come back to him. For 5 long years, for 1800 days, 43200 hours, Kazuya waited. But, just as he thought he was over Jin, this happened. Maybe, just maybe, this was fate. God was giving them a second chance. He HAD to take it. He knew it just meant more hurt and pain, but if it was for Jin, he could do absolutely anything. The sad truth of one-sided love.

And it did hurt. It hurt a lot, not just because his feelings were never returned, but because Yamapi had betrayed him, and more importantly, because JIN was hurting.

“I wish the both of you happiness. May you cherish each other with all your heart.”

As Kazuya turned to walk away, tears started falling. One, then another, then another. They never stopped falling that day. Or the next day. Or the weeks to come. It was so, so painful. Yes, it was indeed Jin’s choice and Kazuya tried hard to accept it, but it was difficult. No, it was impossible.

“Forget him Kazu! He’s good for nothing!” That was what all of them said, Junno, Ueda and all the rest. Did they even know what love was? It certainly wasn’t something that could be simply cast aside, forgotten in a matter of days.

Why did he ever make such a big mistake? Giving up his closest friend, dearest god brother, one and only lover? It was simple. He wanted Jin to be happy, wasn’t that a good enough reason? He wanted his most precious one to be happy.
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Let me read it all tomorrow!! ^-^
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waaah!...nice shot u got der in this part jade san!..

poor jin and kame...huhu...

oh yeah, ur also a ryo fan???me too!yay!
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waaaaahhhhh...nice story...!!
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Posted 7/9/08
yaoi..yaoi..YAOI RULES!!
I really love the flow of the story!! ^-^
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Geh-san> HAHA YAY ;D RYO FANS UNITE! MUAHAHA...ok ignore me x))

once again, thx to everyone for reading! here's chap 4. This is all i've written so far....im working on chap 5 but i've no idea wen its gona be ready so in the mean time...enjoy this chap! n i'll be posting a akame drabble/one-shot of mine soon so pls look forward to dat^^
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CHAP 4

(YAMAPI’S SIDE)

As he dug through his blue luggage bag for a fresh change of clothes, Yamapi felt the cold, hard cover of a book against his knuckles, hidden amongst the pile of clothes untidily stuffed into his bag. Gently tugging the book out, he realized what it was – his diary. The diary he hesitantly brought along while packing to run away, to run away from Jin, his beloved. His mind told him not to take it along with him, but his heart was simply unable to part with all the memories – The precious memories Jin and him had shared together over 5 years.

Flipping through the prettily embroidered notebook, Yamapi couldn’t help but occasionally scan through a couple of lines he had highlighted – the important memories he had painstakingly recorded down every single day, no matter how exhausted from work he was.

Then one particular entry caught his eye:

14 February 2003
Dear Diary,

Today was our first Valentine’s Day together! Jin is such romantic guy...

He picked me up with a wonderful bouquet of roses at about 3pm to watch a movie…it was a romantic comedy…really enjoyable! The movie ended at about 6pm so it was off to dinner after that. Jin actually booked us a dinner at the Park Hyatt hotel! The dinner was really impressive…a 10-course western meal na! I’m so full now…

After that we shopped around Shinjuku. Jin wanted to bring me to Ginza but I said no…all the things there are branded! Burberry, Chanel, Gucci… Only rich obaasans go there…

Still, Jin insisted on buying me this navy Dunhill shirt from Takashimaya... oh and this lovely glass heart pendant too! He said it was a symbol of his everlasting love for me, he is so sweet! (:

Ahhh, he is really rich ne, he is a big business man after all! But I love him for who he is! Not for the money…

I will treasure him… Kame-chan gave him up for me… I must take good care of him!
Hope our love will last forever!

Yamapi^^


Yamapi felt a tight knot form in his stomach. He rushed to the toilet, feeling a sudden urge to throw up, but all that came out was the bitter-sour acid forced out by his stomach muscles. Not that he had expected anything else to come out. Apart from water and the occasional Milo and crackers, he hadn’t drunk nor eaten anything in 5 days. He just didn’t have any appetite at all.

Ryo had been persuading to him eat and even bought back all his favourite foods – Unagi, Katsu Don and Dango, but he hadn’t swallowed anything, not even a mouthful. He just didn’t feel like eating anything. Why? Because something was missing, something crucial in his life was missing – His beloved Jin.

He knew he had convinced himself that he could love Ryo just as much, if not more, and his mind told him a life with Ryo would be a lot better. He did what he thought was right, but deep down inside, his heart was protesting violently, screaming and kicking inside of him, desperately wanting its pleas to be heard.

Enough was enough. He couldn’t take it anymore. It hadn’t been a week since he parted with Jin, but he couldn’t take it, he just couldn’t.

Fumbling through his suitcase once again, he found the white plastic bottle he was looking for. Emptying its contents onto his palm, he swallowed the small cream capsules one after another, until all of it was consumed.

I’m sorry, Jin. Please forgive me. I love you.
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aww... he shouldn't just leave my jin like that!<---oopz i wrote "my jin" *runs from fangirls*

nwey, that was a dramatic part u got der...poor yamapi....
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Posted 7/12/08
wah!!
this is really good!!
I laughed when Yamapi said that Jin's such a romantic guy!!
LoooooooooooooL
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Posted 7/16/08
The story is LIKE AMAZING~!!
I wonder how's it going to be turned out to be at the end.
AKAME? PIN? RYOPI? RYOKAME? not. lol.
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Posted 7/18/08
It's Akame for sure!!
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Posted 7/19/08
laotiongirl> haha thx! ;D
well as much as i'd rather not erhh...'spoil' in any way, this IS an AKAME fic after all...so yea xDDD

hsj9392> HAHA ;D GO AKAME<3
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Posted 7/19/08
waah!so when will u post the next part?...

i'm soo excited what will happen next...
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Posted 7/19/08
YEAH!!
AKAME RULES!!
xDDDDD
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Geh-san> haha soon..i hope x) im still working on it^^ da nxt chap is gona be quite random cuz i tink i've been moving quite fast with the events...so yea((:

hsj9392> YESHHHH. GO AKAME<3
i miss the old akame darn badly T.T
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