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Posted 7/6/08
A/N: ei guys.. give me your reactions about this one.. thnx ^^


Sounds of longed happiness surrounded me
the warmth of ebony skin enveloped my body
when was the last time I held on to your promise?
It echoed on my ears like a chime
remembering, searching, for a moment

Of your last embrace upon my shoulders

Roses are red, violets are blue, poems
that create wistful meanings upon my heart
Though it came in a flowering letter
The stillness of time stopped for me

Because of your last embrace touching upon thy lips

My devouring love dawned on your eyes
yet, not a single caress dipped his kiss
Distress and loneliness destroyed me

As your last embrace crumbled in the wind

Years trapped my hunger for you
because shredded promises still throb
I stand barefooted behind your back
Flow of tears finally stopped
Carefully I encircle my long arms in your body

As my last embrace for you took my life away
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Posted 7/6/08
WOW!
this one is amesing ! you really did a good job on this one Im jealoys of how you did it
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Posted 7/8/08

Yamira wrote:

WOW!
this one is amesing ! you really did a good job on this one Im jealoys of how you did it


thank you.. I really appreciate it..
Posted 7/13/08
I agree with with yamira amazing work!
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