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This is my comment thread.....I don't consider myself as a good writer but I love to write.... I can accept bad stuffs but.....Try not to break my heart... haha!

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{{~~In School, I.....~~}} +complete+
http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-252942/In-School-I.html
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Hahahaha... I never really liked stories in the script form but yours... Hahahahaha... Hilarious! I don't mean your writing, by the way; Just the occurrences and stuff! :D

The plot is good. I feel sorry for Sky (not because it's similar to my user name, though!). But it's really partly his fault for playing the cupid in the 1st chapter. Have you tried writing the same story in the formal style or whatever you call the book-type stories? It would turn out good if you did.

I can help you if you want. Keep up the good work!
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Hahahaha... I never really liked stories in the script form but yours... Hahahahaha... Hilarious! I don't mean your writing, by the way; Just the occurrences and stuff! :D

The plot is good. I feel sorry for Sky (not because it's similar to my user name, though!). But it's really partly his fault for playing the cupid in the 1st chapter. Have you tried writing the same story in the formal style or whatever you call the book-type stories? It would turn out good if you did.

I can help you if you want. Keep up the good work!


Thanks...But, somehow, I feel that the story doesn't really make sense and it seems boring..... Well, I've thought about that too but I'm kinda caught up studying....I have a major exam this year Thanks for liking it thought!

I didn't realize it's the same name as yours...Hope you don't mind...Do you know of a cartoon series, winx Club? Yeah...When I wrote this story, I liked Winx Club, and there was this guy, Sky...So, that's how I got the name
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PurpleSkye wrote:

Hahahaha... I never really liked stories in the script form but yours... Hahahahaha... Hilarious! I don't mean your writing, by the way; Just the occurrences and stuff! :D

The plot is good. I feel sorry for Sky (not because it's similar to my user name, though!). But it's really partly his fault for playing the cupid in the 1st chapter. Have you tried writing the same story in the formal style or whatever you call the book-type stories? It would turn out good if you did.

I can help you if you want. Keep up the good work!


Thanks...But, somehow, I feel that the story doesn't really make sense and it seems boring..... Well, I've thought about that too but I'm kinda caught up studying....I have a major exam this year Thanks for liking it thought!

I didn't realize it's the same name as yours...Hope you don't mind...Do you know of a cartoon series, winx Club? Yeah...When I wrote this story, I liked Winx Club, and there was this guy, Sky...So, that's how I got the name


Well, of course it's a bit boring on the first few chapters. You just have to work up the excitement up to the climax part! Studies always get in the way of what we want!!! I'm kidding..! Studying does keep me occupied too! ^^, You're welcome!

I don't mind! Hahahaha...Mine has an E at the end anyway!!! I know Winx Club but I never really got too into it but I know who Sky is! It's a cool name!
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bubuheartzallie wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:

Hahahaha... I never really liked stories in the script form but yours... Hahahahaha... Hilarious! I don't mean your writing, by the way; Just the occurrences and stuff! :D

The plot is good. I feel sorry for Sky (not because it's similar to my user name, though!). But it's really partly his fault for playing the cupid in the 1st chapter. Have you tried writing the same story in the formal style or whatever you call the book-type stories? It would turn out good if you did.

I can help you if you want. Keep up the good work!


Thanks...But, somehow, I feel that the story doesn't really make sense and it seems boring..... Well, I've thought about that too but I'm kinda caught up studying....I have a major exam this year Thanks for liking it thought!

I didn't realize it's the same name as yours...Hope you don't mind...Do you know of a cartoon series, winx Club? Yeah...When I wrote this story, I liked Winx Club, and there was this guy, Sky...So, that's how I got the name


Well, of course it's a bit boring on the first few chapters. You just have to work up the excitement up to the climax part! Studies always get in the way of what we want!!! I'm kidding..! Studying does keep me occupied too! ^^, You're welcome!

I don't mind! Hahahaha...Mine has an E at the end anyway!!! I know Winx Club but I never really got too into it but I know who Sky is! It's a cool name!


I've just posted the entire story.... I don't think there's a climax, anyway, just a story....I'm thinking of writing another one now...on twins....I'm so obsessed with twins nowadays! LoL!
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Hmmm... It went a bit too fast..? i think.

You didn't make some scenes for the play practices..? That would've been fun!!! Jake vs. Sky and Paris vs. Cassie! Hahahaha...

Their teacher is cool!!! Hahahaha... She's amused with her students!
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PurpleSkye wrote:


bubuheartzallie wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:

Hahahaha... I never really liked stories in the script form but yours... Hahahahaha... Hilarious! I don't mean your writing, by the way; Just the occurrences and stuff! :D

The plot is good. I feel sorry for Sky (not because it's similar to my user name, though!). But it's really partly his fault for playing the cupid in the 1st chapter. Have you tried writing the same story in the formal style or whatever you call the book-type stories? It would turn out good if you did.

I can help you if you want. Keep up the good work!


Thanks...But, somehow, I feel that the story doesn't really make sense and it seems boring..... Well, I've thought about that too but I'm kinda caught up studying....I have a major exam this year Thanks for liking it thought!

I didn't realize it's the same name as yours...Hope you don't mind...Do you know of a cartoon series, winx Club? Yeah...When I wrote this story, I liked Winx Club, and there was this guy, Sky...So, that's how I got the name


Well, of course it's a bit boring on the first few chapters. You just have to work up the excitement up to the climax part! Studies always get in the way of what we want!!! I'm kidding..! Studying does keep me occupied too! ^^, You're welcome!

I don't mind! Hahahaha...Mine has an E at the end anyway!!! I know Winx Club but I never really got too into it but I know who Sky is! It's a cool name!


I've just posted the entire story.... I don't think there's a climax, anyway, just a story....I'm thinking of writing another one now...on twins....I'm so obsessed with twins nowadays! LoL!


So that was the end already..? Hahaha...I hadn't noticed! As I said, it went too fast! But it's okay... I love it when they debate too, like Miss Sue!!!
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PurpleSkye wrote:


bubuheartzallie wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


bubuheartzallie wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:

Hahahaha... I never really liked stories in the script form but yours... Hahahahaha... Hilarious! I don't mean your writing, by the way; Just the occurrences and stuff! :D

The plot is good. I feel sorry for Sky (not because it's similar to my user name, though!). But it's really partly his fault for playing the cupid in the 1st chapter. Have you tried writing the same story in the formal style or whatever you call the book-type stories? It would turn out good if you did.

I can help you if you want. Keep up the good work!


Thanks...But, somehow, I feel that the story doesn't really make sense and it seems boring..... Well, I've thought about that too but I'm kinda caught up studying....I have a major exam this year Thanks for liking it thought!

I didn't realize it's the same name as yours...Hope you don't mind...Do you know of a cartoon series, winx Club? Yeah...When I wrote this story, I liked Winx Club, and there was this guy, Sky...So, that's how I got the name


Well, of course it's a bit boring on the first few chapters. You just have to work up the excitement up to the climax part! Studies always get in the way of what we want!!! I'm kidding..! Studying does keep me occupied too! ^^, You're welcome!

I don't mind! Hahahaha...Mine has an E at the end anyway!!! I know Winx Club but I never really got too into it but I know who Sky is! It's a cool name!


I've just posted the entire story.... I don't think there's a climax, anyway, just a story....I'm thinking of writing another one now...on twins....I'm so obsessed with twins nowadays! LoL!


So that was the end already..? Hahaha...I hadn't noticed! As I said, it went too fast! But it's okay... I love it when they debate too, like Miss Sue!!!


I wanted to end this one and start on a new one asap, so...yeah...anyway, i kinda got lost interest in it cuz something happened to me and "sky"....haha
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bubuheartzallie wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


bubuheartzallie wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:


bubuheartzallie wrote:


PurpleSkye wrote:

Hahahaha... I never really liked stories in the script form but yours... Hahahahaha... Hilarious! I don't mean your writing, by the way; Just the occurrences and stuff! :D

The plot is good. I feel sorry for Sky (not because it's similar to my user name, though!). But it's really partly his fault for playing the cupid in the 1st chapter. Have you tried writing the same story in the formal style or whatever you call the book-type stories? It would turn out good if you did.

I can help you if you want. Keep up the good work!


Thanks...But, somehow, I feel that the story doesn't really make sense and it seems boring..... Well, I've thought about that too but I'm kinda caught up studying....I have a major exam this year Thanks for liking it thought!

I didn't realize it's the same name as yours...Hope you don't mind...Do you know of a cartoon series, winx Club? Yeah...When I wrote this story, I liked Winx Club, and there was this guy, Sky...So, that's how I got the name


Well, of course it's a bit boring on the first few chapters. You just have to work up the excitement up to the climax part! Studies always get in the way of what we want!!! I'm kidding..! Studying does keep me occupied too! ^^, You're welcome!

I don't mind! Hahahaha...Mine has an E at the end anyway!!! I know Winx Club but I never really got too into it but I know who Sky is! It's a cool name!


I've just posted the entire story.... I don't think there's a climax, anyway, just a story....I'm thinking of writing another one now...on twins....I'm so obsessed with twins nowadays! LoL!


So that was the end already..? Hahaha...I hadn't noticed! As I said, it went too fast! But it's okay... I love it when they debate too, like Miss Sue!!!


I wanted to end this one and start on a new one asap, so...yeah...anyway, i kinda got lost interest in it cuz something happened to me and "sky"....haha


Ahh...I see... You lost the inspiration! ^^, Then, I'm looking forward to that new story you'll be posting! ^^, I love twins too! Hahahaha... they're fun characters to make! You can make them totally the same or totally different or somwhere in between!!! It's cool! Hahahaha... I'm also going to poast another story of mine! ^^,
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