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The dark night
whit stars
their blinking down
down on the earth
I loved to walk under them
walk and dont think
about worris
together whit him

It was he
who showed me
how beautifull the
night was
I was thinking
it was cold and dark
only
whit shadows
that can hurt me
but..
he showed me
the opsite
of that
the night was beautifull
whit the calm vind
it was cold
but not so bad
it was nice feeling the cold
stroke my cheeks

We are walking in silenc
enjoying
the silenc the night
gives
but at the same time
it isnt really silenc

The moon shines
down at us
me and you
we are alone
nobody are here
it is just you and me
Im happy for that
that it just me and you
no one is her
to tell us that we dont fit
togheter
nobody who can drag us apart
we can just go here
and enjoy
the silenc

your hand is going
around me
as we stop
whit the lake
I len into you
and sighs at the beautifull
sight infront of me

the old church
reaflects on the water
the big old three hanging
whit it green leaves
the leaves touching the water
and making sirkls
and the stars shins
above
so a beautifull sight
so peacefull
it is like a dream
like a fantasy
that I would have dreamd
when I was a child
so dreams can get get tru
if you really whant

" do you think"
" it was the right thing"
you wisper as we look out
I turn to you
your eyes are fiksed at the church
I smile
and look back
" well I think so"
" but they will not think the same"
" that I know"
" they will hate you"
" and hate me"
" for chosing you"
" they will never accept"
" that is somthing that Im sure of"

" did you really whant this"
" to become somthing like this"
you look at me whit those
green eyes
I shigs and walk into the water
my dress dripping
into it
I feel the cold water
around my feet
I can feel
that your looking
and waiting
for me to say
my answear

" why should I"
" do it then"
" if I dint whant it"
I turns to you
and walks up to you
and stroke
your face
I take your hand
and lift it to my neck
and
stroke it ageins those two
hols that are ther
" I whanted to be whit you"
" and this was the only way"
I wisper it so low
and looks into your eyes
you stroke my face
and kiss
my lips
I feel your fangs
ageins mines

we walk now back
to the church
the sun is rising
and we
are tired
I know I wil never
see the beautifull sun agein
but thats a prise
I will pay
for being whit
you
for ever
and
ever.....

This is a ooooold poem!
well I myself think this is one of my lamest work that I have ever made but well I was just a beginner back then xD so what do you guys think?
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Posted 7/7/08

Yamira wrote:

The dark night
whit stars
their blinking down
down on the earth
I loved to walk under them
walk and dont think
about worris
together whit him

It was he
who showed me
how beautifull the
night was
I was thinking
it was cold and dark
only
whit shadows
that can hurt me
but..
he showed me
the opsite
of that
the night was beautifull
whit the calm vind
it was cold
but not so bad
it was nice feeling the cold
stroke my cheeks

We are walking in silenc
enjoying
the silenc the night
gives
but at the same time
it isnt really silenc

The moon shines
down at us
me and you
we are alone
nobody are here
it is just you and me
Im happy for that
that it just me and you
no one is her
to tell us that we dont fit
togheter
nobody who can drag us apart
we can just go here
and enjoy
the silenc

your hand is going
around me
as we stop
whit the lake
I len into you
and sighs at the beautifull
sight infront of me

the old church
reaflects on the water
the big old three hanging
whit it green leaves
the leaves touching the water
and making sirkls
and the stars shins
above
so a beautifull sight
so peacefull
it is like a dream
like a fantasy
that I would have dreamd
when I was a child
so dreams can get get tru
if you really whant

" do you think"
" it was the right thing"
you wisper as we look out
I turn to you
your eyes are fiksed at the church
I smile
and look back
" well I think so"
" but they will not think the same"
" that I know"
" they will hate you"
" and hate me"
" for chosing you"
" they will never accept"
" that is somthing that Im sure of"

" did you really whant this"
" to become somthing like this"
you look at me whit those
green eyes
I shigs and walk into the water
my dress dripping
into it
I feel the cold water
around my feet
I can feel
that your looking
and waiting
for me to say
my answear

" why should I"
" do it then"
" if I dint whant it"
I turns to you
and walks up to you
and stroke
your face
I take your hand
and lift it to my neck
and
stroke it ageins those two
hols that are ther
" I whanted to be whit you"
" and this was the only way"
I wisper it so low
and looks into your eyes
you stroke my face
and kiss
my lips
I feel your fangs
ageins mines

we walk now back
to the church
the sun is rising
and we
are tired
I know I wil never
see the beautifull sun agein
but thats a prise
I will pay
for being whit
you
for ever
and
ever.....

This is a ooooold poem!
well I myself think this is one of my lamest work that I have ever made but well I was just a beginner back then xD so what do you guys think?


Wow...this is Beautiful!!!, i really like it, besides "Mirror" ur another poem, this is my Favorite too Congratulations
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Posted 7/7/08
Wow...this is Beautiful!!!, i really like it, besides "Mirror" ur another poem, this is my Favorite too Congratulations

Thank you very
Posted 7/13/08
congrats on another awesome poem yamira!!! XD
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Posted 7/13/08

kagura4 wrote:

congrats on another awesome poem yamira!!! XD


thank you even if this one is really old xD
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Posted 7/28/08
Amazing!! Great poem as always!!
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