Super Love Story
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This is the first time i've used an artist as my main character. And after much thought, i'm using sung min of Super Junior=D

In this story, sung min and a few other SuJu members that would be appearing shall be appearing as just "normal people" like you and me, and not members of SuJu.
I'm using a fictional character as the female lead becasue i don't want any SuJu fans to come chopping me *laughs*

Sung Min shall of course be korean and because i do not know hangul, sentences that Sung Min say in haungul shall be labelled with [in hangul].
The female character is taiwanese, and she speaks mandarin(also known as chinese). The chinese parts would be filled in with the chinese han yu pin yin(also known as pin yin).
Eg wo shi hua ren(i'm chinese).
Don't worry, coz i'll translate the pin yin parts into english in brackets as shown above.

my explanations might be a bit confusing, but i think it'll be easy to understand once you start reading my story!

- ahh, this story was actually posted in winglin before, but i seldom update the story.. anyways, i've decided to post it here too, please support me! :D

>>> comments are always welcome, because comments are my motivation!
>>> you can check out my storyblog too at: http://reminiscing-pandora.blogspot.com
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Chapter 1

Sung Min got into his BMW and started his engine.
"[in hangul] seriously, why can't i kick this habit of over-sleepng?" He whispered as he pulled his car into the road.
Yin strolled leisurely down the pathway, trying to forget about her pain. She had came to Korea hoping to forget about her failed relationship. Suddenly, someone grabbed her purse. "Ah!! Jiu ming ah! Kuai zhua zhu ta!!(Ah! Help! Please catch him!)" Yin shouted loudly at the passer bys. Everybody stood there looking at her. Yin realised that they don't understand what she had just said. The man was running across the street and would be out of her sight any moment. Yin took a deep breathe and ran with all her might. Suddenly, a piercing scream and the screeching of brakes travelled into everyone's ears.

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"[in hangul] oh my goodness... what have i done... is she alright?" Sung Min paced up and down the hallway of the hospital. "[in hangul] she dashed out of the road so quickly... what should i do now? have i just killed somebody?" Sung Min sat down heavily on the chair. A doctor walked out suddenly. "[in hangul] is she alright?" Sung Min griped the doctor's hand tightly. "[in hangul] There were no serious injuries and her organs are all alright. but we still have to wait for her to wake up." The doctor tried to explain as simply as he could to the man who is holding onto him so tightly. Upon hearing that, Sung Min heaved a sigh of relief. "[in hangul] thank you so much doctor!" He said, not aware that he was shaking the doctor's hand violently. "[in hangul] it's alright. it's alright." the doctor brushed away his thanks and walked off hurriedly. "[in hangul] wait! you haven't told me which room is she in!" Sung Min shouted after the doctor.

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Sung Min looked intently at the still figure lying on the bed. "She's so pretty..." Sung Min thought and reached a hand out to stroke her cheek. *Gasp!* "[in hangul] what am i doing!" Sung Min scolded himself and sat down at the nearby chair.

"Zhe shi na li? (where am i?)" a voice broke into Sung Min's dream. he sprung up from his chair immediately. "[in hangul] you're awake!" he exclaimed excitedly. "[in hangul] are you okay? feeling weird anywhere? or is there a headache?" Sung Min prattled on and on. The lady shaked her head and hands. "wo ting bu dong han wen...(i don't understand hangul)" It finally hit sung min that the lady does not understand hangul. "Do you understand English?" He tried asking in english. "know... small small..." She replied. "Are you hurting anywhere?" Sung min asked carefully. the lady shook her head. "No pain..." Sung Min was about to smile when the lady's next sentence interrupt his thoughts. "Who is i?"

Sung Min's eyes opened to their limits as he stood frozen beside the lady. "You...You can't remember?" The lady shook her head again in reply. "Bu ji de... wo ren shi ni ma? ni shi bu shi wo de peng you?(can't remember... do i know you? are you my friend?)" She asked. feeling slightly frustrated, sung min signalled for the lady to wait as he make a call. "[in hangul] Kibum? can you come over now... i need you to be my translator..."

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Sung Min stood outside the lady's ward with a anxious look on his face. "[in hangul] hey bud! what's so urgent?" kibum came running. "[in hanugl] big trouble! i ran this lady over, and now she cant remember who she is, and she's apparently chinese. but i can't speak chinese!" Sung Min said exasperated. "[in hangul] so you asked me here to help you to talk to this lady?" Kibum smiled and pushed open the door. "[in hangul] my gosh... you didnt tell me she was a beauty!" Kibum whispered to Sung Min. "Ni hao, wo shi Kibum.(hello, i'm kibum.)" He walked over to her bed and let out a warm smile.
"ni hao... ni ke yi gao shu wo zhe li shi na li ma? wo wei she me hui zai zhe? ni men shi wo de peng you ma?(hi... can you tell me where am i? why am i here? are you guys my friends?)"

"zhe ge ma... shuo lai hua chang. ni xian zai zai yi yuan. zhi yu wei she me hui zai zhe li ma...(hmm... it's a long story. you are now in a hospital. as for why you're here...)" Kibum turned and gave sung min a smile which meant you're-done-for.
"zhe ge nan de *points to sung min* shi ni de nan peng you. ta bu xiao xin kai che zhuang dao ni. hen huai ba? jing ran you nan peng you hui zhuang dao zhi ji de nu peng you.(that guy *points to sung min* is your boyfriend. he accidently knocked into you with his car. very evil eh? there's actually someone who can knock his own girlfriend over.)"

sung min look at the both of them converse worriedly. kibum had given him 'that look'. what is he telling the lady?

"yuan lai ru chi. ke shi, wei she me wo she me dou bu ji de?(i see... but why can't i remember anything?)"

"ying gai shi zhaung ji dao zhi le shi yi. bu guo bu yao jin, ni de nan peng you yi ding hui bang ni hui fu ji yi de ah!(it might be the knock that caused you to lose your memory. but it's okay, there's your boyfriend who can help you recover your memories!)" kibum replied and signalled for sung min to come over. "ni ying gai ye bu ji de ta de ming le. ta jiao sung min.(i dont think you'll rememebr his name. he's called sung min.)" upon hearing his name, sung min concluded that kibum is introducing him to the lady and waved. the lady smiled and waved too.

"ke shi...wo jiao she me?(but...what is my name?)" the lady asked. the question struck kibum suddenly. '[in hanugl] darn, i havent thought about it!' he thought. "kibum? kibum?" the lady called. "ahh... ni kuai xiu xi ba. bing ren zui xu yao de jiu shi xiu xi.(ahh... you should rest. patients need more resting.)" kibum said and tugged sung min's shirt. "Wo men xian zou le. zai jian.( we're going first. see you.)" kibum waved and pulled sung min out of the ward.

sung min eyed kibum suspiciously. "[in hangul] what did you tell her?"
"mei she me ah...(nothing...)
"[in hangul] you! speak in hangul!"
"[in hangul] ok ok... i told her you're her boyfriend."
"[in hangul] you what?"
"[in hanugl] you better think of something to call that girl soon. she wants to know her name."
"[in hangul] how will i know what is her name?!"
"[in hangul] don't say i'm not being a friend. i'll help you buy a book to learn mandarin from. you can then easily check out the pin yin and understand what she's talking about." Kibum laughed as he walked off, leaving sung min standing outside the ward.
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Chapter 2

"I think we've got everything now." Sung Min said to Hae Jin in english. the name Hae Jin have been decided after much thought and the lady doesn't seem to mind what her name was. Hae Jin reaached for sung min's hand and smiled at him sweetly.
'[in hangul] that kibum...'
"ni shuo she me?(what did you say?)" hae jin looked at sung min with her big watery eyes.
"mei she me...(nothing...)" sung min has learned a few short phrases after accompanying hae jin for a few days in the hospital.
"hae jin..."
"zhe me la?(what's wrong?)"
"i'm really not your boyfriend. kibum was joking about it..."
"boyfriend? wo zhi dao. kibum you shuo ah. ni shi wo de nan peng you.(boyfriend? i know that. kibum has told me. you're my boyfriend." hae jin smiled at sung min, not understanding what he had meant about the boyfriend issue.
"ahh... suan le...(ahh... sour...)"
"suan le?(sour?)" hae jin looked at sung min oddly.
"suan le?(sour?)" she repeated.
sung min tilted his head slightly. "[in hangul] gosh... what did i say wrongly this time? it's suan le isn't it?"
hae jin kept quiet and appeared to be in thought. "AHA! wo zhi dao le! ni shi shuo shuan le! shi shuan, bu shi suan!(AHA! i got it! you meant forget it! it's shuan, not suan!)" hae jin giggled.
"EH?" sung min quickly took out the dictionary kibum had bought him. it was a english-chinese dictionary with pin yin included. "suan,sour... shuan, forget it..." sung min realised that he had indeed made a mistake and grinned sheepishly.
"wo du zhi e le...(i'm hungry...)" hae jin rubbed her stomach with both hands. sung min immediately understood and nodded.
"okay... we'll go to the foodcourt." he said, standing up to help hae jin off the bed.
"bao wo qu...(carry me there...)" hae jin placed both hands out.
"bao?" sung min flipped open the dictionary again. "ohh! you want a bun?" not understanding bun, hae jin nodded.
"how bout this? you wait here and i'll get it for you." sung min placed the dictionary on the table and made his way out of the ward.
"ta yao qu na li?(where is he going?)" hae jin picked up the dictionary and flipped to the page which sung min was reading just now. "bao, bun." hae jin read aloud. the picture provided at the side of the word finally gave hae jin an idea of what sung min was talking about. "ben dan...bu shi bao la. shi bao!(idiot... it's not bun, it's hug/carry!)"
sung min stepped into the lift and pressed the level one button. "sung min?" a voice behind him called out. sung min whipped his head around. Lee tuek's image immediately came into view. "[in hangul] ah! it's been long, lee tuek!" sung min smiled and did their handshake.
"[in hangul] haven't seen you since we graduated eh." sung min smiled happily. it feels good to see your friend after so many years!
"[in hangul] yeah... lost contact with so many buddies since i went overseas." lee tuek replied.
"[in hangul] anyway, why are you here?"
"[in hangul] here for my medical check up. you?"
"[in hangul] well... ... it's a sticky situation."
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thank you for uploading. It was a great story two thumbs up! And I don't mind you posting a story.
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thank yous~
i havent really got much comments frm readers on this story when i posted it in winglin and was kinda worried when i posted it here..
i'll post the next chappie soon
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Chapter 3

"[in hangul] so, you mean, you've somehow or another got yourself a girlfriend through this accident?!" Ee Teuk exclaimed.
"[in hangul] apparently so. *sigh* i wish she'll recover her memories quickly." Sung Min sipped his cup of cappucino.
"[in hangul] oh! which reminds me, don't you have to take care of your little girlfriend?" Ee Tuek's words almost caused Sung Min to spit out the cappucino in his mouth. He hurriedly swallowed it in one gulp and stood up.
"[in hangul] hyung, it was nice meeting you again after so long. i'll cal lyou again okay?" Sung Min waved his right hand wildly and raced towards the dimsum stall.
"[in hangul] one bun." he pointed to the buns on display. thrusting a few notes onto the counter, he grabbed the paper bag and sped towards the lift. ' can't the lift go any faster?' Sung Min whispered, staring at the red digits anxiously. Finally, the door opened and Sung Min dashed towards Hae Jin's ward.

"Hae Jin!" He pushed open the door to find Hae Jin sitting on the floor, her hand bleeding. "[in hangul] what did you do to yourself? how did you get injured?" Sung Min shouted furiously. "bu yao shuo na me kuai... wo ting bu dong ah!(don't speak so fast... i can't understand!)" Hae Jin appeared a lot calmer compared to Sung Min. "I mean... How did you get injured?" Sung Min repeated his words in english. "Injure? wo ting bu dong.(i don't understand)" Hae Jin shook her head. Slightly pissed, Sung Min helped Hae Jin into the toilet to dress her wounds.
"Be careful not to injure yourself again, understand?" Sung Min slowed down his talking speed, hoping that it'll help Hae Jin to understand what he's talking about.
Hae Jin shook her head. "wo bu pa, yin wei wo you wo de nan peng you ma!(I'm not afraid, because i've my boyfriend!*refering to sung min*)" Hae Jin grinned.
"bu pa? hold on." Sung Min flipped through the book again. "Bu pa, not afraid." he finally spot the translation.
"How can i not be afraid! You're bleeding!" Sung Min fumed, misunderstanding what Hae Jin had meant.
"shuan le shuan le. du zi er.(forget it. i'm hungry.)" Hae Jin rubbed her hands against her stomach.
Sung Min smiled and produced a paper bag. "Tada!" He opened the bag and took out the bun. Hae Jin reached for the bun immediately but Sung Min smacked her hands away. "You're injured. Let me feed you." Sungmin peeled off the skin of the bun and positioned it in front of Hae Jin's mouth. Hae Jin took a big bite out of it and smiled contently.
'She's so cute when she eats...' Sung Min blushed.
"yi? ni de lian zhe me hong hong de?(Eh? Why is your face red?)" Hae Jin reached out her hand to touch Sung Min's face.
"mei shi(Nothing)" Sung Min held onto her hand gently.
Silence filled the room as both of them stared at each other. Sung Min was pulling the distance between the both of them closer when a sudden knock on the door sent Sung Min jumping and Hae Jin giggling.

"Ni hao ma?(How are you?)" Kibum walked into the room wih a bouquet of sunflowers.
"Hen hao!(i'm good!)" Hae Jin smiled happily at the sight of sunflowers.
"zhe tai yang hua shi song ni de. yi ding yao mie tian dou xiao de gen zhe xie hua yi yang chan lan o!(The sunflowers are for you. You must smile as brilliantly as these sunflowers everyday!)". Kibum handed the flowers to Hae Jin.
"xie xie ni, wo yi ding hui de!(thank you, i will!)"
Sung Min nudged Kibum while Hae Jin was not noticing. "Hae Jin ah, wo men xian chu qu yi xia.(Hae Jin, we're going outside for a while)" Kibum said and followed Sung Min through the doors.

[conversation in hangul]
Sung Min: Kim Kibum! what do you intend to do now? She really thinks that i'm her boyfriend!
Kibum: Relax, isn't this great?
Sung Min: Great?! i have been staying here, taking care of her day and night! i've neglected my work for too long!
Kibum: isn't that a family business? I'm sure there are many others who can take over your work for a bit.
Sung Min: But this can't go on forever! There'll come a day when she recalls everything!
Kibum: And until then, i've a perfect job for her...
Sung Min: WHAT?!
Kibum: Your secretary...
Sung Min: Kim Kibum, you're joke is going too far!
Kibum: Ever since Tiffany ran away with some guy you've always been lacking a girlfriend cum secretary. Hae Jin will fit in that postion perfectly.
Sung Min: You want me to treat Hae Jin as replacement for that women?!
Kibum: Look, don't worry. You really need a secretary too, don't you? Hae Jin can be discharged within these few days. We'll just ask her to work for you. She won't refuse.
Sung Min: KIM KIBUM!

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"Bu yao pa. ni nan peng you shi ta men de lao ban. ta men bu gan qi fu ni de.(Don't be afraid. Your boyfriend is their boss. They won't dare to bully you)" Kibum led Hae Jin to the various departments in the company.
"OK!" Hae Jin smiled at the girl who just walked past her.
"na ma wo xian dai ni hui ban gong shi le! qi ta bu men ni ke yi jiao Sung Min dai ni qu.(Then i will led you back to your office first. As for the other departments, you can ask Sung Min to bring you there)"
Hae Jin nodded her head obediently.
Kibum smirked as they got into the lift. 'Sung Min, you better thank me later for helping you!'
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good story.....
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thanks for commenting!
i'll upload the next chappie soon
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nice one....
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good story , good job
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thanks for commenting!
glad you enjoyed the story
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Gahhh ! This is a GREAT story !! when i read it i imagine it in my head like a drama
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SalmonMhaki wrote:

Gahhh ! This is a GREAT story !! when i read it i imagine it in my head like a drama


Me too !! i was imaginating about sungmin & kibum & hae jin & Leeteuk.... btw love the story...hope to see the next chapter soon...
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