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Forgotton Memories

Chapter one, er i don't know what to call this chapter, give me ideas after reading it xD


Once upon a time there was a little girl out in the meadow field. She sat down as her long red hair flew in the air as a soft breeze passed. Her forest green eyes glitter in the shine of the sun. Her red dress, filled with white ribbons and bows, sparkled in the light. She felt so calm, so relaxed, she didn't know what was going to happen next. Suddenly she heard weapons clashing, and her eyes widen when she saw a blast came flying at her. Scared and shocked she just sat there, waiting for the blast to hit her. It never did. She opened her eyes to see a boy around her age, with light brown hair and a sword in he's hand. "Daijobu ka?(Are you okay?)" He asked looking at her with slight worried eyes. "H-Hai (Yes)." She answered alittle shocked. "We better get out of here Hime-chan (Princess)." He said grabbing her hand and began running. As they ran another blast came flying towards them. He quickly threw the girl up in the air as he blocked the shot. She closed her eyes waiting for her to fall. Instead she was caught by another boy. A couple years older then the other . "Onii-san! (Older brother)Take her out of here, i'll take care of these guys!" The boy that blocked the shot shouted. "Hai!" The older boy shouted back to him, quickly leaving the meadows. "W-what's happening?" She asked the older boy. "Seems like the assasins killed off your parents and are after you. We need to get you out of this place and maybe even out of this world to protect you." He answered still running as fast as he could. "What's your name?" She asked as she looked up a head. "Kouji." He simply answered. "Oh my na-" She began. "Daishi, Chiko, the heir to the Daishi castle." He said fasting up. "E-EH?!" She shouted shocked. "Shh, we don't want to atraction attention. I know this because i'm your..nevermind." He mumbled the last part. Finally we got into view of a cottage. "We knew you guys were going to head here.." Said a voice behind them. Kouji growled. "Hime-chan, when I gave you the signal run towards the cottage and lock the door." He said to her. "Demo! What about you?" She asked. "I'll be okay, as long as me and Taka, knows your safe we'll be safe too." He answered kindly to her gently putting her on the ground. He reached for he's katana on he's back as they came closer. "Now do you want to do this the easy way, or the hard way?" The same voice asked as the Chiko hid behind the Kouji's back. He did a surrounded attack causing all the ememies to get send to a tree 20 feet away from there. "RUN!" Kouji shouted to Chiko as she ran to the cottage. She went inside and locked the door. She panted heavily walking towards the window. She stared at the Kouji as he kept fighting. "Why don't you just give up?! We'll get the hime dead eitherway!" The man said smirking. "iie! I'm not going to let you set a hand on the cottage or Hime-chan!" He shouted as he blocked an attack. "Kouji-kun...." She whispered as a white aura covered her. She closed her eyes. "They took away my family, they killed everyone in their path, ruining everyones lies to this day, I shall not allow this kind of massacure continue." She whispered as white wings sprouted from her back. Her knee length red dress turned into a ankle length white dress, her hair up in 2 white pigtails. She opened her eyes to reveal beautiful ocean blue eyes. In her hand was a staff. With a star, that had small wings sprouting from it. She quickly jumped out of the cottage and went behind a tree. "Give up!" The man yelled as he punched the boy up in the air. Blood trickling down he's head. "N-never.." He shouted with all he's strength. Right when the man was about to get the final blow, Chiko appeared in front of Kouji and blocked the shot. "H-hime-chan...?" He said as he fell to the ground. "Kouji-kun!" She shouted turning around to catch him. "G-go back to the cottage." He said with all he's strength. Then he fainted, from blood lost. "K-Kouji-k-kun..." She whispered as tears trickled down her face. She looked up at the man with a stern face. "Hoshi Kuro! (Black star)" She shouted as the sky turned black and it looked like their were black stars above. "Shoot." She whispered as her bangs covered her eyes. With a blink of an eye, everyone there was either knocked out or dead. She weakly walked to Kouji. She placed a hand on he's forehead while her hand began to glow light blue. He began waking up. "H-Hime-chan..?" He whispered. "You shouldn't talk to much." She answered closing her eyes as she changed back to regular self. "H-Hime-chan! Behind you!" Kouji shouted as she turned around. "Nan-" She said turning around about to get stabbed by one of the gaurds.

To Be Continued...

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KAY IT'S EDITED! CHAPTER ONE! COMPLETED!


~*Pics*~

Daishi,Chiko (First name last)
Cept longer hair o-o and her hair is more of a darker red

Unknown last name (:, Taka:

Unknown last name (:, Kouji:
(cept black eyes)


BTW THESE PICS ARE THE CLOSEST THING I CAN FIND OF WAT I IMAGINED ALL OF EM<3
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sounds good so far. i like it.
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very good
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hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon.
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ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-
Posted 7/8/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^
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Posted 7/8/08

ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^


:DD -tackle hugs- LOL
Posted 7/8/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^


:DD -tackle hugs- LOL


HAHAA. :D
add meee if yu likee. <3
Amy (:
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Posted 7/8/08

ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^


:DD -tackle hugs- LOL


HAHAA. :D
add meee if yu likee. <3


-adds- LOLOL xD nao go ask for a member card D: im bored n need somethign to do T_T
Posted 7/8/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^


:DD -tackle hugs- LOL


HAHAA. :D
add meee if yu likee. <3


-adds- LOLOL xD nao go ask for a member card D: im bored n need somethign to do T_T


member card? :0
um yu should add me shugo chara group. :D
Amy (:
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Posted 7/8/08

ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^


:DD -tackle hugs- LOL


HAHAA. :D
add meee if yu likee. <3


-adds- LOLOL xD nao go ask for a member card D: im bored n need somethign to do T_T


member card? :0
um yu should add me shugo chara group. :D


its in tah forum (tat took 3287492837 tries o_o) is it in juu faves? so i dun haveta go searching T>T
Posted 7/8/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^


:DD -tackle hugs- LOL


HAHAA. :D
add meee if yu likee. <3


-adds- LOLOL xD nao go ask for a member card D: im bored n need somethign to do T_T


member card? :0
um yu should add me shugo chara group. :D


its in tah forum (tat took 3287492837 tries o_o) is it in juu faves? so i dun haveta go searching T>T


oh okaaayyy.
yea its in ma faves. :]
Amy (:
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Posted 7/8/08

ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^


:DD -tackle hugs- LOL


HAHAA. :D
add meee if yu likee. <3


-adds- LOLOL xD nao go ask for a member card D: im bored n need somethign to do T_T


member card? :0
um yu should add me shugo chara group. :D


its in tah forum (tat took 3287492837 tries o_o) is it in juu faves? so i dun haveta go searching T>T


oh okaaayyy.
yea its in ma faves. :]


i found it...2minute ago
Posted 7/8/08

kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^


:DD -tackle hugs- LOL


HAHAA. :D
add meee if yu likee. <3


-adds- LOLOL xD nao go ask for a member card D: im bored n need somethign to do T_T


member card? :0
um yu should add me shugo chara group. :D


its in tah forum (tat took 3287492837 tries o_o) is it in juu faves? so i dun haveta go searching T>T


oh okaaayyy.
yea its in ma faves. :]


i found it...2minute ago :D


yayyyy~
:)
lol i g2g rite noww.
& i'll write ma story tomorrow. :D
its gunna be greattt. ♥
Amy (:
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ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:


kintsuchl wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^


:DD -tackle hugs- LOL


HAHAA. :D
add meee if yu likee. <3


-adds- LOLOL xD nao go ask for a member card D: im bored n need somethign to do T_T


member card? :0
um yu should add me shugo chara group. :D


its in tah forum (tat took 3287492837 tries o_o) is it in juu faves? so i dun haveta go searching T>T


oh okaaayyy.
yea its in ma faves. :]


i found it...2minute ago :D


yayyyy~
:)
lol i g2g rite noww.
& i'll write ma story tomorrow. :D
its gunna be greattt. ♥


mk bai bai koko-chan (: (juu nickname from me)
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