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Posted 7/8/08

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hm that was pretty good!
i'll make a story on here soon. :)


YAY! i wouldnt be tah only one<3 LOLOL -goes to work on chap two-


lol, yupyupp^^


:DD -tackle hugs- LOL


HAHAA. :D
add meee if yu likee. <3


-adds- LOLOL xD nao go ask for a member card D: im bored n need somethign to do T_T


member card? :0
um yu should add me shugo chara group. :D


its in tah forum (tat took 3287492837 tries o_o) is it in juu faves? so i dun haveta go searching T>T


oh okaaayyy.
yea its in ma faves. :]


i found it...2minute ago :D


yayyyy~
:)
lol i g2g rite noww.
& i'll write ma story tomorrow. :D
its gunna be greattt. ♥


mk bai bai koko-chan (: (juu nickname from me)


lol okayyy. :]
& yur nickname from me is baha-chan.
xD
Amy (:
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Posted 7/13/08 , edited 7/15/08
Chapter two, -input title here-

Recap:
With a blink of an eye, everyone there was either knocked out or dead. She weakly walked to Kouji. She placed a hand on he's forehead while her hand began to glow light blue. He began waking up. "H-Hime-chan..?" He whispered. "You shouldn't talk to much." She answered closing her eyes as she changed back to regular self. "H-Hime-chan! Behind you!" Kouji shouted as she turned around. "Nan-" She said turning around about to get stabbed by one of the gaurds.

~Story~

A Kunai came flying and hitted the guard's hand. Causing him to let go of the kunai he was holding and falling backwards, barely alive. "Daijobu Hime-chan?" Came the voice that threw the kunai. "T-Taka-kun." She whispered shakily. He ran up to her and hugged her. "It's okay now..It's okay.." He whispered calmly to her. Then everything became black. Darkness consumed her. "Chikooo-chann! Wakeee upp!" A voice shouted as she opened her eyes. "E-Eto (U-um)..Where am...I? A-And...do I know...you?" She whispered as she looked up at the girl who woke her up. "Your at the Kokoro park! And I'm your best friend! Ayane!" She said happily, slightly staring at her. Her long honey brown hair fluttered in the wind. As Chiko got up she noticed that she wasn't in her knee length red dress. She was in jeans that covered she white sneakers, and a white spagetti strap. Her long red hair wasn't red, but a dark brown almost black color. She looked up at her surrounded again. 'K-Kokoro..park..?' She thought as she saw 3 kids playing tag. "Come on Chiko-chan! Your Onii-chan must be worried!" Ayane said taking her hand and running towards what seemed as her house. 'O-onii-chan?!' Chiko thought with a confused face. Knock Knock. Came the sound of Ayane knocking on the door. The door opened to reveal a boy, about 2 years older then her, with red hair.. He has a pair of blue jeans and a white T on. "Oh, Hey Aya-chan, Chi-chan." He said smiling. "Oi (hey), Tai-san!" Ayane answered cheerily. Chiko stood there slightly shocked and scared. "Chiko-chan? Daijobu?" Kouji said staring at Chiko. "Maybe she has memory lost." Ayane said tilting her head. "Ara?(Huh? (I think that means huh @.@)" Chiko said confused. "Do you remember ANY thing Chiko-chan?" Ayane asked looking at her with her dark blue eyes. "Just awhile ago...I was...at a forest...with Kouji-kun and Taka-kun..and we were...being attacked...and they kept...calling me...princess.." Chiko whispered alittle shocked that she said what she said. "You. A Hime?! You got to be kidding me!" Ayane said ^^;;. "I don't believe it either." Tai said. "I feel..diz-" Chiko said geting cut off by fainting. She fell with a soft thud. Darkness surrounding her.

Poke.Poke.

'Mmmm my head hurts...' Chiko thought.

Poke.Poke.

'Who's poking me?' She thought again with a anime sweatdrop.

Poke.Poke.


'I'm going to kill the person if they poke me one more time!' She thought trying not to twitch.

Poke.Poke. "Is she alive Onee-chan?" A voice said.

Chiko's eye shot open to see a light browned haired boy and a purple haired girl. "She's alive!" The boy shouted as Chiko groaned. "Urusai.(Shut up)" She mumbled with a slight headache. "Baka!" The girl whispered harshly and whacking the boy with a fan that came out of nowhere o_O. (lmao Its alway funny how they get a fan out of no where and whack the person<3) "I-itai(O-ow) Onee-chan that hurts." He whined x.x. "That's what you get for shouting." She answered in a calm whisper voice, as she tucked her purple hair behind her ear. A soft giggle could be heard from Chiko. The boy smiled. "Onee-chan we got her to laugh." He whispered happily. "I've noticed that Kenta." She whispered to him. Chiko winced as she tried to get up. A hand pushed her back down. "Your still weak Chiko-san, seems like the nightmare you had took alot of energy out of you." A voice beside her said. She looked to her side to see a boy that looked very much like Taka from her dream. "W-Where am I?" She whispered. "____ town (Gimmie a town name @.@;;)" He answered as another boy, which also looked like Kouji from her dream, came in the room with 5 teacups and a bowl of soup. "Oh, she's awake?" He said placing the tray next to Chiko. He's hand felt her forehead, then took he's hand off sighing. "She has a fever...again." He whispered the last part. "Chi-san, go back to sleep." He whispered as Chiko's eye lids began to close. 'I wasn't this tired awhile ago..' She thought as she fell asleep.

~LOL I think that was a short chap<3 OH WELL IDC<33~

TO BE CONTINUED!
~*Pics*~
Ayane:


Cept she has a jean skirt and a orange sleeveless shirt.

Chiko: (mid way through the storii)

cept she has jeans and a spagetti strap on (:

Chiko near end of storii:
(:

Kenta:
Sorta like that o_o

Kimiko:
Sorta o-o cept her hair is down (:

SOOO SORRIE THIS CHAP WAS CONFUZZING if it isnt o_o kool LOL also I HAVE NO PIC OF WAT TAI FROM TAH NEAR BEGINING LOOKS LIKE (lol)
Amy (:
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Forgotton Memories

Chapter 3 -input title-

Preview:
Chiko softly opened her eyes. Her vision was blurry for a second. She realized there was 2 other people here. It was Kimiko and Kouji. She heard a soft snore from both of them as she slowly got up. I smiled alittle by how they looked. Kimiko's head was on Kouji's shoulder and Kouji's head was on Kimiko's head with he's hand around her waist. 'Kawaii desu!' She thought smiling. Suddenly she was in a coughing fit causing Kenta and Taka running into the room while Kimiko and Kouji woke up and walked around to her. As her coughing fit stopped she stared at her hands and part of her legs. They were covered in blood. "N-Nani..?" She whispered alittle shocked. Taka's and Kouji's eyes wide'd. "Reiki Kazu nijuu (Healing method number 20(Oh yeah how to pronounce it (or how i would pronouce it) Ray-ee-keyy Kaah-zoo knee-juu (like you))." Kouji whispered as all of the blood and wounds disappeared. "Reiki Kazu..nijuu?" Chiko asked confused. "It's a spell." He answered. "I'm a Healer in my...country." He said slightly pausing after 'in my..' Suddenly there was a loud crash coming from outside. Kenta ran to the window and stood there shocked. Kimiko came to the window and then quickly turned around. "We need to get Chiko-san out of here!" She whispered to us. "Wakarimasu!" (I understand) Taka and Kouji said. "Taka grab Chiko and run for it." Kouji said jumping out of the window. Taka grabbed Chiko's hand and ran out of there. "What's happening?" Chiko asked. "Hold it right there!" A mysterious man in black appeared in front of us. "Give us Lyoko-hime now or we will do it the hard way.." He said threatenly. "Who's Lyoko?" Chiko asked with slight confusedness. "Oh you havn't her yet little Taka-kun?" He said smirking. "Urusai!" He shouted as he pulled Chiko behind him. "Guess we'll do it the hard way." He said grabbing a sword under he's coat. "Chiko, stay back and don't get hurt, okay?" Taka told her as he grabbed he's sword on he's waist. "Wakarimasu." She said quietly backing up.



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MWAUAHA I HAVE FIGURED OUT WHAT THE ENDING SHOULD BE =3= herse a small preview (BTW THSI IS 1ST PERSON PRO (I think xD) The storii above is no1's pov o-o n im used to doning 1st person pov so ima start using 1st person pov soon. XD

I closed the diary along with my eyes. A small teardrop escaped my eyes n landed on the desk. "Lyoko-hime, it's time to go." Said my foster mother Yuko. "Hai, Okaa-san." I said placing my diary in a desk drawer beside me.

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LOL WHY WAS LYOKO CRYING? AND WHO IS LYOKO? YOUR GONNA HAFF TO WAIT TILL I FINISH THE STORII =3=
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