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Posted 7/8/08 , edited 7/8/08
finally the time
has come
I feel so free
Im the queen
of the world

no one
can stop us
now
no stupid
words
to controll us
anymore

all night
long
dance and sing
dont
think about tomorrow
this story
will
never stop

I can only
smile
it has started now

my never ending
story
has begun
a dream
I have waited for
in so many
years
I can do
everything now
and
no one can
stop me

we lough
and
sing funny songs
as we
travell in our
never ending story
so fast we
are
and
so free
a light we
see

everyone yell
and
scream
smoke and fire
we see
as we drift away
snd this
is the tale
of
The never ending story that ended

a poem i made as we drived here and since then there hasnt really been any inspiration <.<u
this is about teenagers that have turned 18 and well as they think they are free they fall in the hands of death or to say it more casual they died in a car crash
hope you guys like it =D
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Posted 7/8/08
wow. great poem and sad, your an awsome writer. I always love your poems!
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Posted 7/10/08

CresentDemon wrote:

wow. great poem and sad, your an awsome writer. I always love your poems!


thank you really much ^^ that really makes me happy to hear that
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Posted 7/10/08

Yamira wrote:


CresentDemon wrote:

wow. great poem and sad, your an awsome writer. I always love your poems!


thank you really much ^^ that really makes me happy to hear that


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Posted 7/13/08
u really are an awesome writer yamira keep writing ^-^
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Posted 7/13/08

kagura4 wrote:

u really are an awesome writer yamira keep writing ^-^


Thanks and of course I will <3
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Posted 12/15/08
wow! awesome ^^
I like this poem, and also most of ur poems
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Posted 12/25/08

kallitadasuki wrote:

wow! awesome ^^
I like this poem, and also most of ur poems


¨Thank you very much glad to hear that ^^
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