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Posted 7/8/08
I'll start off with one of my own that I posted a long while ago in FF.net. I know it's not good since it's my first fic. Hope you like it and please don't post it anywhere else without my permission or claim it as your own. The characters are all created by Kure Yuki and Ruby Party of Koei.

Posted 7/10/08 , edited 8/18/08
hahaha... i read 'Annoying Adagio' on FF.net... no worries, i'm not gna post it sumwhere else or claim it as my own... this one is mine, also published in FF.net, but it's the newly improved version!!! one more thing, as we all know, la corda d'oro is not mine and never gna be mine, but this LONG story is mine, though...

Pairing: YunokixHino



there goes!!! i hope you enjoy it!!! oh, and sorry for the annoying random author notes in the middle of the story...
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Posted 7/26/08

midorihimesama wrote:

I'll start off with one of my own that I posted a long while ago in FF.net. I know it's not good since it's my first fic. Hope you like it and please don't post it anywhere else without my permission or claim it as your own. The characters are all created by Kure Yuki and Ruby Party of Koei.




You are soo damn good...I loved it...Please do write more when yu have time ok....Ur excellent...

Posted 8/18/08
Yo!! Check this out!! I just suddenly got an idea to make this a few days ago... So the story is Kahoko and Azuma pretended to be dating to avoid his fan girls. Then Azuma said to Kahoko that his grandma told him to go to England again. And coz he thought Kahoko doesn't love him, he decided to go to England and leave her behind (he thought Kahoko wouldn't care). And this is the ending of the story i just told... I didn't post this story anywhere... It's untitled, like all my other stories... ^_^

Disclaimer: La corda d'oro belongs to Yuki Kure and Koei

Enjoy!!


Posted 8/22/08

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So sweet... You're not bad, sis...
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Posted 8/22/08
The first one is so sad...
fave part:

"Memories of her came rushing to him, and he allowed himself to drown in the melancholy mood of his own flute."

The second one was great because she rejected all the others! My favorite part was when Len was rejected!! XD


The third one was nice... favorite parts:

1. "Suddenly she felt arms wrapped around her, hugging her tightly."

2. "'Because I had to leave my favorite toy behind.'"

3. "'Still calling me that?'” Yunoki said, irritated.

“'A-Azuma…'” Hino said.

“'That’s more like it, Kahoko,'”

I want to be his toy, too... o_O
Posted 8/23/08

SuperSachiko wrote:

The second one was great because she rejected all the others! My favorite part was when Len was rejected!! XD


The third one was nice... favorite parts:

1. "Suddenly she felt arms wrapped around her, hugging her tightly."

2. "'Because I had to leave my favorite toy behind.'"

3. "'Still calling me that?'” Yunoki said, irritated.

“'A-Azuma…'” Hino said.

“'That’s more like it, Kahoko,'”

I want to be his toy, too... o_O



Thanks!!! I'm happy that someone actually likes my writings...
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Posted 8/23/08
You're welcome!
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Posted 10/7/08
I think for fanfics to be great, they need more dialogues and lesser description. Description makes things sound so... fake. Because it's adapted from an anime. It would be great if a fan-anime thing could be made.

Thus, i prefer priscilia's version, as compared to midorihimesama's. But eitherway, thanks for the contribution! I can't really write love stories
Posted 10/7/08
So THIS is where people share there fanfics! Sadly I haven't got any good ones down on paper yet,and all my ideas are,well...insulting.
Posted 10/7/08
what exactly do you mean by "insulting"? do you have any in FF.net or something maybe?
Posted 10/7/08

Shizuhi wrote:

I think for fanfics to be great, they need more dialogues and lesser description. Description makes things sound so... fake. Because it's adapted from an anime. It would be great if a fan-anime thing could be made.

Thus, i prefer priscilia's version, as compared to midorihimesama's. But eitherway, thanks for the contribution! I can't really write love stories


Thank you!!!

Posted 10/8/08

priscilia301 wrote:

what exactly do you mean by "insulting"? do you have any in FF.net or something maybe?

Well, I do, but all my stuff there kind of sucks,and I, uhh...kind of forgot my password :blush:.
( I'm such a dork... )All my good ideas are hard to explain.
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Posted 10/10/08
Yay! I got my story done! It's rather short. The dialouges would sound so much better in Japanese, because it was in Japanese in my mind, but for the sake of people who do not understand, I've translated it to english. And sorry about all those musical terms and performance directions, i'm too tempted to use them!
The story is more down to reality, it is how the characters are like rather than how you want them to be like. Okok, nevermind about my blabbering, enjoy!
Oh, one last thing, I don't join FF.net, so you won't find my stories there

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Posted 10/11/08

Shizuhi wrote:

Yay! I got my story done! It's rather short. The dialouges would sound so much better in Japanese, because it was in Japanese in my mind, but for the sake of people who do not understand, I've translated it to english. And sorry about all those musical terms and performance directions, i'm too tempted to use them!
The story is more down to reality, it is how the characters are like rather than how you want them to be like. Okok, nevermind about my blabbering, enjoy!
Oh, one last thing, I don't join FF.net, so you won't find my stories there




Awesome!! Just awesome..I reall really liked it..Good job!!! *winks*
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