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Posted 10/11/08

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Yay! I got my story done! It's rather short. The dialouges would sound so much better in Japanese, because it was in Japanese in my mind, but for the sake of people who do not understand, I've translated it to english. And sorry about all those musical terms and performance directions, i'm too tempted to use them!
The story is more down to reality, it is how the characters are like rather than how you want them to be like. Okok, nevermind about my blabbering, enjoy!
Oh, one last thing, I don't join FF.net, so you won't find my stories there



Damn that Hino Kahoko, she's so lucky, but she doesn't realize it!!!!! I wanna kiss you too, Yunoki-sama!!!!!!!!! Kyaaaaaaaah!!!!! ^__^ And I like the title. I really don't know how to make good titles. That's mostly why I don't publish most of my stories in FF.net. They're untitled. By the way, there's a little typo up there, and I think that Yunoki's somewhat too playful and too bold...
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I like the title. I really don't know how to make good titles. That's mostly why I don't publish most of my stories in FF.net. They're untitled.


So you know what my title means?
*since there are muscially inclined people around

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"You force yourself onto the violin too much, see how stressed up you are? Why don't you force yourself on me? I'll bet that would be more enjoyable..."


*gasp* OH MY GOSH!!! best line ever!! I could totally see him saying that in the manga.


"Joking? I'm not joking. I'm seroius, why don't you try me for yourself?" he brought her closer to him by force, and kissed her. Her senses reeled. When he wrapped his arms around her body, she felt herself sinking beneath his embrace, they seem to melt together. Pure sensation overwhelmed her, she was kissing him back.


This was written sooo well! You are a talented writer!


WHAT DOES THE TITLE MEAN?!!!!?!!!? You've gotta explain these things!



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Damn that Hino Kahoko, she's so lucky, but she doesn't realize it!!!!! I wanna kiss you too, Yunoki-sama!!!!!!!!! Kyaaaaaaaah!!!!! ^__^



Yeah, exactly!!! Kahoko!!! I love you, but I hate you, because you're so lucky!!
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"You force yourself onto the violin too much, see how stressed up you are? Why don't you force yourself on me? I'll bet that would be more enjoyable..."

*gasp* OH MY GOSH!!! best line ever!! I could totally see him saying that in the manga.

Actually, I just wrote that Azuma said how she forced herself onto the violin, and then I was like thinking, "force oneself onto..." LoL! Then I continued writing the next line


about the

"Joking? I'm not joking. I'm seroius, why don't you try me for yourself?" he brought her closer to him by force, and kissed her.

Because, you know, most anime, the girls always go, "please don't joke around", and I just happen to think, what would Azuma say to such a statement. And he'd probably go, "I'm not joking". Haha.


oh, and

WHAT DOES THE TITLE MEAN?!!!!?!!!?

It's actually Italian terms which music players have to learn in Theory
eh, dolce means sweetly, and anima means soul/spirit/feeling...
So I placed them together, intending to form something like sweet feeling. Yea...
Posted 10/13/08 , edited 10/13/08

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priscilia301 wrote:

I like the title. I really don't know how to make good titles. That's mostly why I don't publish most of my stories in FF.net. They're untitled.


So you know what my title means?
*since there are muscially inclined people around



Yeah, I know... C'mon, I've been playing piano for 10 years or so... My teacher would totally scream at me if I don't... LOLZ

And don't you think that classical musicians should learn Italian and German? Especially Italian since most of the musical terms are in that language... Just like your title... ^__^ I should try using those for my fanfictions...
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Actually, I just wrote that Azuma said how she forced herself onto the violin, and then I was like thinking, "force oneself onto..." LoL! Then I continued writing the next line


Yeah, that was smart... XD


about the

"Joking? I'm not joking. I'm seroius, why don't you try me for yourself?" he brought her closer to him by force, and kissed her.

Because, you know, most anime, the girls always go, "please don't joke around", and I just happen to think, what would Azuma say to such a statement. And he'd probably go, "I'm not joking". Haha.


Funny because usually, Azuma DOES say he's joking!!! XDDDD


It's actually Italian terms which music players have to learn in Theory
eh, dolce means sweetly, and anima means soul/spirit/feeling...
So I placed them together, intending to form something like sweet feeling. Yea...


I knew dolce meant "sweet!" I think. Oh well, thanks for explaining.
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And don't you think that classical musicians should learn Italian and German? Especially Italian since most of the musical terms are in that language... Just like your title... ^__^ I should try using those for my fanfictions...


Yea.. I am planning to learn
I have a whole-life planner thing.
haha.

It's in order of what langauge i'm going to start learning first. Would take me a lifetime

1st language - English (learnt)
2nd language - Chinese (learnt)
3rd language - Japanese (currently self-studying, no proper lessons yet)
4th language - French (learning after Japanese)
5th language - Latin (hope to find someone who can teach me, since it's rare to learn this)
6th language - Italian (for the sake of music and fun)
7th language - Portuguese (a lot of online game players speak this)
8th language - Greek (cool)
9th language - Romanian (for songs, like O-zone!)
10th langauge - Irish (folklore and stuffs, interesting)
11th langauge - Korean (fun?)
12th langauge - German (it's a bit too rough a langauge, for it to be placed as my top choices*no offence*)

And also, at the same time, learn musical instruments!

1st instru - Piano (learnt)
2nd instru/3rd instru - Flute/Violin (learn simultaneously)
4th instru - have not decided yet

I'm gonna be damn busy
Posted 10/14/08

Shizuhi wrote:


priscilia301 wrote:

And don't you think that classical musicians should learn Italian and German? Especially Italian since most of the musical terms are in that language... Just like your title... ^__^ I should try using those for my fanfictions...


Yea.. I am planning to learn
I have a whole-life planner thing.
haha.

It's in order of what langauge i'm going to start learning first. Would take me a lifetime

1st language - English (learnt)
2nd language - Chinese (learnt)
3rd language - Japanese (currently self-studying, no proper lessons yet)
4th language - French (learning after Japanese)
5th language - Latin (hope to find someone who can teach me, since it's rare to learn this)
6th language - Italian (for the sake of music and fun)
7th language - Portuguese (a lot of online game players speak this)
8th language - Greek (cool)
9th language - Romanian (for songs, like O-zone!)
10th langauge - Irish (folklore and stuffs, interesting)
11th langauge - Korean (fun?)
12th langauge - German (it's a bit too rough a langauge, for it to be placed as my top choices*no offence*)

And also, at the same time, learn musical instruments!

1st instru - Piano (learnt)
2nd instru/3rd instru - Flute/Violin (learn simultaneously)
4th instru - have not decided yet

I'm gonna be damn busy


- Haha... I'm pretty good in English, my grammar's not bad, is it?
- I learned Chinese for about 3 years in my old school, but quit because I had to move to another school that doesn't have Chinese.
- I can sorta speak Japanese... I'm currently learning it at school, and also from watching RAW anime... ^__^
- I'm not that interested in French...
- Latin? Not really interested either, even though because I'm in a choir, a lot of the songs are in Latin... Or French. Or Italian. Or German.
- As for Italian, maybe I should learn it... But not planning to do so in the near future...
- Portuguese??
- Greek? How do you speak in Greek?
- What's Romanian?
- Not interested in Irish as well...
- Wow, Korean is actually on the list!! I'm kinda bored of that language. There are a LOT of Koreans in my school, and they speak Korean everyday, so, yeah...
- I learned German last year at school... I haven't got that far yet, though... But for some reason I decided to take Japanese this year. And I was really the best student in that class last year... The teacher really liked how I pronounced the words... Probably because I've already learned how to say the words correctly since I'm in a choir...

^__^
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- Haha... I'm pretty good in English, my grammar's not bad, is it?
- I learned Chinese for about 3 years in my old school, but quit because I had to move to another school that doesn't have Chinese.
- I can sorta speak Japanese... I'm currently learning it at school, and also from watching RAW anime... ^__^
- I'm not that interested in French...
- Latin? Not really interested either, even though because I'm in a choir, a lot of the songs are in Latin... Or French. Or Italian. Or German.
- As for Italian, maybe I should learn it... But not planning to do so in the near future...
- Portuguese??
- Greek? How do you speak in Greek?
- What's Romanian?
- Not interested in Irish as well...
- Wow, Korean is actually on the list!! I'm kinda bored of that language. There are a LOT of Koreans in my school, and they speak Korean everyday, so, yeah...
- I learned German last year at school... I haven't got that far yet, though... But for some reason I decided to take Japanese this year. And I was really the best student in that class last year... The teacher really liked how I pronounced the words... Probably because I've already learned how to say the words correctly since I'm in a choir...

^__^


What country do you come from?
And you should learn japanese from watching Jap-Audio and Eng-Sub, rather than RAWs lol.
I love Latin songs, especially masses and requiems, that's one of the main reasons why I want to learn latin
I'm not exactly THAT interested in Korean, as you can see, it's the 2nd last.
Posted 10/14/08

Shizuhi wrote:


priscilia301 wrote:

- Haha... I'm pretty good in English, my grammar's not bad, is it?
- I learned Chinese for about 3 years in my old school, but quit because I had to move to another school that doesn't have Chinese.
- I can sorta speak Japanese... I'm currently learning it at school, and also from watching RAW anime... ^__^
- I'm not that interested in French...
- Latin? Not really interested either, even though because I'm in a choir, a lot of the songs are in Latin... Or French. Or Italian. Or German.
- As for Italian, maybe I should learn it... But not planning to do so in the near future...
- Portuguese??
- Greek? How do you speak in Greek?
- What's Romanian?
- Not interested in Irish as well...
- Wow, Korean is actually on the list!! I'm kinda bored of that language. There are a LOT of Koreans in my school, and they speak Korean everyday, so, yeah...
- I learned German last year at school... I haven't got that far yet, though... But for some reason I decided to take Japanese this year. And I was really the best student in that class last year... The teacher really liked how I pronounced the words... Probably because I've already learned how to say the words correctly since I'm in a choir...

^__^


What country do you come from?
And you should learn japanese from watching Jap-Audio and Eng-Sub, rather than RAWs lol.
I love Latin songs, especially masses and requiems, that's one of the main reasons why I want to learn latin
I'm not exactly THAT interested in Korean, as you can see, it's the 2nd last.


I'm from Indonesia... I'd be surprised if you don't know where that is because my country is right next to Singapore...
Posted 10/14/08 , edited 10/15/08
For people who are interested, (or if you miss Midori-chan's work...) this link below will take you to Midori-chan (who made the fanfiction in the first post)'s other La Corda d'oro fanfiction!!! It's called La Chanson de l'adieu: It started with an 'Adieu'... It's really interesting... But unfortunately it hasn't been updated for a while... It has been about 3 months, maybe? I remember the last update was in July... And I'm so curious about what's gonna happen next!!!!!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4265100/1/La_Chanson_de_ladieu_It_started_with_an_Adieu


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I'm from Indonesia... I'd be surprised if you don't know where that is because my country is right next to Singapore...


I know where is Indonesia. I'm not that dumb lol.
Posted 10/15/08

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priscilia301 wrote:

I'm from Indonesia... I'd be surprised if you don't know where that is because my country is right next to Singapore...


I know where is Indonesia. I'm not that dumb lol.


LOL I know you're not... I was just joking...
Posted 1/11/09

Shizuhi wrote:

Yay! I got my story done! It's rather short. The dialogues would sound so much better in Japanese, because it was in Japanese in my mind, but for the sake of people who do not understand, I've translated it to english. And sorry about all those musical terms and performance directions, i'm too tempted to use them!
The story is more down to reality, it is how the characters are like rather than how you want them to be like. Okok, nevermind about my blabbering, enjoy!
Oh, one last thing, I don't join FF.net, so you won't find my stories there



Hey I just got an idea...

This fic was so cool, you totally MUST post it in FF.net... (That site needs more Yunoki x Kahoko stories... T_T) If this is posted in FF.net, much more people will read it, especially fellow Yunoki x Kahoko fans...

So, my idea is, I'll post it there using my account (since you said that you don't have one)... But of course, the credits will all go to you... I swear, I'll say that I didn't make any single line of it... ^__^

What do you think? It's okay if you don't want to... (sorry if I sounded like I wanna steal your story)
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