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Always alone

Mr. Bear???
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>>>>>> Everybody in class: *talking and playing around* [note: everybody is outside]
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>>>>>>Kari: ….*sigh* another day alone huh? [note: she’s talking to herself]
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>>>>>>[note: everybody else is outside and Kari is left alone in the classroom, she’s looking though the window]
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>>>>>>Kari: it looks like their really having fun *gazing at them* I- I to want to go outside….just like everyone else, laugh like everyone, joke around, just being able to smile…
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>>>>>>Kari: hahaha look at me, alone in the classroom talking to myself….just like everyday TT~TT
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>>>>>>Kari: but I’ll be ok,I have to be strong just like my mom said, I won’t shed a single tear drop not anymore….i promise you…mom *smiles*
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>>>>>>Kari: when I think about it, it all happened so fast….next thing I knew she was gone….
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>>>>>>[flash back]
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>>>>>>Mom: im sorry Kari, but i won’t be able to eat breakfast with you not today, I have to go to work *looks at her watch* AHH!! Im going to be late!! AGAIN!!! Bye honey *kisses on the forehead*
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>>>>>>Kari: *sad* …..bye…
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>>>>>>Mom: don’t worry I’ll be back ^ ^ and remember be strong!!, don’t give ok? I’ll always be here for you don’t you forget that =)
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>>>>>>Kari: *happy* un! ^_^ (I love my mom very much)
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>>>>>>Mom: AAHHH!! Im already 30 minutes late bye honey!!
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>>>>>>Kari: bye bye *smiles*
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>>>>>>[school]
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>>>>>>Kari: ok!, don’t worry kari u’ll be ok. YOSH! Time to do my best!! I can’t give up gotta be strong.
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>>>>>>Kari: today, I’ll finally make a friend DENFINTILY!!!
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>>>>>>Girls: *whispering to each other* haha did u see that girl?, talking to herself is she crazy
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>>>>>>Kari: *overheard* …..i won’t give in!! I WON’T! *smiles* that won’t bother me anymore
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>>>>>>[in classroom]
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>>>>>>Kari: (….ahh..let see 5! Means 5x4x3x2x1 so…)
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>>>>>>Teacher: Kari you have a phone call
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>>>>>>Kari: uh..yes *going to pick the phone*
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>>>>>>Grandma: kari I have something very important to tell you
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>>>>>>Kari: ok…(she sounds so serious)
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>>>>>>Grandma: but promise me that u won’t cry
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>>>>>>Kari: uh…ok.. (what is she talking about??)
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>>>>>>Grandma: your…mother..….*weeping*
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>>>>>>Grandma: ....d-die.....today...
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>>>>>>Kari: *shock* …..*phone drops* (no…no...no!..NO!)
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>>>>>>Grandma: kari? KARI??!! Are u there??!!
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>>>>>>Kari:*runs out the door* (mom…mom!...you can’t die u can’t leave me!! MOM!!) *crying*
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>>>>>>Kari: *runs all the way home* *opens the door* MOM!!!....MOM?....mom……..*begins crying while checking all the rooms one by one and calling her name at the same time*
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>>>>>>Kari: (only one more room left, mom’s room) *sacred to death* (should I open it??) (…I have to be strong!) *opens it*
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>>>>>>Kari: *crying really loud* MOM!!!! MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!! *crying even louder* (she’s not here….it really is true)
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>>>>>>Person: kari? *puts her hands on her shoulder*
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>>>>>>Kari: *turns around quickly* mom??!!
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>>>>>>Kari: *takes another look* …(no it’s not mom it’s grandma)
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>>>>>>Grandma: im soo sorry kari *hugs her very tightly*
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>>>>>>Kari and grandma: *both crying*
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>>>>>>[flash back ends]
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>>>>>>Kari: *feeling the wind as it blows her hair* (…it all seems like it was a nightmare…and eventually mom will wake me up and we’ll go on with our daily life, like always….mom would wake up late for work again….we’ll eat breakfast together…..but none of those will ever happened again……..)
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>>>>>>*bell rings*
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>>>>>>Kari: it’s already time to leave already?? That was quick finally I get to go home ^^
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>>>>>>Kari: *gets out of class* GREAT! It’s raining super hard *sigh* (o well….i want to walk in the rain today…) *begins to walk in the rain*
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>>>>>>Kari: this is kinda nice….*walking* (something feels weird under my feet?? It feels soft..) *looks down*
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>>>>>>Kari: huh? What’s this?? *looks closely*
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>>>>>>Kari: a teddy bear??? What is it doing here?? Huh? It’s missing one eye poor thing….*thinking* it must be lost….i think I’ll take it home with me ^ ^
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>>>>>>[Kari’s house]
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>>>>>>kari: im home *closes the door*
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>>>>>>grandma: welcome home kari ^ ^ look at you, your all soaking wet, go change
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>>>>>>Kari: yes grandma ^ ^ ( I live with my grandma now…ever since mom die. She’s really nice, just like mom)
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>>>>>>[Kari’s room]
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>>>>>>Kari: look at u Mr. Bear, your all soaking wet too hehe I’ll fix you up right after I change
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>>>>>>Kari: *begins taking off her clothes*
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>>>>>>Kari: *notices Mr. Bear’s face is bright red* eh??...why Mr. bear red?? Does this teddy bear change color or something?
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>>>>>>Kari: maybe it’s sick too *she said that sarcastically* *holds the bear to her chest* [note: she’s trying to warm up the bear, because it’s wet]
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>>>>>>Mr. bear: *wiggles*
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>>>>>>Kari: *felt something move* (did Mr. bear just move?? No it can’t be I must be just shivering*
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>>>>>>Kari: *puts on clothes* ok now it’s time for Mr.bear turn ^ ^ let me go find a button for ur eye
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>>>>>>Kari: …no that one won’t work…how bout this one nope to big…there has to be one that’s the same sizes….
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>>>>>>Kari: found one! Well….it’s the same size but it’s blue though…o well this’ll work for now *puts it on Mr. bear and cleans him*
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>>>>>>{33 minutes later}
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>>>>>>Kari: THERE! *wipes off sweats* all done! Now u look brand new ^ ^
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>>>>>>Kari: *sparkling eyes* WOW!! I didn’t know Mr. bear was this cute! Hehe *snuggles Mr. bear*
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>>>>>>Kari: eh?, why is Mr. bear’s face pink??....(it looks like it’s blusing??...)
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>>>>>>Kari: *tried from cleaning Mr. bear* *yawn* im getting tried…boy it’s sure is hard taking care of u Mr. bear ^ ^
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>>>>>>Kari: from now on ur going to be sleeping with me ^ ^ and I’ll be taking care of you, my name is Kari Fushi
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>>>>>>Kari: ne?, Mr. bear do u have anybody u really love that pass away? *daze* my mom die….just a year ago…but I won’t cry anymore because I promise her that, so lets both do our best ok?! ^ ^ *falls asleep 15 minutes later, while talking to Mr. bear*
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>>>>>>Kari: ….m-mom…don’t go….*sleep talking*
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>>>>>>Mr. bear: *puts the cover over her* *goes down the bed and sleeps on the floor instead*
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>>>>>>[Mourning]
>>>>>>Kari: *rubs eyes* *steps on something soft and warm* …..what is this?....
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>>>>>>Mr. bear: OW!! that hurts…I didn’t do anything wrong..
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>>>>>>Kari: *scare* w-who’s there??!! [now her feet is completely cover Mr. bear up]
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>>>>>>Mr. bear: WILL U KINDLY STEP OFF OF ME
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>>>>>>Kari: *looks down on her feet* *sees the bear trying to escape from her feet*
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>>>>>>Mr. bear: thank you! You stepped on me for a pretty long time….i think you broke my back…*rubbing his back* ouch…
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>>>>>>Kari: …ahh…ahhhh…AAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *falls backward*
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>>>>>>Omg what happened?? And why can the bear move??? What the hell is happened??!!
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>>>>>>Find out in the next chapter!!!! >.<

PS: it might take a while cause iam babysitting 24/7 yes sad....but i will try!!! >.<
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this is just like the manga nui!
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great story!!!
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thanks >.< but i don't know when iam going to write chapter 2 yet....still thinking of what i should write
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WOOW. lol. what a cute title.~♥
hehee. take ur time in making chap.2. :>:> :DD
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Botchapinn wrote:

WOOW. lol. what a cute title.~♥
hehee. take ur time in making chap.2. :>:> :DD


thanks ^_^ and i'll try to hurry but soo much stories!!! to write!! ARRGGHH i don't think i can handle this much cause i have to switch characters A LOT!! like ko-chan's character cute, stupid, clumsy etc. And the other ones...aww man....i should have waited but my friend waited soo LONG!!! about MONTHS NOW!!! so it's going to be REALLY slow here cause im babysitting too but i will still do my BEST!!! ^_~

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Posted 7/11/08
this is great wat is this a manga or wat plz tell me
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Posted 7/11/08
this is best great story i'm still working on the drawings..emi..^^oh and i'm glad to draaw for u emi...^^tomorrow i will upload the teddy bear...
Posted 7/12/08
great story =)
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umm so if you start on this story does that mean that you will stop my babysitter?
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hihi72 wrote:

umm so if you start on this story does that mean that you will stop my babysitter?


no im not im still writing it but lately im really busy and tried but even when i have time I REALLY DON'T KNOW WHAT TO WRITE! since...im not in my house it's lonely here im at california i hate it here! i think this is why i can't write im sorry!! BUT i will write when i get back to my sweet home =) i relize that i really like my house more than before i use to hate going home
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sasukeluverforeva15 wrote:

this is great wat is this a manga or wat plz tell me


u want a summary? well it's about this girl who finds a teddy bear and takes care of it BUT! the teddy bear has a spirit inside and LOST IT'S MEMORY!!! well i don't really know yet still thinking kinda
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Posted 7/15/08
yea
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i Love it ahlor!!! it kinda reminds it of me except for the mother part...
the only thing that is missing for me is friends...
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OMG I LOVES IT!!fav one that u've wrote ^-^ so cute Mr.bears a perv though lol Hopes u write more soon cause its great
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