Post Reply My Executioner
Posted 7/11/08
I’m slowly dying, my grave is dug.
You harshly condemned me, of my first true love.
You tore my heart, left it in shreds;
While knowing I loved you with everything.

You took my hand, fulfilled my dream.
You made me feel, sweet things, my queen.
I gave you love, not thinking twice.
I gave you all of me, Heart & Mind.

You kindly took it, or so it seemed.
Next thing I new, you killed my dreams
You left me there bleeding, barely alive.
While you were off kissing some other guy.

You tell me you love him, you know it’s a lie.
You try to believe it, to feel good inside.
And meanwhile I lay here, drowning in tears.
For I will still love you for many more years.

And then I start wondering if you’d even cry.
If I were to somehow, mysteriously die.
Would you even remember me, would you even care.
Or would you forget me, and great moments we shared.

And would you remember the love that I gave.
The love that you squandered, and tossed away.
Or would you then value that deep, pure, white love.
And how I still loved you, till breath left my lungs.

You saved me from drowning, for that I am glad.
But then you condemned me, my princess, my downfall,
……..My Executioner..……
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Posted 7/12/08
this is full of emotions thats really great and you got a really good pic of the pain teh person feel
really great work =D
Posted 7/13/08
once again i must agree with yamira great work, lots of emotion, i really liked it
Posted 7/15/08

Yamira wrote:

this is full of emotions thats really great and you got a really good pic of the pain teh person feel
really great work =D


thank you ^^
Posted 7/15/08

kagura4 wrote:

once again i must agree with yamira great work, lots of emotion, i really liked it


Thahnk you ^^
Posted 7/20/08
awww
dat is sooo SAD!!!
it is true..
it has a lot of
"EMOTIONS!!"
I LOVE IT!
n shhhh
i had tears coming out!!!
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