Post Reply ~The Day I Met Her~
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Author's Note: I am working on this story now so i will be posting chapters a little at a time. For now i'm posting the preface/prologue.(yes, i know it's only two paragraphs) The prologue/preface may be a little bit non-understandable, but i tried by best. I am still working on the first chapter, so it will be coming soon. The comment thread for this is here: http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-259579/domininena1-Your-Voice.html

Preface

--As I started walking down the alley way, the figure appeared to be more human like. When I approached, I saw that it truly was a person. It was girl. She was lying on the ground bleeding, full of cuts and bruises, barely breathing. I just stupidly started at the distraught body before me.
--Help her, some voice in the back of my head was telling me. Help her. I listened like the obedient little puppy I am. I picked her up and carried her home.
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o.o. Good so far. Hope theres more!!!
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Mika-Chan211 wrote:

o.o. Good so far. Hope theres more!!!


thanks, but the comments don't go here, i posted the link to the comment thread in the first post. and yes there is more, i just finished the first chapter.(look at the post below)
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Chapter 1: School Days

---"Yuuki!, Wake up master sleeps alot", a high pitched sqeaky voice rang. "If ya don't wake up, ya gonna be late for school!" The voice had gotten a bit more mature. "Yuuki!, get off the damn bed and get dressed or we're gonna be late!" The fury just exploded from Jess's mouth. I got up."So now you get up?! Geez, we can't keep doing this. Get ready, i'll be downstairs." "Whatever", I said.
---By the way, Yuuki, that's me. I'm Yuuki, the girl disturbing my slumber was Jess. Jessica, Jess is my sister. Sadly I have to go to school. Again.
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---As I approached the school, I remembered why I didn't want to wake up. It was about the noise. The annoying shrill of a thousand girl calling my name. The chatter of people that blocked out anything unwanted But the sound one sound i hate the most is the one I was about to approach. It was the silent ringing in you ears when nothing is making a sound. Its as if i'm a god. One step into thier world and i'm royalty.
---Today is just like any day. I walk to the front of the school, the chatter stops until i find a place to stand, chatter resumes. I'm pretty used to it. Now I wait, for what i don't know, I just do.
---"Hey there my man! So watcha doin Yuuki?"'said a familiar voice.
---"Oh the usual. Standing, waiting to go in."
---"Oh really? I say ya leanin. not standin."
---"Yosuke, if you're trying to sound cool, it isn't working. As a matter a fact, its annoying. But then again, i'm used to your constant plots to try and get a girlfriend."
---"Oh common Yuuki. Show some support. At least i'm trying, right? Well, how do you do? How are you so attractive to them?"
---"How am I supposed to know?"
---"Hey, so watcha guys doin doin here? Standin by a tree that is.", Kai had finally arrived.
---"Just talkin", Yosuke answer, as if it was a secret he couldn't tell.
---Just then the bell rang. In goes everyone. One by one, in groups, in pairs. Through the doors they went.
---Oh, I forgot, Yosuke and Kai are my two friends. Kai is the happy-go-lucky type of person. And Yosuke is, well truth to tell, he's considered a pervert by the girls. He's constantly trying to get e girlfriend. I'm used to it. Why i picked these two as my friend, i'll never know.
---The rest of the day was just like any other. Homeroom, gym, science, every other subject. Just another ordinary day. well that is until I got called to the nurses office.
---Jess was sick. I was excused from school to take her home. First time, huh?, I thought. Jess hasn't been sick all year, why now?
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