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Posted 7/13/08 , edited 7/13/08
(my username is spelled wrong in the title i'm so stupid) This is the comment thread to my story. The story link is: http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-259577/The-Day-I-Met-Her.html
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dominicannena1 wrote:

(my username is spelled wrong in the title i'm so stupid) This is the comment thread to my story. The story link is: http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-259577/The-Day-I-Met-Her.html


If you'd like me to fix your title, it would not be a problem... ^^,

Anyway, about your story... It was... well I can't really say right now 'cause it's only just beginning..! Hehehe... The prologue/preface was a bit confusing as you said... But it makes you want to read more..! The first chapter was a bit quick? Actually you need a bit more descriptions at least but it was nice.
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Posted 7/14/08

PurpleSkye wrote:


dominicannena1 wrote:

(my username is spelled wrong in the title i'm so stupid) This is the comment thread to my story. The story link is: http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-259577/The-Day-I-Met-Her.html


If you'd like me to fix your title, it would not be a problem... ^^,

Anyway, about your story... It was... well I can't really say right now 'cause it's only just beginning..! Hehehe... The prologue/preface was a bit confusing as you said... But it makes you want to read more..! The first chapter was a bit quick? Actually you need a bit more descriptions at least but it was nice.


ok. and thankz i'll try and fit in more descriptions in the second chapter.
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Hi! I just finished reading your story [chapter 1].. It was good. I think it is actually a very creative opening.. It would be really wonderful if we get to see the other chapters..^^
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