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Posted 7/13/08 , edited 7/13/08
what are I
who am I
and
what dose
all
this mean
in this world
is my life
anything at all
or just dirt
that has
come
on a white dress

what are I
Human
the strongest
and
whit the best
intelect
in the world
I dont
think so
I am human
but
Im not
the strongest
in the world
the strongest is
the nature
on this
world
and do we really
have the best
intelect
then tell me
why do we
destroy
thw world around
us
and
kill around us
whitout doing anything
good

what dose
all this mean
whit life
tell us about
eva and adam
all you want
but still
I will look at you
and ask
but what dose all
this mean
tell me that
but
they cant

who am I
maybe I know
it
and
maybe thats
just somthing
that I want too belive
Im a soul
that has been
created
by god,
by me,
by you,
all those
has somthing to do

but let me
tell you
who I am
Im the person
who write
this
to make
everything clearer
in my mind
to show my soul
but
I still cant show you all
cuse Im
not sure
if Im really the one
that I
tell about now


hope you guys will like it i just trough about it a while ago and then I said to myself this would be great too write down
so tell me now was it really so great??
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Posted 7/14/08
Yes i love it!!!, It's like a presentetion about urself!!!, It's so good!! Very Good Yami ^^ Congratulations
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Posted 7/14/08

david_k_belanova wrote:

Yes i love it!!!, It's like a presentetion about urself!!!, It's so good!! Very Good Yami ^^ Congratulations


Thank you so much david *hugs*
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Posted 7/14/08

Yamira wrote:


david_k_belanova wrote:

Yes i love it!!!, It's like a presentetion about urself!!!, It's so good!! Very Good Yami ^^ Congratulations


Thank you so much david *hugs*


U're very welcome, i like to read your poems!!...And i love them *hughs you*
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Posted 7/14/08

david_k_belanova wrote:


Yamira wrote:


david_k_belanova wrote:

Yes i love it!!!, It's like a presentetion about urself!!!, It's so good!! Very Good Yami ^^ Congratulations


Thank you so much david *hugs*


U're very welcome, i like to read your poems!!...And i love them *hughs you*


thats great!
hope you dont get worried beacuse of them lol to have a girlfriend who has the tittel " The death poem queen" xD
Posted 7/15/08
wow :D, my favourite part is the ending, tha last paragraph. Amazing work yamira X3
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kagura4 wrote:

wow :D, my favourite part is the ending, tha last paragraph. Amazing work yamira X3


THank you very much =D
it is my favorit part too, I was amesed how I writed that part xD but at first I trough that this was just like somthing that I was throwing in here and there
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Awsome!! Great job!!
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