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[Fanfiction] Moving?
Posted 7/14/08

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f9a9101 wrote:

awsome!!! i loved your story........i actually cried where kuto said "So this is what they meant when they said that love also hurts? Now I know.".....it reminded me of my crush.....and i actually said that once......... anyway........love your story....write more!!!


Thank you so much for liking it! Omg....I know right. Sometimes while typing out my story I find myself in tears....

Love does hurt...wahhhhh!!!

I´ll be updating tomorrow.



giv me a link i wanna watch it (AMV)

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i wanna c da AMV giv me a link so i can watch it


Hold on...I´m barely going to upload it to youtube. In the mean time check out my first SC AMV!



It´s no that good though: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xuxg4k_TS_E


My new one is waaaaaaaaaaay better. XD
Posted 7/14/08
yea ur rite its not good but at least u made 1 the song is crap ................... hope its beta (new 1)
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Well, if you like Vanessa Carlton then you´ll like the song. And I think my new vid is better. Just gotta wait and see if youtube will accept it right now.
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omigosh. i love your fanfic! i was supposed to go to sleep but then i clicked here...and yeahs. thanks for writing and please keep updating. :))
Posted 7/15/08
Omg I love your story. Its so heart warming? Or was it a touching story!
Beautifully written Awesome job cant wait for chap. 6

Lol I used to write a whole ton of fanfics but quit due to too much work.
Hopefully your hopes dont go down like mine.

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Posted 7/15/08

cristel91 wrote:


f9a9101 wrote:

awsome!!! i loved your story........i actually cried where kuto said "So this is what they meant when they said that love also hurts? Now I know.".....it reminded me of my crush.....and i actually said that once......... anyway........love your story....write more!!!


Thank you so much for liking it! Omg....I know right. Sometimes while typing out my story I find myself in tears....

Love does hurt...wahhhhh!!!

I´ll be updating tomorrow.


it does..........and yay!! thxn so much
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Enjoy!

Chapter 7-

Ikuto POV

Paris...you are moving to Paris. So far away, you are going too far away from me. Will I be able to endure this Amu?

Now you´re looking at me, waiting for my answer.

"Well, at least Paris is beautiful," I tell you trying to sound cheerful. I can see that you emmidietly realize that I am faking the cheeriness in my voice.

"Ikuto...it´s very far away. I never knew I would go this far. I...this will be hard."

Yes Amu, it will be hard. No, it won´t be hard. It´ll be painful and impossible for me to know that you will be thousands of miles away from me.

"I...no. WE have to work hard for us okay? Don´t worry, I´m sure that one day we will meet again. I promise. Heck, I´ll become a famous violinist and get so famous that I will travel all around the world. I will definetly go with you to Paris one day."

I see you cheer up at this. One side of my heart is glad because this is becoming easier for you to deal with but on the other, I pain. I pain because I don´t really know if I will be able to see you again.

I wish everything was done as easily as it was said.

And now you are looking at me with you golden eyes, those eyes that I love so much. I see innocence, love, sadness, hope, anguish and relief.

"Stay with me tonight," You blush as you say this and I can´t help but to smile and tease you.

"Wow! Perverted Amu wants me to stay for the night!"

"P-pervert! Not like that! I...I just want to enjoy my last few hours here in Japan with you since I will be departing at 12 p.m from the airport."

I feel no more need for words as I just sit on the bed and beckon you over and you sit by my side. I hug you and pull you with me so that we are now laying on your bed. As I´m hugging you I can´t help but to think how much I will miss your scent, your warmth...

Suddenly I feel sleepy and close my eyes with you still in my arms. Before I know it, we are both now asleep.

End POV


Amu awoke to find herself alone in her bed, Ikuto no longer by her side.

'Ikuto, where did you go?'

She emmidietly got up and got dressed, too distracted to even notice that her charas were coming out of their eggs.

--Hours later she found herself out in the front of her house. All of her friends were there too see her off.

There were no signs of Ikuto and she had toleave in a matter of minutes.

"Well, I guess this is good-bye then..." she said as she tried to act composed in front of her friends.

"Amu-chan...don´t worry. This isn´t the end of our friendship. We´ll all keep in touch ok?" Somehow Nagehiko always said the right words to make one feel better.

It was almost time to leave and Ikuto hadn´t shown up.

"Amu! Get in the car!" Her parents called out to her.

She hugged all of her friends and she walked over to her parents car, one foot inside.

"Amu..."

She turned around to see Ikuto standing behind her. Too happy to see he had come, she ran in to his arms.

"I thought you wouldn´t come," she said in tears,"when I woke up this morning you weren´t there anymore..."

"I´m sorry, I woke up early to go get a present for you. A reminder of me."

"But why are you blushing?" She asked amused.

Ikuto took out a square box, beautifully decorated with pink and golden ribbons and handed it over to Amu. As she opened the gift she couldn´t help but to laugh. Inside was stuffed cat drinking a glass of milk.

"Like it?"

"I love it..." and she felt her eyes start to water. Ikuto leaned down to her for one last time and captured her lips with his own.

"See you later Amu..." He smiled at her

She only nodded and got into the car.

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Leaves fall, flowers grow, the day becomes night and people grow...

Changes...that is what life is all about isn´t it?

Sometimes things change...for the good or the bad.

"Ikuto! Ikuto!" Amu yelled and tears fell from her eyes as the car started moving and she saw her friends and Ikuto farther and farther away untill she couldn´t see them anymore.

"Ikuto...Ikuto...Ikuto..." Amu whispered again and again. "Cool & Spicy" character no longer with her as her tears ran and ran...threatening to keep on flowing. Not wanting to stop, she simply let them fall.

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Two hours later...

"Passenger for flight 173 please head out to the gate. This is the last call."

"Ready to go Amu?" her parents asked her.

"Yeah..."

'We´ll meet again Ikuto....we definetly will.'

And with the last consoling thought, she and her family headed towards the gate.


TBC...

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Chapter 8 spoiler...

It had been five long years, five eternal years and she was finally going back to Japan.

'Ikuto! I´ll be there soon...'


Chapter 9 spoiler...

Amu POV

"Ikuto, I´m back.." those words automatically come out of my lips and you turn around to look at me.

"Amu?" You run towards me and I find myself being hugged and kissed to oblivion.

'I´m finally back in your arms...' and I smile at that thought.


Chapter 10 spoiler...

"Come with me to Paris Ikuto, come with me."

"I´m sorry Amu, I can´t," and he turned his back to her.


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Hehe. I finally updated, I blame writer´s block. Didn´t really like this chapter much but I hope you guys did. Thanks for the reviews! Yay! Thanks to you guys, this story has reached 1800 hits. Yay! That´s a good reason for yaying right, right?!?

See ya next chapter!

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Don´t mind the spoilers, they are just to keep you interested.
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WOW! I love it! That was sooo cute!
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omg this is the best fanfiction i ever heard!!! i used to play around on fanfiction.net but this story is the best!!
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omg this is the best fanfiction i ever heard!!! i used to play around on fanfiction.net but this story is the best!!


I actually have this story on fanfiction.net and guardian´s wish.

Thanks for the compliment!

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animeangel12 wrote:

omg this is the best fanfiction i ever heard!!! i used to play around on fanfiction.net but this story is the best!!


I actually have this story on fanfiction.net and guardian´s wish.

Thanks for the compliment!





your welcome!!!!
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Oh right, just so you guys don´t get confused. The 1800 hits thing was for fanfiction.net but I surpassed it now! Currently holding 2125 hits. yay!
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u should post this on fanfiction.net!
or.com.........
iforgot....
yayies!!amuto!nice story
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