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[Fanfiction] Moving?
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I already have it on fanfiction.net


Thanks for the compliment!


Amuto rocks!
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cristel91 wrote:

I already have it on fanfiction.net


Thanks for the compliment!


Amuto rocks!



D: can't you post it up here? :3
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xChibi wrote:


cristel91 wrote:

I already have it on fanfiction.net


Thanks for the compliment!


Amuto rocks!



D: can't you post it up here? :3


What do you mean?

I have all the chapters I´ve posted on fanfiction.net here. I´m currently working on chapter 8. Here´s the link to fanfiction.net

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4383596/1/Moving

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awsome!!! i cant wait for more!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!
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Awww... Cliffy.. DX
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I love it! Amuto 4-ever!
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Chapter 8-

Beautiful streets, wonderful sightings, harmonical sounds, sweet smells...those are many of the things that characterize Paris.

Paris! Oh sweet Paris...

'Sweet, right it is...'

Unknown to other citizens that were enjoying the beauty that was Paris, a girl with pink hair and golden eyes was sitting near a fountain watching the sun set.

Nobody seemed to notice as they kept on walking by, taking in all of the sights with their eyes, too distracted to notice that the girl was somehow staring longinly at the sky.

Twenty-one year old Hinamori Amu was wishing to be somewhere else. No...wishing didn´t come even close. She was DESPERATE to be in another place.

It had been five years since she had left Japan in order to come to Paris with her parents. Her mother, a succesfull writer of a magazine, had been offered a high position in a famous magazine here. Her father, ace photographer, was offered to be the lead photographer for the magazine that her mom was currently working in.

At first life in Paris had been a little difficult for the family, the only one who didn´t seem to mind at all was Ami. The first day they had arrived at Paris, Ami couldn´t stop gawking non-stop at how beautiful everything was.

Somehow everyone seemed to have grown accustomed to life here. Well, not really everyone. Hinamori Amu stilled longed to go back to Japan. It was not really Japan that made her want to go back, more like SOMEONE in Japan.

Yes..a certain "cat boy" as I, the narrator like to call him.

Finally deciding to get up from the fountain and go home, she grabbed her bag and made her way down the street.

Amu had lost her charas 3 years ago. Eventually she had decided to take all of her would-be selves. She had taken up on Ran´s love for sports and had become a wonderful cook thanks to Suu. As for Miki, she was currently studying clothes design and was very gifted at it.

Entering a large building, she took an elevetor to the seventh floor. Thanks to her parents job, they were able to afford for her to live in a seperate apartment from them. This had come in handy seeing as she wanted to 'see' what living like an independent was.

She put her bag on her kitchen table and went over to her fridge.

"Now what to cook for dinner today..." Amu said outloud.

Finally deciding to just make herself some quick sandwiches, she went to her living room. Her apartment wasn´t really anything that fancy. She just had everything that was necessary.

Living alone at first had become somewhat lonely but she had gotten used to it. It was better this way. She could cook whatever she wanted, never had problems about who had to take out the trash, never had to worry if the apartment was clean or not...it was wonderful!

Sitting down on her couch she turned on her tv and began biting her sandwiches.

After an hour or so of watching tv, she went to go take a bath.

--10:00 P.M

Amu POV

Ah...I´m finally reunited with my dear bed. I lay back in my bed, turn to my right and my eyes lay down on a certain stuffed cat that´s drinking a glass of milk.

´I always smile when I see this cat,' I think to myself as I grab a hold of said object.

I bring it towards my chest and hug it tighly and unknowingly, slip into my own world of fantasy.

Why? Because its a memory I have of Ikuto of course.

"Ikuto..."

Ikuto, Ikuto, Ikuto, Ikuto, Ikuto....

I never get tired of thinking that name over and over again.

It´s like a sweet song you know?

Ikuto, Ikuto, Ikuto, Ikuto...oops, I´m missing one more: Ikuto!

In my mind I can still see his handsome face, perfected over with one of his trade mark smirks and I find myself blushing. Suddenly I find that scene playing over in my mind again for what seemed to be the 100 billionth time since I had left Japan.

What scene? Obviously the one where Ikuto and I kissed and said we loved each other. As I see this over in my head again, I can´t help but to gently touch my lips with the tips of my fingers and blush some more.

Even after five years, I still can feel the lingering touch of his lips on mine.

"Argh!" I say out loud.

"Come on Amu! Just a few more hours and you can go back!"

End POV

This narrator has good news for you...check below if you want to know:

It had been five long years, five eternal years and she was finally going back to Japan.

'Ikuto! I´ll be there soon...'

Yeah you read right! She´s going back to Japan, well...only for two weeks but still!

Amu had FINALLY convinced her parents to let her go on a short vacation back to Japan. Well, it´s more like she "informed" them that she was going back. Even if they had said no she still would have gone.

She was eager to go back, very eager. She was planning to go as a surprise, nobody in Japan new that she was heading back.

A silly smile crosses her face, I bet she´s thinking of Ikuto.

"Ah! I´m finally going to see everyone again...Oh yes, yes yes!!! Yes, yes, y- No! I´m not done packing yet!"

And now she´s running around like crazy all around her room packing everything up.

Love really does make an idiot out of you don´t you think? We have Amu here as an example.

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9 A.M Airport

"Amu...be sure to bring us a souvenir from Japan ok!" One of her friends, Nat said to her while giving her a bone crushing hug.

"A-air!.."

"Hinamori! Get some manga from Japan for me!" Jacob, her manga and anime obsessed friend said to her in what he attempted but failed to be a meanencing manner.

"Yes, I already know that!"

"Amuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...bring me pictures of hot guys ok!" Last but not least Joanne said to her. Seriously, her friend was crazy.

"Yes Joanne, I´ll even bring you one if I can."

"Amu...oh my little sparrow is traveling on her own Mama!" Her dad cried before jumping over to Amu and hugging her like no tomorrow.

"Papa, Amu is old enough to travel on her own. Take care ok honey. We´ll be waiting for you to return." Mama said as Papa finally released Amu.

"Onee-chan..." Ami said as she came forward. Ami had grwon a lot over these five years although she still had the same amount of energy as before.

"Yes Ami?"

"Try to bring me some Utau Hoshina cd´s from Japan ok?"

"Yes Ami," -sweatdrops-

Passengers for flight 136 please head towards the gates. This is the last call.

"Well, I better go," Amu said as she gave everyone a last hug.

Walking over to the gate, she hands in her ticket and turns around to wave one more time and her family and friends and goes inside.

Amu POV

'In a few hours I´ll be there...'

I buckle my safety belt and a few minutes later I feel the plane taking off from the ground.

I lean my head back and smile.

'This is it...just wait for me a little longer Ikuto...'

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Hours later----

The plane has finally landed and I head out of the plane. I run towards the luggage department and grab my things. I´m too excited to notice anything around me that I don´t even notice people staring at my hyperactiness. Oh well.

As I head out of the airport, door opening for me, I smile.

Japan hasn´t changed much! Oh lovely Japan.

"I´m finally back!" I say to myself as I keep smiling like an idiot and staring out at all of the Japanese citizens.

'I´m finally here Ikuto, I´m finally here...'


TBC...

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Yay! So that was chapter 8! Woot, woot! I hope you guys like it. Don´t forget to review, send in your opinions. Anonymous reviews are warmly accepted too.


Also, I was wondering.

Do you guys want me to keep on posting spoilers for upcoming chapters or do you just want to wait until the actual chapter comes out? Well, tell me in your comments.

See ya guys next chapter!










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its really good please continue!!!!!
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*gazes blankly at screen* wow...that was...way to good for words....i cant think of the right word...perfect. I'll use the word perfect.

Perfect.

Keep writing! You'll be famous one day!
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wow!!! good chapter!!!!!
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~nyaaaaaa~ kawaii story!! wish i cud write lyk dat!! *sigh* oh well.....O.o, anywayz.....cant w8 4 d next chapter!! hahahah...^^
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Too wonderful. :3

please please please!! Join my group: http://www.crunchyroll.com/group/Shugo_Chara_Character_Roleplay

You can post your fanfiction story there. :3 It's really really really AWESOME!!

2 things, though.

1. I think you should bold some sentences, like the announcent thing in this chapter. And, for thoughts, you should italize them. It'd make it look prettier. x3

2. You should put all of the chapters into one post. You can put like Chapter 1 and then put Spoiler and then Chapter 2 and spoiler like this:

Chapter 1


Chapter 2

Posted 7/16/08
that was pure genius
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i love your fanfic. i saw it on fanfiction.net too. i sent a review. whaa! i can't wait for the next chapter
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sweeet! reading fanfics make me happy! and sad sometimes..
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