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A story~ you'll all enjoy it~SO READ IT!
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A FEW THINGS BEFORE YOU READ!
1) amu is in 11th grade.
2) she doesnt have the humpty lock, or charas.
3) there are no guardians.
4) ikuto doesnt have a sister

there was a girl named amu hinamori, she was known for being cool and spicy. but the truth is, she was just a shy girl that played it cool. she was in 11th grade. there was a group of girls in her class that were extremely jelous of her and they always tried to kill her! but what everyone didnt know was that amu had extrondinary powers, and she could fight too! her good fighting skills have gotten her onto a secret team of people that can all transform. there names were usuke, kurama, and hitsugaya. they all are in the same class. and after school and on the weekends the have a secret base that they all go to to hang out and train and stuff. together all four of them are on a fighting team called team urameshi, but to enter the tournaments they need 5 people, so they're still searching for 1 other person. they boys on the team dont know amu can transform just yet...and all of this is a secret. but one day the group of girls brough amu up to the rooftop. amu asked them "what do you want?" "oh nothing much, we just wanted advice...i mean only i wanted advice.." so the group leader named saya took amu closer to the edge of the roof to talk to her privately. "ok i dont think we have to be this far away from them you know..so what do you need?" amu said. "well...i need you to BE GONE!" saya said as she pushed amu off the ledge of the 4 story high, school rooftop! amu sceamed with fear, knowing that she was going to die if she did'nt transform. but she couldnt transform in front of saya and all the other people that were watching her fall. amu closed her eyes, and within that time, she felt herself in someones arms. amu opened her eyes to find herself being held by a very handsome boy. "are you ok..girl?" he asked. "eh?! i-im fine! thank you for catching me, i would probably be dead by now if it wasnt for you! so thanks so much!" The boy blushed a little and said, "uh no problem...i couldn't just let a girl fall off a roof like that, so i went and caugh you. anyways, how did you fall off the roof?" "well, i got pushed off by this girl in my class!" amu replied. "dang...thats a bit scary. she must be jelous of you." the boy said. "maybe...so anyway, whats your name? im amu hinamori, but call me amu please." amu said. "well amu...im tsukiyomi ikuto, but call me ikuto. nice to meet you." ikuto said. amu blushed. "nice to meet you too! but, can you put me down now because im gonna be late for my next class!" ikuto blushed. "o-oh, yea, sorry about that." he put amu down, and amu said, "well bye, ikuto! maybe ill see you again!" then amu ran off. ikuto saw her running toward a high school, and then he said to himself, "ah..thats the school ill be going to very soon.' as amu was running back to class she said to herself, "wow what a nice boy, he saved my life! i hope ill see him again some day." amu then smiled and blushed. when amu finally got to her class the teach said "hinamori-san! your late!" amu looked at hitsugaya because she heard him laughing. "im sorry sensei, i wont be late again its just-" "no excuses! now go sit down!" the sensei said. "yes mam." amu replied. hitsugaya kept laughing, so amu just gave him a stare."sorry, sorry amu!" he said while giggling. classes went by and finally, the bell rang. amu went up to the guys and asked if we were gonna go to the secret base house today. usuke said not today. so amu went walking home, but then the saya group came up to her and saya said, "who was that boy amu?! where did he come from!?" "i-i dont know now leave me alone! your lucky im even talking to you low lives." amu said. "low lives? thats it!" saya then blew a shinny whistle, and all theese girls started coming out from places and surrounding amu with angry faces. alot of them were cracking there knucles. "what is this saya? why cant you just leave me alone!?" amu asked. "because...your too cool and spicy, you think your all that! go get her now girls! attack!" shouted saya. amu was frightened, she couldnt do anything, she was sourrounded. finally, amu let out a scream, and then screamed "help, anyone?! yusuke, kurama, hitsugaya?! IKUTO! ahh~!" amu closed her eyes as the girls were right before her face. then, out of no where ikuto came and swept amu off her feet."wha..whats this?" amu said. ikuto looked down at her and smiled. amu saw him do that so she blushed. amu then noticed the weird clothes he was wearing this time. she thought, "no way...this boy...ikuto...can do character transformations?!" ikuto noticed her expression and asked, "whats that look for? you did scream my name to help you didnt you?" amu blushed and said " yea yea i did scream your name. but...you can do...a character transformation?" ikuto was startled and shocked by the quick question that he nearly dropped her. amu screamed. ikuto said, "dont worry im not going to drop you! but how do you know?" then they landed on a rooftop. "well...um...lucky geuss?" amu said. ikuto smiled and said, "your an intresting girl, and i can read your face. your face is telling me that you can transform! wow, i havent met anyone who could transform..." "well i can transform...but your the only who i ever told! take this as a thanks for saving my life, again." amu said. it was silent for a few moments, so ikuto started saying, "you know amu, im coming...amu?" "sorry ikuto, i gotta go, thanks again!" amu shouted as she ran off. ikuto stared at her as she ran down the side walk. he smiled. the next day was school also, so amu walked to school with kurama, usuke, and hitsugaya. amu was dozing off about her and ikutos conversation yesterday. kurama noticed that and said to amu, "amu, are you ok? you not all smiley and cheerful today. did something happen?" kurama had always had a tiny crush on amu. then hitsugaya, who has more than a little crush on amu said, "hey! amu, kurama here is talkin to you!" "huh? oh..um..im fine you guys, thanks for asking. im just a little tired, thats all." amu said with a big smile. "oh, ok then." kurama said while smiling back. they arrived to class and took their seats. the sensei comes in and tell everyone to quiet down, because theres a suprise. everyone was geting exciting and whispering about what the suprise could be. the sensei finally annouced the suprise. "ok everyone, listen up. the suprise is...we are having a new student in our class starting today!" everyone was going crazzy with saying stuff like, woa? a new student!? yey! i wonder if its a boy or girl? "alright, listen up class! his name is ikuto tsukiyomi, so treat him nicely" amu was shocked..she said in her head, "no way right..it cant possibly be him..." then he entered the room and said "hey people, im ikuto tsukyomi, please treat me nicely." he looked around the classroom and saw amu. his eyes widened, and amu sat up, and they made eye contact. they kept staring at eachother and ikuto said in his head, "no way! i actually got her class. all right, this should be fun!" then amu though in her head"its the boy...the boy that kept saving me..the boy that can do character transformations...the boy that i-" "are you two done starring at each other yet!?" the sensei asked. amu got embarrased and looked down. then she and ikuto said yes. then the sensei told amu to take a seat behind amu. "oh great" amu thought. a few hours passed at it was lunch break. ikuto left the classroom to take a look around the school. while he was doing that kurama and hitsugaya asked amu,"whats with you and that guy?" amu was embarrased and sid "nothing, we just met before. thats all." amu then got up to leave the classroom also but as she was walking out the classroom door, ikuto was coming back in, so they bumped into each other. Amu feel to the floor and saya and her groupies started laughing, while kurama, usuke, and hitsugaya just stared. "oh im sorry amu. im the one whos supose to be protecting you, not hurting you." ikuto said as he smiled and offered his hand. amu blushed alot, and took his hand. then he pulled her up. right at that moment the sensei opened the door to come back in the class room to get something. the door wacked amu and pushed her over forward. the force was too strong for ikuto so him and amu fell to the floor and amu landed on top of him. "oh, hinamori-san, im sorry." the sensei said. amu opened her eyes and saw ikutos face right in front of hers. her heart was really racing and her face was as red as a crayon. ikuto and amu looked into each others eyes, then slowly, ikuto started to blush. "ar-are you alright amu?" he asked as he smiled. "uh..y-yea..i think so." amu got up and ikuto was getting up. but at that moment, another person enters the room; a student. the door hits amu, again and she went flying into ikutos chest. before they hit the ground, ikuto wrapped his arms around amu and pulled her tight to him, then they hit the floor. everyone was so stunned, that they didnt do anything but stare and laugh. amu says, "ow..." ikuto then comes back to reality. "amu, are you still ok?" she notices his arms around her so it hard for her to get up."uh..im fine, but i cant get up when your clinging to me ikuto." "oh, yea! sorry amu!" ikuto got embarrased and removed his arms. so now amus finally got up, she heard the door opening again so she flung around and striked the door with a powerful kick. kurama usuke and hitsugaya all had raindrops on their head since amu kicked that door with lots of power. ikuto finally got up and the sensei that was still in the room yelled at amu. "you could have hurt someone! and your destroying school property! detention! no excuses!" "fine.." amu said. so amu stayed after school to serve detention. during the time she was thinking about ikuto. she though, "whats with him? whats with me? why do i feel this feeling in my heart...it cant be l-" "Amu!" ikuto shouted. amu turned around to see ikuto and blushed. "Ikuto?! you didnt have detention so why are you here?" amu asked. "well i came to help you, and talk to you." amu blushed some more. "listen, im sorry about earlier, if i walked in like 5 minutes later, nothing would of had happen." ikuto said. "im glad it happened." amu mumbled. "did you say something?" ikuto asked. "no! not at all..." she replied.


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let me know if you want me to finish it ok guys and girls?
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uh lady.... there is an amuxikuto thread

wat the....usuke, kurama, and hitsugaya enough said......team urameshi

cant read......much......more
ikuto blushing.....cant imagine it

...... b4 i cross any other lines i will not finish it.....

though at least u tried i respect that

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uhohimdead wrote:

uh lady.... there is an amuxikuto thread

wat the....usuke, kurama, and hitsugaya enough said......team urameshi

cant read......much......more
ikuto blushing.....cant imagine it

...... b4 i cross any other lines i will not finish it.....

though at least u tried i respect that



lmao, yea i know its a weird story!
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secret......base? ......but, sorta interesting story though^^
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katkat15 wrote:

secret......base? ......but, sorta interesting story though^^


lmao..i kno..im sorry thats just my imagination...hahahaa~
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paigegotkisses wrote:


katkat15 wrote:

secret......base? ......but, sorta interesting story though^^


lmao..i kno..im sorry thats just my imagination...hahahaa~


hahahah, no no, dats okeii......
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katkat15 wrote:


paigegotkisses wrote:


katkat15 wrote:

secret......base? ......but, sorta interesting story though^^


lmao..i kno..im sorry thats just my imagination...hahahaa~


hahahah, no no, dats okeii......

lol ok
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i find it quite cute if you dont pay attention to the ikuto in shugo chara.
can you complete it? i want to see what happens. but make paragraphs its kinda hard to read.
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Lollipopfan wrote:

i find it quite cute if you dont pay attention to the ikuto in shugo chara.
can you complete it? i want to see what happens. but make paragraphs its kinda hard to read.


thanks and yea ill finish it.
and what do you mean by making it harder to read?
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paigegotkisses wrote:


Lollipopfan wrote:

i find it quite cute if you dont pay attention to the ikuto in shugo chara.
can you complete it? i want to see what happens. but make paragraphs its kinda hard to read.


thanks and yea ill finish it.
and what do you mean by making it harder to read?


cause its like a big block just seperate it a little so its easier to follow the lines.

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y don;t u just load it on fanfiction.net?
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i don't get why most girls like amu x ikuto pair i feel it's a little bit awkward for a highschool guy to have a relationship with a 6th/5th grader O_o
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paigegotkisses wrote:

let me know if you want me to finish it ok guys and girls?
thanks.


kk....i dunno about other people......but i loved the story......keep writing.....im supporting ya!!!
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its sooo long.. i don't want to finish reading.. its probably jus some amuto story anyways.. y bother reading...
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