"Rev the Reaper" by kiyosuke
Posted 7/14/08 , edited 7/24/08
Rev the Reaper by kiyosuke

Synopsis:
Kimura Rev. He is an ordinary 16 year-old teenager. The only thing that is out of the ordinary is his life is a little too boring for an average teenager. Boring school. Boring friends. His whole life just makes him bored out of his mind. Even though he lives in a world infested with monsters known as "Verirrts", he lives his life untouched by the chaos and horror the "Verirrts" can bring. However, when Rev has an unexpected visit, he may get what he has always wanted-a life full of action and adventure. But is he strong enough? Is he up for the challenge? Or is an extremely exciting life too much for Rev to handle? Read on to find out!



Chapter 1: Rev the Bored Teenager
(Incomplete)



I decided to quit working on this! So if someone can delete this... :/
Posted 7/14/08 , edited 7/23/08
Another manga?

Woah. Awesome job man. Greatly drawed.

I envy your skill.

The story flowed realy nicely, smoth place. I got drawn in. Action scene, where the girl fights "Verirrts", is greatly detailed. This will turn out to be great shouen anime.

Charachters, well I can see that they have diffrent personalities and stuff but I still need to meet them better, especially the girl, of course. So I'll keep my mouth shout for now about that comment.

Rev's borderom awfully resembles Light's (Death Note) all trought they're not the same. Bloody teenager . Woah he is bored, I get it so am I.
Posted 7/14/08
haha thx yea well its still the first episode so ill get more in depth later on...but i havent been able to get the time to finish it but ill try to get it done asap ;P
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Posted 7/17/08 , edited 7/17/08
cool manga!I like the picture on page 28

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Can you complete the first chapter?Cause this rocks and i can't wait!
Posted 7/18/08 , edited 7/18/08
thx! n_n. haha well ill try but i have a bunch of summer assignments to do....thats why im held up in finishing it...but like i said ill try to get it done as fast as i can ;P
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Posted 7/20/08
this the best drawn manga i've seen here so far. it's really good. for that matter the story is as good: it has all the shounen requisites down pat. i suggest you put some muscle into the storyline and diversify abilities and characters (the lead is quite interesting but the swordsman isn't). well, waiting for the really action packed parts.
Posted 7/20/08 , edited 7/20/08
haha thx...yea im not done the first chapter yet..sry! >.<...haha its reaaallyy time consuming...so ill try to get it done soon..hahaha...and dont worry bout the swordsman...if i ever get this done..ill get more in depth with her...along with everything else! ;P
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Posted 7/22/08
the warrior chick's outfit reminds me of Faye from Cowboy Bebop ... im impressed by your battle scene ... its detailing it out little by little ... unlike mine which are usually montages ...

weird that u made her talk before u showed her face ...
Posted 7/23/08

Havek_Reekel wrote:

the warrior chick's outfit reminds me of Faye from Cowboy Bebop ... im impressed by your battle scene ... its detailing it out little by little ... unlike mine which are usually montages ...

weird that u made her talk before u showed her face ...


is it? lol...well i was planning to show her face at the end...if i ever get to finishing this =.=''
Posted 7/24/08
well.....after lots of thinking (not that much..haha) i decided that im going to quit working on this manga :[....sry but i just lost my drive in workin on this....and it takes too darn long for me!...so if someone can delete this...thatd be great :O
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