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Posted 7/14/08 , edited 7/14/08
Moon’s Reflection on the Water…

Drifting on the endless sea…
Forever to be lost…
The crescent moon rises…
Bringing down light upon the sea…
You look at the moon…
You reach but never touch…
You’re sinking deeper in the sea…
The light is getting dimmer and dimmer…
You hit the bottom…
Precious life slipping from your mouth…
The light from the moon hits the water’s surface…
You go to the top…
You break threw the water’s surface…
Shattering the reflection of the Moon…



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Posted 7/15/08
OMG I just need to fav this <3
its really great!
Posted 7/15/08
nice work, did u get inspiration from the pic or did u think of the poem first
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Posted 7/19/08
loved how you wrote this one.. the lines got me suprised. Great poem! ;]
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Posted 7/28/08

Yamira wrote:

OMG I just need to fav this <3
its really great!


Really? Thnx!!
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Posted 7/28/08

kagura4 wrote:

nice work, did u get inspiration from the pic or did u think of the poem first


I actually got insiration from the real mon, I just made the pic for the poem!! thnx!!
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farfalla_12 wrote:

loved how you wrote this one.. the lines got me suprised. Great poem! ;]


Thnx much!! ^-^
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