A MikanXNatsume story part 1
Posted 7/16/08
Young Mikan Sakura is a girl from a japanese countryside,she’s optimistic,playfull,emotional,dumb but her best friend Imai Hotaru is totally the opossite...she’s briliant,cool,smart and emotionless...In a small country school,they are being best freinds till one day Hotaru transffared to a strange city school named „THE ALICE ACADEMY”. Mikan dreadfully decides to follow her friend but there’s where her adventure begins.That academy is not a normal one...all of it’s students have a speciall ability given by god that’s named „alice” she soon discovers that an alice gives you some unimaginable power’s,it can even allow you to fly,read minds,she was so excited about it before she found out that she has the nullification alice,that’s the alice that allows her to nullify anybody’s alice and in result she can’t get hurt by any alice.She was disspointed cause she was hopping for an alice that can be usefull for everyone not one as selfish as this one...Anyway she was transferred to class-6B,when she arrived at the classroom the substitute-teacher introduced her „Hey kids we got a new trasffer student here ! please may you introduce yourself?” „yes sir my name is Mikan Sakura my age is 12 pleased to meet you a-„ she didn’t even finished her sentence cause the kid’s were trowing papers or books at her...the substitute-teacher then said „go to that empty spot there please may you?” „uh-m-yes sir” when she arrived in the middle of the class she saw her friend....Hotaru...who was totally ignoring her... „Oi Hotaru,how are you?” but she still kept ignoring her „Oi Hotaru!!! I’m talking to you coldblooded-girl!!” she screamed,then all her classmates rushed at Hotaru „Do you know this weirdo?”a girl named Sumire asked her „Hmph” was all she heard back.Then all the classmates we’re surounding Mikan asking her the same question „What’s you alice?” confused she replied „I have the nulification alice!” All of them burst in laughter... „That’s the most usseles alice it suits you well!” said Sumire „What’s so funny?anyway with what are your alice’s so much more special” said a boy with the mind reading alice „What he’s reading my mind” the boy continued „Stop that” yelled Mikan „Please take a seat miss Sakura” said the substitute teacher.She sat near a boy with purple hair and eyes like the crimson flame who seemed calm and non-intrested of what his classmates we’re doing. „Ohayo nice to meet you what’s you name?” said Sakura,the boy ignored her then all her classmates we’re looking at her with a face that says you-are-damn-stupid-aren’t-you,Sumire quickly went near Mikan using her alice „what’s that alice called asked Mikan” „cat-dog pheromone it allows me to use any of cat’s and dog’s abbilites” she then looked with a mad look at Mikan „what?” „as the president of the Natsume x Luka fanclub I can’t allow you to sit next to him you country-side girl!” „So his name is Natsume?What’s his alice?” „You don’t even know that!?!” said Sumire laughing „Well I’m new how the heck am I supposed to know?” „Fire alice” said Natsume with a cold and low voice ,then he sat up „let’s go Luka” „uh-hai!” said a blond boy with blue eyes carrying a bunny. „What alice do you have Luka-kun?” asked Mikan „animal pheromone” said Luka with a calm and kind voice „nice to meet you Sakura-san” „nice to meet you to!” responded Mikan „finnaly someone you can talk to” said the boy with the mind reading alice „Stop doing that you brat!” yelled Mikan „Ruka?” said Natsume „oh-yeah I’m coming!”...guess their kinda popular tought Mikan.. „Oh yeah..Hotaru!! why are you ignoring me?!?” says Mikan jumping,hugging and crying at Hotaru „Baka...” said Hotaru as she went out of the class... „Don’t tell me that someone like you knows Hotaru” said Sumire laughing „Shut up Permy!” said Mikan crying some more... „Who are you calling Permy you dumb girl! Anyway don’t get any closer to Natsume and Luka-kun!” „It’s not like I intented either...” said Mikan „Ignore sumire” said a pink haired girl named Anna „uh-okay..So what’s your name ?”asked Mikan „Anna 12 years old with the cooking alice” said the mind reading boy „Shut up! You possesed boy!” said Anna „anwyay if you have any intrests in Natsume or Ruka....Give up...” „Damn it! I don’t have any intrestes in anybody so please stop messing with me!” said Mikan furiously „It’s not like any of them could fall for you country-side girl” said Sumire „Shut up Permy!” „Calling me Permy again you sure are annoying!!” „Hotaru!!!where are you” said Mikan totally ignoring Sumire „Hey don’t ignore me while I’m talking to you stupid girl!”yelled Sumire... „Hotaru is in her lab” said Anna to Mikan „Oh can you show me where it is?” „sure but first wouldn’t you like something to drink?” „Oh-sure but I don’t have any money...” „Don’t worry this one is on me” said Anna „thx a lot” „Don’t worry...so how much is it” Anna asked the shopkeeper „14 rabbits” „oh here you are” „rabbits?!?” asked Mikan „ oh you see here we don’t use ordinary money,we use these kind of coins and they are called rabbits” responded Anna. „Alright so now let’s hurry up to Hotaru’s lab cause she won’t be there for ever” said Anna while they started running.As running Mikan bumped into someone and fell on the ground with the person she bumped in under her „itee...oh I’m sorrry,very very sorry” „mind getting off strawberry??” said a boy with purple hair and eyes like the crimson flame (it was Natsume) „Y-you pervert!” (just to give you a plot...she was wearing an underwear with strawberrys on it) „yeah whatever polka-dots...where do you keep your eyes when you’re running?” „hurry up Mikan” said Anna „u-uh-yeah I’m coming!” said Mikan lifting her arms up and down really fast „you look just like a stupid gorilla who thinks it could fly like a bird” said Natsume with a smirk on his face „If I would have had time I would’ve killed you now,but I gotta go to see someone more important” said Mikan smirking „yeah..whatever polka-dots” responded Natsume . So Mikan and Anna arrived at Hotaru’s lab „Hey what is she doing?” Mikan asked Anna „she’s working on her new invention I guess...” „new invention?” „yes,she has the inventing alice...it allows her to be creative & very good as an enginer...” „wow that’s expected from Hotaru” said Mikan „Oi Hotaru watcha doin?” continued Mikan „you wouldn’t understand dummy” said Hotaru „hey that’s cruel...” „anyway I gotta go to sleep now cya later dummy....”.The next day everyone was hurrying at class.The teacher entered,and Mikan was late....she overslept.After a few minutes she made her apearrence „I’m sorry I’m late”said Mikan „so you’re the new transffer student aren’t you?” „Hai Sakura Mikan nice to meet you teacher!” „Oh you can call me Narumi-sensei!” „Hai sensei” „ok then please have a seat!” „a-m ok” she said while walking near her seat and sitting down „hey polka-dots” „oh damn I forgot my seat is next to you...god what did I do wrong?” said Mikan „yeah whatever” said Natsume... „So Mikan what’s your star ranking?” asked the teacher „u-uh what?” „let me explain dummy” said Hotaru „combining the power of your alice and your behavior you get a star ranking... you can be a no star, a one star, a double star,a triple star or a special star” explained Hotaru... „wow amazing so what star rank I get” said Mikan with excitment „probably a no star polka-dots” said Natsume with a smirk on his face „shut up you pervert” „but he’s right you’re a no star Sakura-san I’m really sorry” said Narumi-sensei... „hu-uh what?I’m a tottaly looser” said Mikan... After class Mikan went in the northen forest,near a sakura tree and started crying,then suddenly Natsume appears „what are you doing here little girl?” „none of your bussines” said Mikan „oh yeah whatever...just stop crying...a girl is a more enjoyable sight when she’s smiling...” „N-Natsume...” said Mikan surprised of Natsume’s sweat words „nevermind polka-dots...” and he went away „God he makes me mad but in the same time he makes my worries dissapear...” tought Mikan smiling... It was time for the next class which was math;all the pupils went to their seats and calmly waited for the teacher.After a short time the teacher entered and the class started,Mikan was sitting next to Natsume as always „Ne Natsume...” „what polka-dots?” „stop calling me like that! My name is Mikan...anyway...thanks for earlier...it really made me feel better..” said Mikan „miss Sakura I see you’re talking about something important,how about resolving the next problem? May you come to the blackbord?” asked the teacher „u-uh Hai sensei” as Mikan walked to the blackbord a small smile appeared on Natsume’s face...Mikan considered it as a smirk...as expected Mikan didn’t had a clue of resolving the problem. „If you’re going to continue like this you’ll fail the math exam miss at least pay attention in class” said the teacher „uh yeah I’m sorry”.So the class ended with Mikan and Natsume on the cleaning duty.There was a totall silence betwen them. „God I can’t take it anymore I gotta break this silence!” tought Mikan „hey polka-dots?” „uh-what?” „may I ask you where do you keep your eyes when your doing something?” „uh-why do you ask that?” then Mikan realises that she tottaly messed up the blackbord „oh crap! This is going to take forever” said Mikan „gimme that you stupid girl!” said Natsume while starting cleaning the blackbord „uh-thanks Natsume” „whatever...” „anyway we should hurry up befo-„ suddenly the light went out and the door closed „- re they lock the classroom” said Mikan finishing her earlier sentence. „This is all your fault polka-dots!” „well don’t think I enjoy being locked with you in a classroom” said Mikan ,then Natsume made a small fire on his finger (since he has the fire alice) suddenly they could hear a little noise in the classrom and Mikan tottaly freaked out „W-What was that?!?” she asked „a mini-gorilla that came to take you back where you belong” said Natsume with a smirk on his face... „anyway it’s late so try to get some sleep” continued Natsume „demo...I’m scared...” said Mikan „guess it can’t be helped..” said Natsume while grabbing Mikan slowly in his arms...Mikan started to blush madly,but after a few moments she fell asleep same did Natsume.In the morning all their classmates were waiting in front of the door for the teacher to un-lock the door.When he did everyone was shocked of what they saw : Mikan sleeping in Natsume’s arms and Natsume sleeping while hugging her. Mikan slowly opened her eyes „What do you think you’re doing no star ?” said Sumire with a scary voice „huh Permy whatcha doin here?” said Mikan,after a few moments Natsume opened his eyes too „huh- whatcha doin polka-dotts?” then they realised in what kind of position they were and quickly let go of eachother while blushing madly.Then all the Natsume fanclub was surrounding Mikan saying „What did you two did all the night new-girl?” „uh-heh-he we were sleeping..” „I told you not to get any closer to Natsume didn’t I?” said Sumire with the same scary voice „uh-Permy wait you all misunderstood right Natsume?” said Mikan turning towards Natsume „just because no one saw,you can’t say that nothing happened” said Natsume with a smirk on his face „W-what?!?” yellled Mikan „you stupid!what do you mean by that!?!” Hotaru knocked Mikan down „dummy....” „Natsume did you really do something to Sakura-san?” asked Luka-kun „who in the right mind would do something to her?” whispered Natsume „Okay everyone please take your seats! Let’s begin class” said the teacher,so everyone walked to their seats and Mikan was sitting next Natsume as always... „Natsume why did you say that for?” whispered Mikan to Natsume „never mind just forget it” said Natsume... „So class as you know the shining star festival will begin from tomorrow and you will have 2 free days so enjoy them” as the class ended Mikan ran towards Hotaru and asked her „what’s this festival for?” „it’s for celebrating the shining stars that can be seen very well on tomorrow’s night” responded Hotaru „but there is also a legend that long ago at a sakura tree a boy and a girl we’re enjoing the shinning stars and suddenly they we’re attacked by a gang of bad people (she said so that Mikan would understand) and the boy got killed and he’s last words we’re „I love you” ,so the girl commited suicide after seeing her lover dieing.They say they met in heaven and remained togheter.So now they say that a couple that see’s the shinning stars under a sakura tree and conffeses...they’re love will last forever” said Anna „sugoi!” answerd Mikan „you didn’t get anything right dummy?”said Hotaru „hehe I got a little” said Mikan „Don’t even think of watching the shinning stars with Natsume-kun!” said Sumire „who would...” answered Mikan.The next day Mikan ran towards Hotaru’s room „Ne Hotaru wanna go somewhere since we got no classes today” „I don’t plan of ruining this beautifull day” said Hotaru „that’s cruel!” „anyway you can take that dress over there for the festival...” said Hotaru poiting to an angel dress with pink rosses on it,and pure white wings „wow sugoi!” said Mikan „don’t get so excited about it! All the girls will be wearing angel suits tonight” said Hotaru pointing to her dress that was identical to Mikan’s just that it had blue rosses „yeah but you tought about me and knew that I like pink „ „damn she figured it out...” whispered Hotaru to herself „just go to sleep cause it will be a long night!” „huh? But I just woked up” „I don’t care dummy!” „Alright,alright I’m going geez~~” said Mikan.When she woke up she find Hotaru and Anna staring at her „she sure can sleep a lot” said Anna „watcha guys doin here?” said Mikan while she was yawnin „hurry up or we’ll be late to the festival!” said Anna „oh yeah the festival!” said Mikan as she quickly dressed up „your piggy teales don’t go with this dress” said Hotaru while she let her beautifull hair free „thanks Hotaru” said Mikan.So the 3 girls we’re heading towards the outside holding festivall.Once they got there everyone was dancing. „Why are they dancing?” asked Mikan „Why did you think that we have dresses dummy?” said Hotaru „They say that the last dance is right after the shinning stars,and that’s the unic dance dedicated to lovers” said Anna „Dance with him” said Hotaru while putting Mikan and Luka-pyon hand to hand „Huh?” „It’s fine with me...” said Luka-pyon causing Mikan to blush.A few moments before the shinning stars Mikan went into the Northern forest and saw Natsume sitting under a sakura tree. „Tought you we’re there! Why aren’t you at the festival?” said Mikan „None of your bussines polka-dots...” responded Natsume,then Mikan went and sat next to him under the sakura tree... „what exaclty are the shinning stars?” asked Mikan „falling stars that fall in a row...” the stars began falling and the sky was more beautifull then ever... Mikan was watching amazed the falling stars and the next thing she knew were Natsume’s lips locked onto her’s.After 1 minute Natsume finally broke the kiss,sat up and offered his hand to Mikan „May I have this dance with you?” asked Natsume with a sweet voice... „uh-o-ok” responded Mikan.So Natsume picked Mikan’s hand and they we’re heading back to the festival...once they started dancing Hotaru,Anna and Permy we’re like „What the heck?!?”.After a few moments Luca-pyon offered his hand to Hotaru and the mind reading boy to Anna.

Posted 7/16/08
I'm still working at part 2
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Posted 7/18/08
awww. that wuz sweet!!
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Posted 7/19/08
One thing................ SUPER KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted 7/20/08
I'll post part 2 today cause I'm almost finished with it hope you'll enjoy reading it...
Posted 7/27/08
Thank you, meliss66! You're a great help!!! It was good too.
Posted 7/29/08
good. really good.!
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Posted 7/31/08
waa! so cute!
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Posted 8/1/08
nice, it was cute! u'll be a great writer if you keep this work up, hope to read ur next story soon
Posted 11/17/08
me too
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Posted 1/29/09
i'm going to read part2 immediately!
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