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Posted 7/18/08 , edited 7/18/08
kk, i wrote this one poem based on the last chapter of eclipse. I want to know what you think of it (negative or positive). (ps. if ur jake hater, just try to understand what he's going through, don't just hate on him).

Eclipse Poem - Jacob's point of view

I see her clearly in my heart
Piecing me like a sharp dart

I see her smiling at the cold one
My life is officially over, it is done

The forest is now my only home
You were my protection, my dome

Darkness creeps over my life
Heartbreak is my greatest strife

Tears aren't in your eyes
The hope you gave me was my human disguise

That one last tender kiss
Is something I'll surely miss

Beneath my feet are shards of glass
As sweet memoreis of you pass

Sadness and remorse start coming
As what's left of my human heart stops drumming
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Posted 7/18/08
WHOA!! ^i love that^ i really love ur poem!! that rocks!! i nearly cried at the end...cuz it was soo beautiful!
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Posted 7/18/08
thanx! ^__^
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Posted 7/19/08
NOO~~!!!!!!


Dont go, Jake!!!!

"Sadness and remorese start coming, As what's left of my human heart stops drumming"... that was perfect... and soo sad!!

Beautiful poem!

I cried for Jake a few times in Eclipse.... but that last chapter was so sad... and then when it said. "Maybe if I ran far enough away, I would never have to hear again...I got sooo sad....

and then the final part killed me.
"I pushed my legs faster, letting Jacob Black disappear behind me"... when I say CRIED, I cried my eyes out!

I want to see Jake soo bad~~!! I hate it when he's hurting.

When it comes to that, Im Switzerland. I love Jake and I love Edward...

Im switzerland leaning towards transylvania.

I love....
Jake: 8.5/10
Edward: 10/10


I support BellaXEdward... i really do.... but I also love the BellaXJacob....

*Sigh*



In the end, I really want Bella to become a vampire and end up with Edward.... but remain friends with Jacob who imprinted....
but I also dont like the idea of Jake imprinting... because no girl deserves him....
I just want Jake to be happy... genuinely happy... I hate seeing him when his forced happiness and acceptance is a facade.

Arghh..... Stephenie Meyer is evil. She just WANTS me to have a heart attack!
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Posted 7/19/08 , edited 7/19/08

Arghh..... Stephenie Meyer is evil. She just WANTS me to have a heart attack!


if she really wanted u 2 have a heart attack she would stop writing well not u just who would feel the pain more like about half of the world ^^
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Yuri27 wrote:


Arghh..... Stephenie Meyer is evil. She just WANTS me to have a heart attack!


if she really wanted u 2 have a heart attack she would stop writing well not u just who would feel the pain more like about half of the world ^^


Ah, thats true...
but if that actually happened... I would probably hunt her down and beg her to make me another book... (and probably get arrested XD)
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Posted 7/20/08

Rx2D wrote:


Yuri27 wrote:


Arghh..... Stephenie Meyer is evil. She just WANTS me to have a heart attack!


if she really wanted u 2 have a heart attack she would stop writing well not u just who would feel the pain more like about half of the world ^^


Ah, thats true...
but if that actually happened... I would probably hunt her down and beg her to make me another book... (and probably get arrested XD)


well im with u there if that were 2 happen ^^ ....
btw the way have u heard that breacking dawn is the last of the series from bellas point of veiw? the rest will be from edwards
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Yuri27 wrote:


Rx2D wrote:


Yuri27 wrote:


Arghh..... Stephenie Meyer is evil. She just WANTS me to have a heart attack!


if she really wanted u 2 have a heart attack she would stop writing well not u just who would feel the pain more like about half of the world ^^


Ah, thats true...
but if that actually happened... I would probably hunt her down and beg her to make me another book... (and probably get arrested XD)


well im with u there if that were 2 happen ^^ ....
btw the way have u heard that breacking dawn is the last of the series from bellas point of veiw? the rest will be from edwards


Yeah! Midnight sun <3
I read the first chapter from Meyers page!!! It was sooo good!~! I cant wait for it!
At first I was dissapointed... thinking "whats the point of that?" but now I really like the idea!! Edward is so awesome <3
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Posted 7/21/08
Wow! i loved the poem. it was so sad.
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Posted 7/21/08

Rx2D wrote:


Yuri27 wrote:


Rx2D wrote:


Yuri27 wrote:


Arghh..... Stephenie Meyer is evil. She just WANTS me to have a heart attack!


if she really wanted u 2 have a heart attack she would stop writing well not u just who would feel the pain more like about half of the world ^^


Ah, thats true...
but if that actually happened... I would probably hunt her down and beg her to make me another book... (and probably get arrested XD)


well im with u there if that were 2 happen ^^ ....
btw the way have u heard that breacking dawn is the last of the series from bellas point of veiw? the rest will be from edwards


Yeah! Midnight sun <3
I read the first chapter from Meyers page!!! It was sooo good!~! I cant wait for it!
At first I was dissapointed... thinking "whats the point of that?" but now I really like the idea!! Edward is so awesome <3


lol i read it 2 but i wish there was more chapters -_- Stephenie Meyer is a total genus when it comes 2 writing i hope she keeps on writing saga's
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Posted 7/26/08
awww that is sooooo sad and sweet!!!
i love it!!
nice one!
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Posted 7/31/08
love your poem a lot
Posted 8/2/08
aww sweet and sad at the same time! i luv it
i cant write peoms like that!
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Posted 8/2/08
<333333
Love your poem.
:DDD
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Posted 8/3/08 , edited 8/3/08
BEE-YOO-TI-FULL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i do feel sorry for jacob >.<
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