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Posted 7/18/08 , edited 7/18/08

just a teaser...episode 1 will come out within few days
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woah surprise...aegis-kun know japanese?
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now u mention it is surprising
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looks like KR Black and ZO combined.
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heh wanna ask, u use paint to edit tat image?
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Posted 7/20/08 , edited 7/20/08

djloi wrote:woah surprise...aegis-kun know japanese?

yes. i used to be a part of order of zeronos and dtfs(a fan-sub group which subbed gaki no tsukai series)
currently i'm a bit lazy to do subbing. it's maji hard..but i still continue translating j-artist blog for some ppl who request.


zafz wrote:looks like KR Black and ZO combined.

yeah, because it's design is based on real gresshoppers i saw at my workplace. both Zo n black are design based on real grasshopper too desshou ^_^ u can say it's a fusion, but i'll make another kr that is not insect based too.


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heh wanna ask, u use paint to edit tat image?

no i use arcsoft photoshop

this fiction is going to be quite heavy, but to put more interest for u guys to read it, i'll put some photos n mini comics to make it interesting. that's why it will be release quite late.
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heh tats great =)...waiting forward for this series
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Posted 7/21/08
cool man...
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oh sweet then we'll wait untill that day
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Track1: Nuevo Día

---Toot~Yo Maeda-san ohisashiburi! It's me. Hope you still recognize this voice. Seems like you're not answering this machine. Haha...it's been quite a while ne~ When is our last face to face...hmm...three? two, months ago? Well anyway, Tokyo department is sending you a new candidate for investigation department. We want you to train him since you are our best for Yokohama region. A young guy, just 2 years older than your daughter I guess. Well, that's all, regards! -Beep-
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Kanagawa, Yokohama.

Somewhere in the outskirts of Yokohama, nearby a rural area, a bunch of people crowding in front of a tall building. The noisy voices of aunties & mummies could be hear from distance along with police patrol car & fire engine sirens. "What happen?", say one old lady to a female stranger beside her. "I don't know, but I don't see the white car" - "the white car?" - "kyukyusha! the ambulance. it's not there..." - "okashi na..." - "yes, weird isn't it?"

A few meters away from the chaotic scene a man in a cyan uniform dashing towards a 40's looking man in a brown coat. "Sir, look at this!", he said. The tanned skin man grap the photos given to him. He take a quick look on them. "Um mm...from the forensics?", ask the man to the police officer. "Yes".

After satisfy analyzing the photos he hand it to another man besides him. The guy have 'CSI' written at the back of his jacket. "So what do you think?"
With a deep look, he calmly examining each photos. "Weird..very."
"Isn't it? It doesn't seem like an ordinary bomb explosion...a bomb should have destroy everything but.."
-"Yes, but this one only destroy everything around it except the place it stand."
"What do you think it might be?"
-"No idea, but we'll check it up after the firefighters finished their job".


The CSI guy hand it back to Mr.Detective. "Boy, tell the forensics I want a copy of this for Kanagawa investigation department. And I want you to get the list of victims and their contacts too," said the detective officer while hand the photo back to the young policeman.
"Roger!" The man quickly take his step for the order.
"Mr. Detective you can leave this to us. We'll contact you later if after the report is done. As soon as we can."
-"Thanks, looks like I can finally take a break. Haha...If you need me, I'll be at the office. Here's my card. I'm available till 5 or 6. For now, I guess I'll be doing a report to the chief comander".
"Okay, see you later".

Detective Maeda pick a key from his brown coat pocket. He walks into his patrol car and start it's engine. "Hmm..."
He took a glance at his watch on his left hand to confirm the time. With no rush, he pull the gear and move to his next destination.
Without suspicion, among the crowds, there's a pair of evil eyes watching him.... with a grudge within!
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In a white Mazda-87 a young female name Rin mumble alone while driving her way to the Atsugi Airport Terminal,"Ah~who would've thought it's gonna be like this? Hope everything is fine at the airport terminal. Hope the plane had landed already. Damn, I wonder which part of Kanagawa is burning badly. Does his granma ever told not to play with fire?
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"It's not an acting, it's not farce either. Reality!"
"The world is like a stage, and we are the actors"
"That's what Shakespere said. We actually.....",
The guy suddenly paused. Everyone whose watching him stop listening and continue their doing and walk away. "Oh, sorry it seems like my taxi has arrive", said the boy to and old lady with a stand supporter. "Oh, ok...bye", said another man whose jugling 3 tennis balls.
"Ah..aaa...", the boy reply with a weird look at the man. "You are very good at juggling...what's your name?"
"Godai Yousuke, yoroshiku!", reply the man with a thumb up.
"oh..okay..."
The boy pick his bags and immediately dash to the white Mazda car.
"Hey, open the boot!" he shout while knocking it.
The boot opened. He put his bag in and hurrily sit in the front passenger seat.
"That is so rude of you! Do you know how many traffic lights I have to hate to pick you?", said the girl in a pissed tone.
"Sorry rin, really. I dont know why I feel so lively today, hehehe"
-"Ohh~in this hazy & smoky clouds? It doesnt look like a good day to me. For some reason I feel like I'm having a bad omen."
"Really? Does that mean you don't want me to come here?"
The girl let herself calm down. He knew the Kai since her first visit to Malaysia during her middle-high school days for home stay. She can't barely forget those wonderful moments of her life
"Ah..never mind. So how's Hawaii? Good?"
-"Pretty...but something happen on the last day."
"Really? Did you poo in your pants?"
-"Hey, that was...11 years ago! Damn, my grandma shouldn't speak Japanese. Man, I suddenly miss durian somehow..."
"Durian stinks! I hate 'em!"
-"Anyway, just as people enjoying the concert, Waikiki by Moonlight, something seems to be happening at the Lani Kai beach. Some tourist claim they say UFO, while some local people say they say a man came out of a light. flying!"
"Darn, is that a fiction?"
-"I don't know...but something for sure, they most people say they say a light like portal between the island. The old folk says Mamata & Kamohoali is fighting!"

>>>tsuzuku...to be continued
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Posted 8/5/08
wow
nice story Aegis-senpai!^^
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Posted 8/5/08
nice i like it
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Posted 8/5/08
Lol, like one of those Crime-Scene-Type Movies with Kamen Rider.
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Posted 8/5/08

zafz wrote:

Lol, like one of those Crime-Scene-Type Movies with Kamen Rider.

yeah, like kuuga but i kinda like it. i wonder how & when the rider will appear.

i like this parts

Does his granma ever told not to play with fire?

reminds me of tendou.


"Godai Yousuke, yoroshiku!", reply the man with a thumb up.

why is he there? kuuga? lol. jugling.
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Posted 8/9/08
Real nice.Keep it up,Aegis!
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