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Track 2: The Coming

Rin: (in doubt tone)I see...so that's what happen...really...ummm...so..fiction.
Kai: It's true....Mmm...Yappari, this restaurant yakiniku is the best! Saikou da!
Kai took another peice of grilled meat with chopsticks, dip it in tare and put it in his mouth.

He gives a huge satisfied expression on his face.
Rin got irritated.

Rin: Hey, don't forget who's paying! I dont' bring much yen. Hmph!
Kai: I know, come on, join me. Are you afraid of gaining weight?
Rin: Oh, come one! (pissed)
Kai: By the way, speaking about yen. I really need to meet the money changer. My money is still in dollars.
Rin: Ahh~I wish you could drive the car yourself.
Kai: Me too. But I don't have Japanese driving license.
Rin: You owe me a lot! Finish that quick, we're going before it's 4.
Kai: Roger! Last piece!

Meanwhile, at the Kanagawa prefecture police station, Det.Maeda just arrived. After parked his car, he immediately walk into the police station. With a tired looking face, he can still throwing smiles to few people and give some 'hi' before he enter his office.

As he enters the room, he take out a small note book and a PDA out of his coat and drop them carelessly onto his working desk. He then press a button on the phone to listen any left message. While listening to them.
Maeda-san take a look at his family photo placed at the far left edge of his desk corner.
-Toot~Yo Maeda-san ohisashiburi! It's me. Hope you still recognize this voice..........Tokyo department is sending you a new candidate for investigation department.....Beep-
He gives a little sigh to himself while landing his butt onto the red chair and lazily lean his back on it. After pensive a few seconds, he turn on the computer next to him.
Bills, work, daughter, friends and fishing come playing on his mind for a moment while waiting for the windows desktop to appear on the monitor screen. Many things to think and many things to be taken care of. Sometimes he just wish to do other job but then again, he don't know what else he's good at.
His computer are ready to be used. He possessed the mouse with his right hand while looking at the monitor and move the cursor to the mailbox icon. He clicked and few reports and emails appeared before his eyes. Unexpectedly, one of them is an email from his daughter.
"Hmmm...wonder what it is this time", he says in his mind.

Dad,
A friend is coming home tonight. He's the Malaysian boy.
Remember him? He came to our house few years ago.
Anyway, He's going to stay with us for few days. Just a few days.
I've told you before about this, but I just like to
remind you again since you've seems to be very busy lately.

Ps: You're coming home today right? Rin


"Yeah, I remember, I do Rin...Yes"
After finish reading Rin's email, he open rest in his mail box and reply some of them. He took a glance on his watch. It's 3pm already. 3 hours left before he could go home and have a long rest. He realize his stomach is getting empty and his belly wants to be filled. So he finished his replies immediately and leave his desk leaving his computer in standby mode. Locked. He grab a jacket next to the coat he just wear and off from his office.
"Yamasaki, have you eat?", ask Maeda-san to one of the working officer.
"No, I need to finish this work first. Why?", ask Yamasaki.
"Come on, let's go. I'll treat", reply Maeda-san, inviting.
Without hestitation the puffy face guy stand up instantly and say "OK!" .
Other people in the department laughs.
"Heh, cheapstake!", said one of the female officer, Fukuhara-san.
"You're jealous~", reply Yamasaki stick his tounge out.

Maeda-san show a little kid alike laugh. The rest follows.
Suddenly, voice came from the front door.
"A mail to Detective Maeda!"
People suddenly change their focus.
A young police officer came in with a small box. Maeda-san get him. Yamasaki follows.
"Amano Makoto?, who's this? I don't know this sender", said Maeda-san in curiosity.
"Oh, so you are Detective Maeda? I'm the new trainee, Kato Shigeaki desu. Yoroshiku", the young man introduce himself while showing the traditional japanese bow.
All people in the department are suprise but they doesn't show it physically.
"Oh, okay...", the chief detective replied and give him a respect nod.
He immdiately open the box and there's a red envelope in it. He took it out, open the envelope and there's somthing that made he, Yamasaki & Kato-san draw a shocking impression on their face! It was a.....

Somewhere, under a bridge at the same prefecture, 7 bad looking people are gathering.
"Tonight we're gonna rock! We're gonna went wild and take over this place!", shout the gang leader.
-"Banzai!!", the rest reply, loudly.
"Bana", call the leader to the only female member.
"The mastermind trust you this ring to you, it has the power to curse any living thing, and to night your target is him!", he said while showing a photo of a middle aged man to her.
"Understood!", she replied.

"Take a very good care of it or...", he stop his words there and lift his hand like a chop to his neck and move it horizontally fast.
The female member gulp. Her body shivers but she took the ring from him and wears it.
"I also have my personaly grudge against him...so you be following me."
"Heh, seems like tonight isn't just going to be a party, it's a mission too huh?", said another member butting in the conversation.

to be continued....
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Posted 8/10/08
so...enemy and rider not appear yet?
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if u read. the eney already appear but they just dont act yet. yes, the rider haven't appear. i need to make his apprearence with more intensing situation. that's why the title is 'kizudarake' ot means 'injured/ scarred/ torned' something like that. but i'll make lot's of cameo like the appearence of KR characters.

also i'm not rushing. i want ppl to say "i can't wait for the rider to appear". something like that.
Posted 8/11/08 , edited 8/11/08

Aegis85 wrote:
i want ppl to say "i can't wait for the rider to appear"

damn, i was just about to say that!

i love this part.

"Yamasaki, have you eat?", ask Maeda-san to one of the working officer.
"No, I need to finish this work first. Why?", ask Yamasaki.
"Come on, let's go. I'll treat", reply Maeda-san, inviting.
Without hestitation the puffy face guy stand up instantly and say "OK!"

reminds me of yama-chan from gaki no tsukai!


He immdiately open the box and there's a red envelope in it. He took it out, open the envelope and there's somthing that made he, Yamasaki & Kato-san draw a shocking impression on their face! It was a.....

a what!? I want to know! a letter?


"Tonight we're gonna rock! We're gonna went wild and take over this place!", shout the gang leader.
-"Banzai!!", the rest reply, loudly.

sounds familiar...i'm imagining code geass
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the rider will appear in the 3rd chapter. which is next.
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23 / M / Guess ^^
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Posted 8/13/08
i am excited to see the rider
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Posted 8/28/08
i wonder when episode 3 will appear
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